private An Unexpected Trip to the Human World (Closed!)

[The Original 571]

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Arcane nodded in understanding. He understood the concept of different languages, but everypony in Equestria spoke Equestrian. He followed Emily over to the elevator and waited. "I don't understand why you would call it something else if its practically the same thing" he said. It was like saying hair instead of mane. Most ponies called it a mane, but it was composed of hair, so some ponies called it such.

[Alex Kennedy 1,228]

 

 

Star smiled and followed Liam...until she saw another no parking sign. "What does that mean?" She asked, pointing at the sign. "Are humans on aloud to use the letter P?" She asked, frowning. "That's no fun..."

 

Liam laughed at her misinterpretation of the sign. "No, that's a 'No Parking' sign. It just means that cars aren't allowed to park here. Most of the street signs you see only refer to cars, so you don't need to bother with them. Don't worry, you can still use the letter P as much as you want."

[Commander Bubbles 1,343]

"Yeah... Like I said, long story. Anyway, yup, that's what I meant. So far as I know Twilight's only read Logan's history books, trying to get to know our past. Logan has got a decent selection of fiction too I wonder if she'd like Tolkien's works..?

 

Oh dear. Rainbow found Gears of War? Wonder how that turned out. So you're into scaring yourself then? Hahaha, personally, I prefer games with a good story, like Halo or Mass Effect for example. 

 

True, true. Yeah, almost nobody I know never really got into it. As for other places to meet up? Eeh, I dunno. I have practically no knowledge of Racine or its attractions, and from what I gathered you wouldn't be able to make/afford the half day drive all the way down here to Manheim, huh? I don't mean to pry, but am I right in assuming you're still a student? If you could list some places in Racine, I could pass it along to Logan and Twi, and let you guys know what we come up with!

 

Hmmm, she had mentioned they were in some sort of fight before they ended up here, I think. Maybe the one who sent them got drafted here to? (I am shrugging as I speak). But OK, sounds like a plan! I'll let the others know what we've come up with, and await your reply.

 

RE: P.S., Wait, really? That's pretty funny. Not as far as I'm aware, but then again I haven't had much more interaction with her other than sitting and talking.

 

--Angie."

 

She glanced around at the others. Twilight was sitting quietly by, Logan and Sam were debating, it seemed like something along the lines of Logan defending his not needing cable or Netflix or whatever, since he prefers the outdoors anyway, and Sam trying to convince him he does. Angie rolls her eyes and snaps her fingers at them, "Hey, if you two ladies could stop arguing, I've got some more. Logan, Hypno's decided to suggest meeting up someplace else, instead of a race, since they say they probably wouldn't be able to afford it. Hopefully in the next reply they'll be able to list some other places you could possibly meet up."

 

Logan shrugged, "Alright, but did you mention one of the racers probably knows where Applejack is?"

 

Angie looked at him for a few seconds longer before swiftly typing up another message, "Bah! almost forgot!(which means I totally forgot but then Logan reminded), the reason they were looking at a race was because one of racers might know something about the location of Applejack, another of Rainbow and Twilight's friends, but we can discuss this later if need be."

 

 

 

(OOC: Got it.)

Twilight Sparkle read the email along with the rest of the group, and when she recalled that NASCAR driver Jack Preybird knew about Applejack, she wondered if there was a way to reach out to him. "Say, on Jack's website," Twilight asked, "is there any contact information on his website? Perhaps we could get in contact with him!"

[The-Master 1,176]

@@Pripyat Pony, 

 

Murray actually hadn't thought of that, he used it more as an excuse to take his leave. There were plenty of places to eat here, but he couldn't just take her to some fast food joint, although they were in abundance. "You'll find out soon." Alright, he had to think quickly, where could he take a girl that wouldn't come across as cheap or tacky.This was almost beginning to sound like a real date.

[IridscentNionios 1,420]

@@Meteorite, She was surprised by the tittle to say the least. "Do the humans know about us?" She soon discovered that the movie did not concern the changelings at all. It was about a mother and her child... the child got lost stupidly lured by a stranger. However it was when the police "claimed" to have found her child that the real thing started... the mother's instinct and her knowledge of the child did not allow her to accept even an immitation of the child. The corrupt police force reminded her of how she and the changelings twisted the truth and strangely... she found herself angry at it. She hated that some people twisted the truth... but at the end of the movie she was crying because she realised that she and her kind was causing all this pain. She never had the chance of seeing it through their eyes... and the truth hurt and it hurt much. "I...*sob* I... i am so sorry... so god-damn sorry."

