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@,

 

Like I said multiple times before: Jack's story is engaging and fascinating, your posts well written-- One problem. This RP wasn't meant to be solely a racing RP. It's up to you to tie Jack to the main story.

 

You had a chance to play AJ, but you hemmed and hahed over Jack, whom showed a glimmer of hope of being interested in the goings on the ponyfinders, but had him get into that serious accident - which I should've said no to, to be honest - or at least  made it so that he at least wasn't all that seriously injured, which would've given Jack another chance of interacting with the others.

 

You're the one who came up with the meteorite idea in the first place; I modified it to better suit the RP, so I thank you for that contribution! We really needed it! 

 

You had a racing RP, what happened to it? Why not pick up where you left off?

Well, all things considered, I guess Jack's mother should have had an abortion. Heh.


Gotta learn stuff through denial and error.

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Well, all things considered, I guess Jack's mother should have had an abortion. Heh.

What are you even talking about? I guess Jack is a cool dude and i will probably have Dennis interact a bit more with him. Maybe he'll have some remorse for making that fuss with Rainbow and Dennis once he hears Rd aint there? Just a thought.
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@,

 

It's nothing against you personally... But that 'joke'(?) was decidedly tasteless.

 

 

But as to your questions about Jack: I agree with pretty much everything Hypno had to say

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What are you even talking about? I guess Jack is a cool dude and i will probably have Dennis interact a bit more with him. Maybe he'll have some remorse for making that fuss with Rainbow and Dennis once he hears Rd aint there? Just a thought.

 

That was my plan. Hell I wasn't even planning on having him be this obsessed. I was expecting the RP to have been able to let him finish up his racing bullshit ASAP but it ended up actually stretching out way longer than I would have expected, and the result is this.

 

@,

It's nothing against you personally... But that 'joke'(?) was decidedly tasteless.

But as to your questions about Jack: I agree with pretty much everything Hypno had to say

Not really a joke but me making an insensitive comment. A byproduct of the stress I've been under recently. Edited by ~Victorious Dale~

Gotta learn stuff through denial and error.

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@Hypn0ticD, @~Victorious Dale!~

After they send the ponies home, Charles will dissaperd as he heading to Brazil live there and get a job too. So I don’t know what Job he getting in Brazil but it will be Law Enforcement say Rio Police Officer.

Victorious come on you good at RP so don’t stop and come on you better too. So if you need take brakes then take brakes like I do.

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@@00Pony,

 

I hope ya do get a chance for your agents to wreak havoc on the rescue party! I'm dying to see what I can do with AJ's abilities, as well see how Dawn utilizes Twilight's.

 

…Maybe they could disguise themselves as cops and pull all three cars over? Or ambush 'em shortly after they do stop? Sneak into their rooms or something?

 

Just two ideas to throw at ya!

 

@,

 

I didn't know Jack wasn't supposed to be that obsessed with racing-- but since we've already gotten this far…

 

Maybe the hospital stay, and what'll transpire during the visit could be the impetus for Jack to realize just how obsessed he is, and start focusing more on what's going on, and start over when the party cones around!

 

Killing him off is just copping out!

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@@Hypn0ticD,

 

I'll try and make it decent! I kind of like the second option. If it's just a small motel or something, have them disguised as the staff perhaps? That'd be a heck of a surprise, wouldn't it?


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"Greater love, hath no man than this, that he would lay down his life for his friends." -- John 15:13

"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

Rest In Peace, Monty OumWe'll keep moving forward.

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@@Pripyat Pony, @@Dawn Stripes, @, @, @@Fireblaze,

 

I'm really tired right now, so there'sx no way I can type up a posxt  until. I've had some sleep, but here are the style ideas Colette mentioned for reference!

 

Hair Color ideas Some dress ideas for Flutters:

 

http://blondehairhg.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/Strawberry-Blonde-Hair-color.jpg

 

http://www.rr-magazine.com/images/2013/09/fall-hairstyle-ideas-new-haircuts-and-colors-youll-love_au-uc_20.jpg

 

http://ifokus-assets.se/uploads/264/264c73261cade57f1c6a8e9fd0166fd0/strawberry.jpg

 

Random hair style idea!

