visual art High school sketch

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

I drew this as my rendition of my schools main hallway.  The windows are falsified, but everything else is correct.  Also the schools name is changed.  

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Edited May 6, 2013 by Dusty Soul

[Zygen 6,066]

looks pretty good to me. I don't obviously know what your school looks like(Its not like I stalk you... Right?) but it looks as if it should be pretty accurate.

 

Not sure if theres much I can do to critique it, I guess one thing I have to say is that some of it kinda has this wobbly lined look to it, not sure if thats intentional or what, but the lines do seem a bit wobbly in places.

 

Other then that I don't notice much, good job .

[Friendship_Cannon 1,676]

Not bad, interesting idea, by the way...

Looks quite accurate (I guess xD), some of the  angles are not 100% right, but it´s a sketch, so that is 100% cool.

Nice work, keep it up!

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

looks pretty good to me. I don't obviously know what your school looks like(Its not like I stalk you... Right?) but it looks as if it should be pretty accurate.

 

Not sure if theres much I can do to critique it, I guess one thing I have to say is that some of it kinda has this wobbly lined look to it, not sure if thats intentional or what, but the lines do seem a bit wobbly in places.

 

Other then that I don't notice much, good job .

(And here I thought I was being watched...)  Actually I was somewhat going for the un-straight line look.  (I guess I pulled it off  )  Thank you!