[Hypn0ticD 1,213]

@@Dawn Stripes

 

((I'm assuming Rainbow's referring to how humans know so much about her as a Pony. Please correct me if I'm wrong! And also, don't you mean Hearth's Warming??))

 

Fuck! Colette knew that question was coming, and she wasn't sure how well Rainbow would take it. Okay. Deep breath, then lay it on 'er! Just like a tactical nuke that'll shatter her world! Nothing to worry about!

 

Colette did as she mentally instructed herself to do, and took a very deep breath. "The reason some people know you so well as a Pony is because in this world, you're… You, and all of your friends are from a show called My Little Pony. I think it's also called Friendship is Magic, but I'm not sure." Pausing a moment to gather her thoughts, she continued. "The show is aimed at little girls my sister's age, but it attracted the attention of a much older audience. Most of this audience are referred to as Bronies, and most of them are older than we are. I know next to nothing about the show itself, because I've never watched it." Colette then took another pause to glance at Rainbow. "I'm sorry, but that's all I know." Colette turned her gaze back to the road, watching the cross traffic. She remained quiet so Rainbow could take in this potentially devastating news.

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

"I've probably got a t-shirt packed away somewhere," Jack responded, "I'll just have you use that or something. And yeah, this is going to be the first time I've had another girl sleep in bed with me. It has gotten quite lonely with just me in the hotel room. The rest of the crew has their own rooms elsewhere."

"Well... then I must make your night absolutely magnifique." Catherine turned to face Jack and put her hand on his shoulder.

 

((Really sorry for the wait and for the short post. I was out all day and now I have writer's block. So, at least for this one, you'll have to deal with a short post.))

[Commander Bubbles 1,343]

"Well... then I must make your night absolutely magnifique." Catherine turned to face Jack and put her hand on his shoulder.

((Really sorry for the wait and for the short post. I was out all day and now I have writer's block. So, at least for this one, you'll have to deal with a short post.))

(OOC: Don't worry about it. We all get writer's block)

 

Jack felt her hand on his shoulder, feeling the warmth of her hand. Jack pulled his car into the parking lot at the Crowne Plaza, and after checking Catherine in, headed up to his room with Catherine.

"Quite a nice hotel here," Jack said to Catherine, "We've got multiple beds in the room, but I don't think we'll need those extra beds."

[00Pony 286]

Twilight Sparkle read the email along with the rest of the group, and when she recalled that NASCAR driver Jack Preybird knew about Applejack, she wondered if there was a way to reach out to him. "Say, on Jack's website," Twilight asked, "is there any contact information on his website? Perhaps we could get in contact with him!"

 

Sam snapped his fingers, and pointed at her, "Yes, that's right. There probably was. Angie?"

 

Angie nodded, and was about to type in the URL for Jack's website when she gave Logan a look. He raised an eyebrow at her before she lifted the laptop up to him, putting on an imitation Irish accent, "Would you kindly put it in? I have no idea what the site is."

 

"... OK." Logan said, taking the computer and balancing it on one arm, typing with the other and selecting the website before handing it back to Angie, "There you go."

 

"Much obliged!" She said, losing the accent after saying it, "OK, contact... annnd now to type another message."

 

"Hello! OK, so, you will have absolutely know clue who I am, but I understand that you've come into contact with somebody named Applejack? Just under the assumption you don't know, she's a character from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I'm sorry if I assumed wrong. Anyway, if you're wondering how I know this, or just who the hell I am, I will answer these questions here:

 

My name is Angie. A friend of mine, a guy named Logan Kieffer, recently found a young woman claiming to be Twilight Sparkle, another character from MLP. Twi had a dream or something that told her that her friend Applejack was within the vicinity of a racer going by the name 'Red Talon', and from what I understand, that's you. Logan's promised to help Twi locate her friends, all of whom we believe have been sent here as well. If you don't believe me, I can show you a picture of Twilight as proof, and trust me, no matter how much it seems like it is, it isn't 'shopped. Logan took it, and trust me, he has no clue how to use Photoshop. Anyway, if you know anything about AJ's location, could you please respond and let us know? 

