[PMV] Metropolis

[StargazerDC 24]

Hey there! ^^
Today I made my first PMV and I'd like to share it with you. I hope you all like it
If you have some advices for me for making better pmvs I'll glad to listen to them

[Stellafera 3,836]

You have good timing when you start and stop each clip, but the video does show signs of what I like to call "run-on scenes".

 

Basically, there are parts where it feels like you sort of just let the scene running straight out of the episode. Make sure to only use the parts that get your message across. 

[Zygen 6,066]

You have good timing when you start and stop each clip, but the video does show signs of what I like to call "run-on scenes".

 

Basically, there are parts where it feels like you sort of just let the scene running straight out of the episode. Make sure to only use the parts that get your message across. 

Basically what Stella said, the clips are started in good timing, but overall the clips need to be more short and spread across different scenes, there are a few scenes that go on a bit long without any other scenes transitioning in.

 

Other then that everything looks pretty good.

Edited July 21, 2013 by Zygen