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CTAM after 1 million  

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  1. 1. What should happen after 1 million is reached?

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Next part of fic!

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When he heard the next part of the chat, he sorely regretted not being more careful.

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"Can you hear that? It sounds like breathing."
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"I heard it too... and it sounds like it came from Anala's purse."
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Riley had to hold his head in a lipstick cap in an attempt to block out the sound of his own scream.
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He heard hoofsteps. Anala was coming back.
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"We heard something in your purse, Anala," came a mare's voice.
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"It sounded like breathing."
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By now, Riley was using his teeth to make a hole in the purse for him to escape through. Luckily for him, it was out of the sight of the four mares.
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He began to wiggle through the hole, and was having reasonable success... until his rump became wedged in the hole.
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DARN! I knew I shouldn't have had those nachos at that soccer game!
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"We didn't check because we didn't want to go through your private property," came the voice of one of Anala's fillyfriends. "We think you should check it out, though."
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Even as he kept struggling, Riley was beginning to lose hope.
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Oh, dear Celestia, it's all over. Even if Anala picks me up first, those three mares are going to grab me from her and stamp on me.
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However, he finally did get through the hole. He flapped his wings and carefully landed on the ground.
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From there, he watched as Anala looked through her purse, relieved that he had escaped in time.
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But he knew that his troubles weren't over yet. How was he going to get back to normal size, if ever?
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He had an idea, and while it wasn't going to make him grow, it would probably help him evade detection.
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He flew up and pulled some of Anala's braided tail until there was a gap, and he then wedged himself into the gap, thinking that he could get out if he needed to.
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"Well, whatever it was, it made this huge gap in my purse," complained Anala, holding up her purse and exposing the hole. "It's gone now."
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Ruby, Sapphire, and Emerald looked at each other in bemusement.
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Riley spent the next hour spitting strands of hair out of his mouth and listening in to the conversations.
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"Well, I'd better be going now," said Anala at last. "'Crime-Fighting Canterlot' will be on soon."
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And then Anala was on the move again and so was Riley. As they walked, Riley could swear he heard one of Anala's fillyfriends say, "Did you see something red in her tail?"
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Fortunately for Riley, he was soon far away from them. From what he could see, Anala's apartment was not far off.
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After a moment of praying that the attendant wouldn't notice him and subsequently alert Anala, Riley was carried into Anala's room.
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Not sure what happens next...
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OCs: Riley β€’ Anala

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Rainbow Eclipse made me read...Β  :eww:

Though twas good, was good. I'd like to know what happens next.

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Edit: I thought I was the only one who used the word bemused...Β  :huh:

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I never said I disliked reading, it's just 11:45pm which is reasonably late for me!Β  ^_^

The fic was entertaining to read, and I liked it anyway...Β  >_>Β  :lol:

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@Base, I always go through threads without reading a single line....Β  :oΒ  B)

It's actually, more that I read the comments after, so that I don't alter my view or have any bias. In a creepy crazy psychologist sort of way.v :D

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