 

--Angie"

[Meteorite 16]

@nioniosbbbb

David quickly glanced over to chrysalis to see that she was sobbing “oh shit” he muttered as he ran over to turn off the television. He then turn around and walk over to her and got on one knee he saw that she was sobbing she was saying that was sorry he gently pulled down her hands from her face “hey… hey what’s wrong why are you crying and…saying that you’re sorry” he said softly. He tried to put it as gently as possible given her condition he didn’t want this to escalate. He had never been in a position like this before he wondered why she was crying he stared at her with worry that he might have had something to do with it.

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

(OOC: Don't worry about it. We all get writer's block)

Jack felt her hand on his shoulder, feeling the warmth of her hand. Jack pulled his car into the parking lot at the Crowne Plaza, and after checking Catherine in, headed up to his room with Catherine.

"Quite a nice hotel here," Jack said to Catherine, "We've got multiple beds in the room, but I don't think we'll need those extra beds."

Jack walked Catherine up to his room. She looked around the room and said, "This is a very nice room. It must be pretty expensive." She pulled him over to the bed and laid down with him. "This is going to be a great night..."

 

**FADE TO BLACK**

 

The Next Morning

 

((Just wanna say, I would never do this on a first date, but for the purposes of an accelerated character relationship development, this is what you get))

[IridscentNionios 1,420]

@@Meteorite,She whiped her tears but there were still some visible on her face. She held his hand for support, the movie had finished for the most part but the feelings were still there. "I've been a terrible person... to all of them the ponies i mean. I've never had a chance to see how it feels when your child is replaced, when the truth you see is twisted like a bad joke, and you know what? I make it happen... all of it. I organize it like the web of the spider. I wish... i wish i had a choice other than this. I promise you i'm gonna find a way... now that i'm no longer blind to the truth." 

[Miss Light Diamond 2,802]

Liam laughed at her misinterpretation of the sign. "No, that's a 'No Parking' sign. It just means that cars aren't allowed to park here. Most of the street signs you see only refer to cars, so you don't need to bother with them. Don't worry, you can still use the letter P as much as you want."

 

Star laughed. "Yes, I think that make's more sense." She said, smiling. "So...does everypony...I mean...everyone own a car here?" She asked, watching an old car drive by her and Liam.

 

 

@, 

 

Arcane nodded in understanding. He understood the concept of different languages, but everypony in Equestria spoke Equestrian. He followed Emily over to the elevator and waited. "I don't understand why you would call it something else if its practically the same thing" he said. It was like saying hair instead of mane. Most ponies called it a mane, but it was composed of hair, so some ponies called it such.

 

Emily chuckled. "I suppose zat's true. Zere are a few minor differences. Like 'ow we pronounce sings. But if you get down to it...ze language is pretty much ze same." She said, as the elevator dinged and the doors opened. She stepped in and gestured for Arcane to join her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

(BAI EVERYPONY. Seriously though...I will try to keep track of things but I dunno...I may or may not get a post in...often...we will see...Booooooold text)

[Alex Kennedy 1,228]

 

 

Star laughed. "Yes, I think that make's more sense." She said, smiling. "So...does everypony...I mean...everyone own a car here?" She asked, watching an old car drive by her and Liam.

 

Liam shrugged. "Well... not everybody, I suppose, but pretty much all adults do. At least, in most countries. In poorer or less advanced countries, that isn't the case. But generally it's safe to assume pretty much everyone has a car, or at least has access to one. Although I actually don't myself. When you live in a big city like this, parking is expensive and it's easier just to walk or use public transportation because of traffic." 

[Meteorite 16]

@nioniosbbbb

David looked her for a moment before uttering a sentence and smiling even to what she had said “And I’ll await the day that you do” he said as he stood up. As he return with a tissue for chrysalis heard a knock from  the door assuming it was the pizza man he grabbed his wallet when he open the door and it was indeed the pizza man he paid for the food and brought into the kitchen. He set the table for the both of them he walks over to chrysalis and grabs her hand leading her to the table and helps her with her seat. He sat next to her and being the polite man he was he said “enjoy”.    

