open The sound of rebellion

[synangel 25]

The pony crimson punched was another distraction, but this time the other rouges attack crimson.

 

The real thunder ran through the streets of canterlot with jake and three guards. Each time a patrol of solar guards spotted them, a wall of earth appeared stopping they're tracks.

[longgone 873]

Golden Age looked on at the battle.

 

"Ballyhooly...have 5th company on standby, would you?" he asked without turning to look at the pony.

 

He heard a brief acknowledgement and continued to look on at the wartime spectacle. He assume the battle would be a victory, but he could never be sure.

[Fireblaze 16]

The guards on the walls shot at the rebels with bows and arrows.

 

Tempest smirked. "This ends now." He said, as he fired multiple aura spheres into the crowds of rebels. "You shall not pass!" He yelled.Tempest then noticed Thunder and growled. "You!" He said, as he charged at and rammed into said pegesus.

 

Dash looked at Blaze. "I'm sorry you had to go through that." She said. The rainbow maned pegesus then gave Blaze a friendly hug.

“Thanks Rainbow Dash.” Then Fireblaze knew something wrong too. “Sole something going in Canterlot.”

*

Then Skull with Futtershy trying keep her safe as he was defending her and punching a NLR Rouge. “Levee my love alone.”

*

Then Blade with Applejack fighting the NLR Rouges too.

(Hay Dark have Applejack and Futtershy helping Blade and Skull)

[Drago Ryder 641]

Tempest landed on the ground as his aura made him disapper and reappered in the main hall of the palace. "Now, I just have to wait." He said, as he sat down on the throne. Tempest then made his aura recede into his body.

 

Dark flew above the clouds as she watched the battle. "This is pointless." She thought. "Ponies die on both sides of this fight.

 

Applejack rammed into a few of the guards. "I can fight to, ya know." She said, smiling.

 

Fluttershy started down some of the guards, freezing them in their place. "Don't mess with me or my friends, you got that?" She yelled.

[RAGESTAR 479]

The pony crimson punched was another distraction, but this time the other rouges attack crimson.

The real thunder ran through the streets of canterlot with jake and three guards. Each time a patrol of solar guards spotted them, a wall of earth appeared stopping they're tracks.

Crimson cursed and growled in anger as the rouges attacked him, before easily dispatching them with a burst of flames, "THUNDER YOU COWARD! COME BACK AND FACE ME LIKE A REAL STALLION!!" Yelled crimson in rage before his body was covered in black flames, "VOIDSTAR!!" Yelled crimson angrily before flitting infront of both jake and thunder, "if you want to go any further, then one of you are gonna have to fight me......unless your afraid that is..." said crimson mockingly.

[Mephisto 56]

Jake had an idea. He knew that to end this stupid war, he had something. He looked at Thunder and Dark. "Get me to the palace! I know what to do!! We need to end this all now!" He said walking toward the castle. He dispatched each and every guard that attacked him nonlethally.

[~Sole~ 852]

Sole concentrated for a minute, realising the uprising had begun. "Dammit, the war has started, we need to get there fast!" He growled, as he flew away at blistering speeds "c'mon guys, hurry!" He called back.

 

Armageddon watched the rebellion quietly, the cries of pain and anguish were music to his ears. "Just a little further, almost to the princesses... and their deaths." He said happily, as he watched from the shadows.

[synangel 25]

Crimson cursed and growled in anger as the rouges attacked him, before easily dispatching them with a burst of flames, "THUNDER YOU COWARD! COME BACK AND FACE ME LIKE A REAL STALLION!!" Yelled crimson in rage before his body was covered in black flames, "VOIDSTAR!!" Yelled crimson angrily before flitting infront of both jake and thunder, "if you want to go any further, then one of you are gonna have to fight me......unless your afraid that is..." said crimson mockingly.

Thunder shrugged, a stone spire came up and hit crimson in the chin. Then a wall of stone appeared blocking crimson from thunder and jake. The wall then grew spikes all over it. "Thank you stone heart" he said before going the other way to the canterlot castle

[Fireblaze 16]

Tempest landed on the ground as his aura made him disapper and reappered in the main hall of the palace. "Now, I just have to wait." He said, as he sat down on the throne. Tempest then made his aura recede into his body.

