Onylex 2,837 July 16, 2013 Share July 16, 2013 I don't have much to say about it other than I like it but, not entirely happy with how it came out overall. Anyway, if you have anything at all to say about it be sure to let me know. (creative criticism, what you think might look better and such) 14 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PonyBoy15 428 July 16, 2013 Share July 16, 2013 I don't think there is anything wrong with it. Personally, I think You did a good job, however just fix the right wing or color it in lolz. 2 Rarity: Generous, Classy, and Sophisticated... My OC:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/torque-subject-to-change-r4587 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Derpy 535 July 16, 2013 Share July 16, 2013 This is not poorly drawn. I especially like how you did the mane and the eyes. There are a few places where the color seems to go outside or too far inside the lines like on his right wing and near the top of his mane. But besides that good job and keep up the good work! 2 Thanks to LittleRawr for the signature! My Ponysona Silver Star- http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/silver-star-r4419 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheInsaneShane 359 July 16, 2013 Share July 16, 2013 I think it looks pretty damn good, the thing about it, though is just the small finishing touches. Its like you didn't really completely finish the finishing touches, besides that its awesometacular!!!! 2 I wish more people would call me ,"sir"....without adding, "You're making a scene". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flying wub 48 July 16, 2013 Share July 16, 2013 What do you meen "poorly" it´s freakin´ awsome dude don´t be so negative about yourselfe i really like that drawing i think it´s awsome. I wish I could draw as good as you!!! 2 Thanks to @kaz for making me this sig!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
)O( Scarlet )O( 1,259 July 16, 2013 Share July 16, 2013 You call that poor? Man, that is 100% better than what I can draw Keep up the awesome as work,, can't wait to see what else you're good at drawing! 2 (Avatar art done by and Signature art done by @Guardian Braveheart (Aka my little brother), Avatar and Signature done by myself) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mooncookie 7 July 16, 2013 Share July 16, 2013 Your drawing rocks! I especially love the dynamic pose! The only problem I see here is that you seem to think there IS something wrong. Don't be so self-critical and learn to admit to yourself that you're an excellent artist. Even Twilight had to come to admit she was a great unicorn in Boast Busters! There's no shame in the truth. I'd love to see more! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Homura 21 July 17, 2013 Share July 17, 2013 This definitely is not poorly drawn. It's better than what I can do for sure. It's a lovely drawing! I do wish to see more drawings from you in the future. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruddboy Olaf 10,628 July 17, 2013 Share July 17, 2013 I don't have much to say about it other than I like it but, not entirely happy with how it came out overall. Anyway, if you have anything at all to say about it be sure to let me know. (creative criticism, what you think might look better and such) Picture 3.png This is definitely not poorly drawn!! It is better than i can do!! I really like the design on his mane and tail! It gives it a furry look to it! Overall this is great artwork and i hope you continue to draw more! I would love to see more from you! Nice work!! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjsforever 89 July 17, 2013 Share July 17, 2013 Poorly drawn? Haha you must have ridiculously high standards XD I think it's pretty cool-looking and creative. I haven't seen many ponies drawn like that. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Horn 430 July 17, 2013 Share July 17, 2013 (edited) Poorly drawn, eh? Your drawing is 20% cooler than my last five put together, I'm sorry to say. Nevertheless, I think it looks just fine. As I'm not a very proficient drawer and a terrible critic, I really have nothing substantial to offer you besides compliments. However, as one final note, I would like to state that if you spent a bit more time coloring to make sure that nothing strayed outside of the lines and filled up some of the blank spaces, it would be even better. Great job and thanks for contributing! Edited July 17, 2013 by Dark Horn 1 "The most horrible kind of ignorance is to have an opinion on an experience that you have never experienced.""Get off your high horse and give her a hug." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silverwisp the Bard 2,353 July 19, 2013 Share July 19, 2013 Good design, one of the few that makes ark grey work. Like the way you drew the mane. -left wing is off perspective wise -hindlegs need to be closer together (will also help getting rid of that pouch) -pupils should be darker -lower part of the mane is blowing into the wrong direction 1 My Art Thread, updated (almost) daily Tomorrow will take us away, far from home No one will ever know our names But the bard songs will remain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Luminiferous Ether~ 107 July 19, 2013 Share July 19, 2013 You say that is poorly drawn, Sir, I can hardly draw a line without a ruler. You're pretty good at what you do, so just keep trying and eventually I'm sure you'll reach your expectations 1 http://www.servimg.com/image_preview.php?i=24&u=17738028 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onylex 2,837 July 19, 2013 Author Share July 19, 2013 Good design, one of the few that makes ark grey work. Like the way you drew the mane. -left wing is off perspective wise -hindlegs need to be closer together (will also help getting rid of that pouch) -pupils should be darker -lower part of the mane is blowing into the wrong direction Thanks for pointing all of that out, it really helps me to improve. There were a couple of things you spotted that I hadn't even noticed. Im such a fanboy of your art, telling me what I can improve on means a lot. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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