[IridscentNionios 1,420]

@@Meteorite, She tried it. The heat of the melting cheese and the new tastes brough a little change in her mood and she begun regretting her lapse to sorrow and her emotional burst. It was just a movie afterall right? But to her it felt real, the lesson learned felt good the pain she had. The food lifted her mood thats for sure... and she was happier of sorts. She was happy of sorts however that she could feel pain... and pain opened a whole load of other emotions to her. 
"If we numb ourselves to the pain, we will numb ourselfs to joy, hapiness... even love. We have to take the good with the bad... but it's better than feeling nothing at all." what it that she just now discovered herself? She wondered if inside her own will to help her changelings... she lost herself in the way. Just as she finished eating it was then that either someone outside or perhaps David himself opened the radio, she didn't notice exactly but it was the song that played next that forced a tidal wave of newfound emotions to her. 
((This might sound like godmodding but i hope its not. *wink*))
"And now for a good old love-dance song. Enjoy!" said the broadcast to the listeners. Before she knew it she was standing... and she blushed embarrased at her move, but her eyes still looked at him for a response.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B8UeeIAJ0a0

[Commander Bubbles 1,343]

Sam snapped his fingers, and pointed at her, "Yes, that's right. There probably was. Angie?"

 

Angie nodded, and was about to type in the URL for Jack's website when she gave Logan a look. He raised an eyebrow at her before she lifted the laptop up to him, putting on an imitation Irish accent, "Would you kindly put it in? I have no idea what the site is."

"... OK." Logan said, taking the computer and balancing it on one arm, typing with the other and selecting the website before handing it back to Angie, "There you go."

 

"Much obliged!" She said, losing the accent after saying it, "OK, contact... annnd now to type another message."

 

"Hello! OK, so, you will have absolutely know clue who I am, but I understand that you've come into contact with somebody named Applejack? Just under the assumption you don't know, she's a character from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I'm sorry if I assumed wrong. Anyway, if you're wondering how I know this, or just who the hell I am, I will answer these questions here:

 

My name is Angie. A friend of mine, a guy named Logan Kieffer, recently found a young woman claiming to be Twilight Sparkle, another character from MLP. Twi had a dream or something that told her that her friend Applejack was within the vicinity of a racer going by the name 'Red Talon', and from what I understand, that's you. Logan's promised to help Twi locate her friends, all of whom we believe have been sent here as well. If you don't believe me, I can show you a picture of Twilight as proof, and trust me, no matter how much it seems like it is, it isn't 'shopped. Logan took it, and trust me, he has no clue how to use Photoshop. Anyway, if you know anything about AJ's location, could you please respond and let us know?

 

--Angie"

Jack walked Catherine up to his room. She looked around the room and said, "This is a very nice room. It must be pretty expensive." She pulled him over to the bed and laid down with him. "This is going to be a great night..."

**FADE TO BLACK**The Next Morning

((Just wanna say, I would never do this on a first date, but for the purposes of an accelerated character relationship development, this is what you get))

The next morning, Jack woke up with Catherine by his side. He'd never quite experience anything like that before.

"Morning," he said to Catherine, kissing her on the forehead and nuzzling with her. Jack pulled out his phone and checked his email. He saw a message from a woman named Angie, a message about Applejack. He read the message, and learned that there was another pony that was in the care of a police officer named Logan.

"Red Talon's my nickname," Jack responded to the email, "and I'm currently with a girl who knows of the whereabouts of Applejack. We're at the hotel at the moment, and when I drop her off back at her home, I'll be sure to send you guys a picture. Don't worry, I do believe you, as Applejack is in San Diego. I've seen her with my own eyes. Sorry for the rather late reply, as I've been busy with racing and all." Jack sent the email, hoping for a speedy reply.

"Catherine," Jack asked, "Do you know where Applejack is? I just got a message from a woman named Angie who claims to have Twilight Sparkle, one of her friends."

Edited May 31, 2013 by Red Talon

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

The next morning, Jack woke up with Catherine by his side. He'd never quite experience anything like that before.

"Morning," he said to Catherine, kissing her on the forehead and nuzzling with her. Jack pulled out his phone and checked his email. He saw a message from a woman named Angie, a message about Applejack. He read the message, and learned that there was another pony that was in the care of a police officer named Logan.

"Red Talon's my nickname," Jack responded to the email, "and I'm currently with a girl who knows of the whereabouts of Applejack. We're at the hotel at the moment, and when I drop her off back at her home, I'll be sure to send you guys a picture. Don't worry, I do believe you, as Applejack is in San Diego. I've seen her with my own eyes. Sorry for the rather late reply, as I've been busy with racing and all." Jack sent the email, hoping for a speedy reply.

"Catherine," Jack asked, "Do you know where Applejack is? I just got a message from a woman named Angie who claims to have Twilight Sparkle, one of her friends."