 

Dark flew above the clouds as she watched the battle. "This is pointless." She thought. "Ponies die on both sides of this fight.

 

Applejack rammed into a few of the guards. "I can fight to, ya know." She said, smiling.

 

Fluttershy started down some of the guards, freezing them in their place. "Don't mess with me or my friends, you got that?" She yelled.

  if my dad alive then he will give me some advice how to get this crowd to clam down.” Fireblaze saying as he was flying with Rainbow Dash.

 

“I know love and I am helping you too.” Then Blade slash 4 NLR members as he trying fight too. “YOU idoits need to stop Luna and

Celestia are ruling Equestira togever so stop this now!”

 

“Way go love.” Skull saying as he did a Round house kick to a NLR member and then there Animals Friends helping them beat up some of the NLR members too.

Edited June 22, 2013 by Fireblaze

[RAGESTAR 479]

Thunder shrugged, a stone spire came up and hit crimson in the chin. Then a wall of stone appeared blocking crimson from thunder and jake. The wall then grew spikes all over it. "Thank you stone heart" he said before going the other way to the canterlot castle

Crimson scoffed at thunders attempt to use the spike to hurt him, "I see you don't relly remember the effects of voidstar.....here, let me jog your memory..." said crimson before easily breaking through the wall using pressure and flitting infront of thunder before grabbing him by the face and releasing 10,000 pounds of pressure onto his head, crimson

Smiled evilly, "stop acting like I'm not worth your time..." said crimson darkly.

[~Sole~ 852]

(Umm blaze... that's dark, not dash...))

Sole quickly left the others behind as he flew to the castle, dodging attacks and debris as he went. He soon reached the castle and quicky flew through a window, after a minute of searching he found the princesses. "Listen, we need to get you out of here, the enemy is coming!" He said quickly.

[Drago Ryder 641]

Tempest glanced at Sole. "Sorry, but the princesses are in another castle." He said, smiling.

 

Fluttershy blushed. "Thank you." She said, as she knocked another NLR rouge unconcious. "I just hope this ends soon."

 

Applejack smirked and hogtied another rebel. "They just keep coming." She said.

 

(Sole, the princesses are in a bunker underneath Canterlot that only a few ponies know about.)

[Mephisto 56]

Jake walks up to the palace doors and sees a padlock on it. "Son of a-" he says before laughing lightly. He pulls out his sword and breaks the lock. He puts Revolution across his back. He swings open the doors and walks through. "Wait!! I have proof that Celestia shouldn't rule. With, or without somepony else."

[Drago Ryder 641]

Temoest glanced at Jake and rolled his eyes. He then stood up and trotted towards Jake. "Give me one good reason not to blast you out of this room." He said, as his aura surrounded him. "Give me one iota of evidence that suggests that Celestia is incapable of ruling Equestria."

[Mephisto 56]

"Well first, if you blasted me with anything, I'd barely be phased." He joked. He then reached into his pockets and pulled out the same two notarized letters he'd shown to Dark. He handed one to Tempest. "This is a note found on a guard when I was a colt. It has concise orders to destroy my home village to take down one thief." He handed the other letter to him. "This is the bribery letter I got when she found that I'd survived. Both have the princesses seal, the one that only SHE can use."

[Fireblaze 16]

Tempest glanced at Sole. "Sorry, but the princesses are in another castle." He said, smiling.

 

Fluttershy blushed. "Thank you." She said, as she knocked another NLR rouge unconcious. "I just hope this ends soon."

 

Applejack smirked and hogtied another rebel. "They just keep coming." She said.

 

(Sole, the princesses are in a bunker underneath Canterlot that only a few ponies know about.)

(I edit it)

Then Fireblaze arrive too and looking at Jake as he look at Tempest. “So did you start the party with out us?”

 

Blade smiles as he did a tirple Round house kick to the NLR Face and then punch one coming towards him.

 

Skull head butt another NLR Rouge while helping his girlfriend and his pet Berry pecking at NLR Rouge Head.