 

http://www.fashiondivadesign.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/03/Hairstyles-Style-Boho-Chic-9.jpg

 

And stye ideaz!

 

http://thebestfashionblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/Boho-Chic-Outfits-in-Free-People-%E2%80%98Sacred-Geometry%E2%80%99-Lookbook-5.jpg

 

http://thebestfashionblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/07/Boho-Chic-Outfits-in-Free-People-%E2%80%98Sacred-Geometry%E2%80%99-Lookbook-1.jpg

 

http://modernprairiegirl.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/06/bohochic1.jpg (image on the far right seems to be too revealing --

 

http://www.littlebohopeep.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/10/boho_chic_outfit-3_thumb.jpg

 

Style ideas for Rarity:

 

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-CuVMp5glysg/T1UmCAAC_OI/AAAAAAAADPE/8x2m2W1nELY/s1600/asygyu.JPG

 

http://img1.etsystatic.com/023/1/8233169/il_570xN.545281925_ga0q.jpg

 

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_3McOeqx99KI/TSjbYTGTaPI/AAAAAAAADCI/DEmiK0eyAAg/s1600/preppy_chic_style_inspired_by_blair_waldorf_from_gossip_girl.png

 

http://blog.kendrascott.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/GTL-preppy-AP-fashion-designer-jewelry-kendra-scott.jpg

 

Hair ideas:

 

http://blog.hairbymisstresses.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/02/auburn-hair-colors-13.jpg


@@Dawn Stripes, @, @@Pripyat Pony, @@Fireblaze, @, @,

Okay, now that I've had a bit of sleep and finished another long, unfruitful day of work, I can now attempt to try to coalesce what happened at Colette's house a bit more coherently!

Whilst Cat was chatting with Rarity, Louise showed Colette the file she acquired (?) from the junior agent. Colette has passed said file to Dennis before she changed, suggesting that they go out to visit Jack.

Fearing that the Ponies will be discovered, Dennis suggested that the Poines be disguised, to which Louise agreed.

What I tried (and failed) to convey is Colette made the suggestion that whilst they disguise themselves, Rarity and Fluttershy shouldn't have to dress like Goths to look like normal people, hence the picture suggestions. Speaking of which, I didn't realize that I only one of the pics for auburn hair, Pripyat. Lemme know if you want me to post any more!

Lastly, Victorious has been out out the loop for far too long, so I'll wait for the others to post before I F-F to the hospital, so Victorious can post again.

@@00Pony,

And for those who're involved in rescuing Chrysalis: I'm gonna have Shawn stop off at a hotel for the night, where I believe his agents will introduce themselves to the party!

I like the idea of the agents disguising themselves as the staff, 00. The rescue party won't know what hit 'em! Edited by Hypn0ticD
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@@Hypn0ticD, @@00Pony, Too much evil victory... i want Chrysalis to kick ass! Plus... they are warned and aware. Plus changelings masters of disguise and shapeshifting? It's like... trying to fool a spy by using the same techniques. It's kind of ironic.

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Sweet. XD

 

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Hey, so, I was going to lost today. Sadly that might need to wait till tomorrow :/

I seem to be making a liar of myself about posting schedules. My apologies

Edited by 00Pony

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"Greater love, hath no man than this, that he would lay down his life for his friends." -- John 15:13

"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

Rest In Peace, Monty OumWe'll keep moving forward.

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@@Hypn0ticD,

 

I will try my best to do so soon! It somewhat rides on when my texting partner falls asleep where I'll post tonight. But if not tonight, then tomorrow I shall. I swear on my honor as a writer that I shall


Xbox Live gamertag: ArgentVulpes636. 

"Greater love, hath no man than this, that he would lay down his life for his friends." -- John 15:13

"Do not judge, or you too will be judged. For in the same way you judge others, you will be judged, and with the measure you use, it will be measured to you." -- Matthew 7:1

"If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward." -- Martin Luther King Jr.

Rest In Peace, Monty OumWe'll keep moving forward.

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