((Oh yeah, very busy with racing XP))

 

"Good morning." Catherine rolled over and put her arm around Jack and pulled herself closer to him. "Hmm? Applejack? Oh right, she's at my house." She looked up into his eyes and smiled. "Thank you again for taking me out yesterday. I had a great time."

[Commander Bubbles 1,343]

((Oh yeah, very busy with racing XP))

"Good morning." Catherine rolled over and put her arm around Jack and pulled herself closer to him. "Hmm? Applejack? Oh right, she's at my house." She looked up into his eyes and smiled. "Thank you again for taking me out yesterday. I had a great time."

"I had a great time last night as well," Jack responded, kissing Catherine again. "With Applejack, I just got an email from a woman who claims to know Twilight Sparkle, who was also transported into this world. Now we should somehow get Applejack and Twilight in a conversation, like Skype or something. There's 4 others somewhere in the world, and we've gotta find them somehow and get them back into their world."

[~The Snowy Wolf~ 1,579]

"I had a great time last night as well," Jack responded, kissing Catherine again. "With Applejack, I just got an email from a woman who claims to know Twilight Sparkle, who was also transported into this world. Now we should somehow get Applejack and Twilight in a conversation, like Skype or something. There's 4 others somewhere in the world, and we've gotta find them somehow and get them back into their world."

"Oui! Lets go save the world," Catherine said as she raised a fist into the air, then dropped it down and continued, "... later." She closed her eyes and buried her head in his chest. "Sérieusement, il est sept heures et demie du matin. Donnez-moi un peu de temps à se réveiller!" After a look of confusion from Jack, she remembered he didn't understand a word of French. "I said, it's 7:30. Give me some time to wake up please."

[Dawn Stripes 301]

@@Hypn0ticD,

(OOC: Oh, wow. Sorry. Normally on top o' that sort of thing)
 

"Uh...yeah, I totally...nope." Rainbow watched the road go by--Racine seemed like a pretty boring town, just like every town was, except that it was filled with humans. She didn't know what she'd been expecting, of course--of course the town would be full of humans. Colette had made it pretty clear there were a lot of ponies around these parts. But there were only humans.

"So there's a traveling show about me and my friends? Like, a circus act or something? But...for little fillies?" She frowned. She'd seen a traveling show of course, Trixie's, but it hadn't included any impersonations. "How did that happen? Did someone hear about the Elements of Harmony here and decide to make a show about them?"

 

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@,

And now things got even worse. When Magneus went through, it became pretty clear Aly had been right about what he thought of Fluttershy. ANd now Aly was in tears, all because of her, and it broke her heart.

She couldn't stand the feeling of powerless when her friends were down and she couldn't cheer them up. She rubbed her temples--just like Sony had mentioned today, a mare who's brought Fluttershy all her working dogs once had had a conversation about Fluttershy's cutie mark. She'd said she didn't think it had as much to do with animals as it did with caring.

So that's what Fluttershy did. First she gave Aly a hug, because any pony without ice in their blood would immediately hug anyone who was crying their heart out the way Aly was. Then she gently tugged on her until she got the girl off the floor and onto the couch, where she quickly fetched a throw blanket and some pillows in case she wanted to be comfortable.

Rifling through the cupboads, she found some packs of instant hot chocolate and made it. Perfect. From what she'd seen so far, chocolate had the same effect on human woman as it did mares, maybe more so. So she brought out a steaming cup piled with marshmallows and set it on the coffee table near Aly's head. And then she just sat there, on the arm rest. Being there. For the rest of the night.

[00Pony 286]

The next morning, Jack woke up with Catherine by his side. He'd never quite experience anything like that before.

"Morning," he said to Catherine, kissing her on the forehead and nuzzling with her. Jack pulled out his phone and checked his email. He saw a message from a woman named Angie, a message about Applejack. He read the message, and learned that there was another pony that was in the care of a police officer named Logan.

"Red Talon's my nickname," Jack responded to the email, "and I'm currently with a girl who knows of the whereabouts of Applejack. We're at the hotel at the moment, and when I drop her off back at her home, I'll be sure to send you guys a picture. Don't worry, I do believe you, as Applejack is in San Diego. I've seen her with my own eyes. Sorry for the rather late reply, as I've been busy with racing and all." Jack sent the email, hoping for a speedy reply.