[Drago Ryder 641]

Tempest threw the notes to the side."Even if it was that simple, what in her name makes you think Luna even wants to rule? Have you ever asked her what she wants?" He yelled. The cyan pegesus then shot a aura sphere at the letters. "Have you ever stopped to bloody consider that maybe killing Celestia would bring back Nightmoon Moon,due to the psychological damage that would come from the death of her sister?"

Edited June 22, 2013 by Dark Opal

[TheBreech 91]

 

(Oh god... 68 updates... I can not make through this RP... Sorry bro. This time, my post is a Byakuya reference XP)

Cosmo didn't know how to react to anything around him. "A civil broke out... Crimson murdered some girls mother... Canterlot is in a riot... And all in the first few minutes of my return... Alright Discord, I'm leaving..." Cosmo thought as Crimson ran off. He sent a message with telepathy, "I'm sorry friend but I can't stay. I'm honor bound to support Luna but I can't oppose Celestia like this so I must leave this fight. Good luck, and stay alive or I'll ressurect your sorry flank so I can kill you myself." Cosmo grinned at the message but his smile faded as more guards appeared and started to attack him, "Easy! I just came back a long trip and got an update about recent and semi recent events. I'm not involved and indecision would ensure I stay that way but I'm leaving while I still can. Unless you want a trained assassin to stick around?" The guards clearly didn't want anymore problems and one of them recognized Cosmo, so a pair of them escorted him out of the city while the others dealt with the rioters. "Sweet Luna, I hope this resolves quickly..." Cosmo thought as he left for an undecided amount of time.

Edited June 22, 2013 by TheBreech

[~Sole~ 852]

Sole sighed as he saw jake's letter "so, this is nothing but a stupid game of revenge for your family?" He said angrily "that is the most selfish... listen, do you realy think your family would want all this death and destruction to happen? Because its not gonna change anything." He said carefully.

[Mephisto 56]

"I never specifically said that I wanted Luna to rule. I never said that I would kill Celestia. The NLR was just a means to an end." Jake said as he growled slightly. "We could've found a new ruler to take her place. Celestia needs to answer for her crimes though. By the way, those notes were keepsakes. I had em enchanted." He said pulling the exact same notes from his pocket.

 

"This isn't about revenge anymore. It's about the right thing. If you feel that someone that could kill their own subjects deserves to be the ruler, then you're horrible." He said with disgust.

Edited June 22, 2013 by Rein Dun

[Fireblaze 16]

Then Fireblaze went back to his mountain, then open a secret door as a Book was there, then he grab the book and flew back to Canterlot. As he land and then he give Jake the book. “Read this my Farther found out who is the true culprit who sent that Fake Note and he know it wasn’t Celestia.”

[Drago Ryder 641]

Tempest's eye twitched. "That's it. I have had enough of this." He said, darkly. The cyan pegesus's aura swirled around him violently as his eyes glowed red. Tempest was then lifted off the ground. His aura formed a see through ball around his body.The cyan pegesus was completely overtaken by the power of his aura.

Edited June 22, 2013 by Dark Opal

[Mephisto 56]

Jake simply slapped the book away. ((I'm just going on record by saying that the Celestia betrayal thing has a shitload to do with his Grimdark backstory. It's like if I gave Blaze a note that said he wasn't part dragon.))

 

Jake drew Revolution. "Stop this! Only you have the power to end this! If you don't listen now, this war I'll only get worse. If you force them to do this, they'll only be back stronger." He shouted.

[~Sole~ 852]

Sole glared at jake "sorry, but if he wants to fight you, I'm not gonna get in the way." He said with a sigh, as tempest grew in power "and besides, he's defending what he thinks is right... you know that feeling, so meet him in combat... just don't let him kill you." He said quietly.

[Snowy Storm 57]

Icy appeared in the battle field. She watched as ponies on bother side of the field get slaughtered. 

She walked across the battle field granting Icy death to those who would face her. She looked for Jake and could not find him. 

Still Crimson still burned in her Mind. -Mother how could you lose to him?- She would need more power to fight Crimson,

"Blast it all!" She yelled before noticing Jake with two other stallions. The air around Icy was cold and fill with a aura of hate.

"So I just arrive to see the Great Jake fight... Stay alive Jake, I need to tell you something after you finish with him"