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My OC (Criticism wanted/needed)


Mana

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Okay, so this is my OC Mana. I made a vector which I've just finished that I REALLY want or need criticism on. So yeah, be as harsh as you want, I don't really care whether you insult it or whatever as long as it's constructive.

So yeah, this took me over an hour. There's supposed to be no background as it's a vector. So yeah, please help a fellow brony out!

 

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The floating orb is supposed to be water by the way. Sorry it's so big and I'm aware of the weird white spaces in the hair by the ear, I can't be bothered fixing it. So yeah, give me your worst.

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looks good overall, a few minor imperfections here and there, but nothing that looks like it would really bother anypony. i'm really trying to find something to critisise on, but i just can't find anything really

maybe her right eye's pupil and iris are a bit out of place( you can still see a bit white on the edge where i feel like it shouldn't be there) but that's really it.

just a really good vector :)

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My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal  

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I think it's good, and I didn't even notice the white spaces until you pointed them out. I really like the way it looks overall. I cannot find anything other than those white spaces. I do think the head could be just a little bit shorter, it just looks a little tall.

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I am not creative so... Battlefield

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What program did you use to make the image's of the OC? Im really looking for a good program smile.png Could you please tell me?

And i really like it. 

Thank you, and I use Inkscape for EVERYTHING. It's quite hard to use at first but once you get the hang of it and watch tutorials it'll be easy. http://inkscape.org/

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Well my critic is that your OC is simple and nice at the Same time but in my opinion the water itself needs a much lighter color

Sorry for being a critical pony but I think the water must be much lighter I actually dont see the difference of the water and the magic color

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Well my critic is that your OC is simple and nice at the Same time but in my opinion the water itself needs a much lighter color

Sorry for being a critical pony but I think the water must be much lighter I actually dont see the difference of the water and the magic color

Alright! Thank you very much, anyway, don't apologize for being critical, it was what I requested in the first place! I will fix it when I can be bothered.

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