"Catherine," Jack asked, "Do you know where Applejack is? I just got a message from a woman named Angie who claims to have Twilight Sparkle, one of her friends."

 

Angie threw her arms in the air in a small moment of triumph, again, nearly smacking Logan who was still leaning over the couch behind her, after which he finally decided it would be a good idea to move, "And what exactly was that all about?" He asks.

 

Angie responds to him as she types, "Just got a reply from Jack. I love conveniently timed internet things."

 

"Aaah, I see. Anyway, cool! Awesome (about getting a pic of AJ), I'll attach the picture of Twilight in this message, just to be fair. Ooh, San Diego? That's a bit of a trek, considering we're on the east coast, but hey, that's why we created cars and stuff. Meeah, don't worry about it, I understand.

 

--Angie."

 

 

(OOC: Just feel like throwing this out there despite it having absolutely nothing to do with the goings on: Angie's a few months younger than Logan (making her 20, while he is 21), while Sam is 23.)

[Commander Bubbles 1,343]

"Oui! Lets go save the world," Catherine said as she raised a fist into the air, then dropped it down and continued, "... later." She closed her eyes and buried her head in his chest. "Sérieusement, il est sept heures et demie du matin. Donnez-moi un peu de temps à se réveiller!" After a look of confusion from Jack, she remembered he didn't understand a word of French. "I said, it's 7:30. Give me some time to wake up please."

Angie threw her arms in the air in a small moment of triumph, again, nearly smacking Logan who was still leaning over the couch behind her, after which he finally decided it would be a good idea to move, "And what exactly was that all about?" He asks.

 

Angie responds to him as she types, "Just got a reply from Jack. I love conveniently timed internet things."

 

"Aaah, I see. Anyway, cool! Awesome (about getting a pic of AJ), I'll attach the picture of Twilight in this message, just to be fair. Ooh, San Diego? That's a bit of a trek, considering we're on the east coast, but hey, that's why we created cars and stuff. Meeah, don't worry about it, I understand.

 

--Angie."

 

 

(OOC: Just feel like throwing this out there despite it having absolutely nothing to do with the goings on: Angie's a few months younger than Logan (making her 20, while he is 21), while Sam is 23.)

"Ne toropites," Jack responded, "That's Russian for 'take your time.'" Jack kissed her again on the lips, and cuddled closer to her. When they finally did wake up, Jack realized he still had to respond to that email.

"I do have a pilot's license," Jack responded in the message, "certified with planes from Cessnas to Learjet business jets. I could try to fly down with the team jet and pick you guys up or something. It will be faster than driving a car, and less expensive than buying airline tickets. What do you think?"

Edited May 31, 2013 by Red Talon

[00Pony 286]

"Oooh nice! Logan's oldest brother's a 2nd Lieutenant in the Air Force... except he's a cyber warfare operative and not a pilot. Anyways, that's beside the point. I'll pass it along to Logan and the others, see what they think, then get back to you with more details. 

 

--Angie."

 

She glances around at the others, "So! Apparently Jack has a pilots license, and he says he would be able see about flying down here to pick us up in his team's jet, as it's quicker than driving and cheaper than paying airfare. What do you think?"

 

"Did you tell him about Rainbow being in Racine?" Sam asks, crossing his arms and raising an eyebrow.

 

Angie waves a hand at him, "No, but I will in my next reply!"

 

Logan shrugs, "Being my father's son, I'm always up for getting to a destination faster and cheaper than normal, so if it's alright with Twilight, I don't see anything wrong with it."

[The Original 571]

@,

 

Arcane took a second to review the automatic opening doors. "See? You have magic. These doors couldn't just open on their own without it" he said with a smile and stepped into the elevator. The doors closed and there was a panel of what looked to be numbers. "Uh... so... is this where you live? In this... tiny room?" he questioned.

@@Dawn Stripes,

 

Aly looked up and over at the hot chocolate, but it wouldn't make a difference. "Chocolate can't help me, this is true sorrow..." she said between sobs. She was glad Fluttershy was trying to help her, but Fluttershy couldn't fix this. "I've just ruined my chance with him. After 11 years you would think i could be able to tell him before all of this..." she said, but this time she didn't have to force it through sobs. "I know this might seem a bit messed up, but... if i wasn't a Christian, i would have-..." she was ready to say something, but stopped herself. It would just make Fluttershy feel worse, and she didn't want that to happen. Aly turned away from Fluttershy and tried to fall asleep.