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I stare, astounded, at the white of the petals

Amassed and radiant, flowing in the wind

Cast to and fro, to here and there, these petals

White as the light of day as it ignites the air

These petals of flowers, strange and magnificent

 

I stare, in an attempt to comprehend

By the light which glistens from their white sheen

And by the graceful arcs of their paths as they fall to the ground

For even in this, their falling, they show a true color

And swiftly, yet ever so slowly, touch upon the earth

Allowing the grace that I contemplated, to be shared

 

Among the trees and earth which holds them

These petals of white and air

Of grace and beauty which is a fondest recollection

The flowers stand amongst my gaze

 

-David Favret

 

 

 

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Oh hey! You changed your avatar to Link! :3

 

Wow! Was this about apple blossoms? I could just imagine that right on the spot! X3 Anyways, beautiful. This really brought nostalgia to me because every May I get to see my neighborhood apple tree blossom and petals flying through around my house.

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Oh hey! You changed your avatar to Link! :3

 

Wow! Was this about apple blossoms? I could just imagine that right on the spot! X3 Anyways, beautiful. This really brought nostalgia to me because every May I get to see my neighborhood apple tree blossom and petals flying through around my house.

It was actually about the pristine white flowers that grow on the tree directly outside of my bedroom window.

 

And yes, I now have Link, the greatest hero ever. :P

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