Count to a million

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

18.216

 

It's not really a Fic, it's simply, mayby with lots of written mistake, but I don't even have the half written yet XD

and also we are not finished, so I can't finish it, until we finished ... don't know, how long this will going, but it maes fun, to bad, that he is gone until sunday afternoon(Midnight for me ...)

Edited March 14, 2014 by Rising Shine

[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

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Oh, I see. It still sounds cool though

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

18.218

 

yep, but I think some parts are 18+ ... and I mean that because of brutality, not clooping

 

here is the text, before the Fic started, but first of all, I have to ask Snapp ... mayby I make everything for nothing XD

 

This was actually a little roleplaying between me and The Snapp. I decided to make a Fic about it. Most of the time we playing our OCs, Me(Rising Shine) and The Snapp(Snapp). Some dialogs are a bit changed, corrected and so on.
They got an official history for the story, but, especially by Rising, change a lot for this ... or just let say, it plays not in the original MLP-Universe, even when mostly is the same XD

It could be things there, they getting hurt, other ponies too, so mayby you should be old enough for violence, when reading this ... they going to suffer a lot ...

But now, here we goes.

[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

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Aw shucks. I'm only 17!

*18219

Edited March 14, 2014 by SparklingSwirls

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

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*Cough*The Snapp is 13*Cough*

 

I think, 17 is all right ... I just saying that, so the readers are warnend^^ I played with 10 games, that are 18+ or watch horror movies, sooo...

[equerio 6,153]

18221

C'mon, when did anypony actual obey those age limits?

[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

18221

 

Uh-oh, Snapp is writing an 18+ fic-thing XD

 

On second though, I agree with equerio.

*thought

[equerio 6,153]

18223

BTW, it's not like we're goin' to turn into homicidal beasts after reading some fore&violence fanfic xD

We've got MLP to neutralise that xD

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

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the best thing is, both of us can change the story everytime ... as an example

 

"Pssst, be quiet Snapp or they will see us here."

 

"Okay, okay."*Make no noise*

 

(I decided to cough)

 

*Cough*Oh oh, mayby they didn't hear that, be silence

 

(Snapp decided to get in panic and start running)

 

I can'!*Jump out, start running*

 

SNAPP!*Follow her*

Edited March 14, 2014 by Rising Shine

[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

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But what if the gore and violence is about MLP?

[equerio 6,153]

18226

Snapp is female?

Well I mean the original show swirly

Edited March 14, 2014 by equerio

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

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that are ponies and yea, Snapp's OC "Snapp" is a mare XD

[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

18228

 

I think that's another character.

 

EDIT: Oh. Well, that was unexpected!

Edited March 14, 2014 by SparklingSwirls

[equerio 6,153]

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equerio's always a stallion

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

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I love Snapp(My OC love her OC, not real me with real him XD)

[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

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Starshine is a mare, but that's because I'm female.

 

(my OC has the most cliche name I could think of!)

 

@Rising: Oh I see... you're sure there's no clopping?

Edited March 14, 2014 by SparklingSwirls

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

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ask Snapp, why his OC is a mare XD

[equerio 6,153]

18233

Oh, a shipping fanfic

My OC has no name, 'cause I've got no OC

But I'm thinking of making a ponysony, yeah that would be cool

Edit: ahahahahahah swirly, I would say the same thing actually xD

Edited March 14, 2014 by equerio

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

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It's more Action-Survival, I think XD

 

oh celestia, sound that wrong!!

Edited March 14, 2014 by Rising Shine

[equerio 6,153]

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We're just kidding

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

18.236

 

XD

[SparklingSquirrels 21,341]

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Yeah, I thought that would be funny!

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

18.238

 

I just read your edits, it's no clopping! We didn't sleep that way! Sure, we sleep in one bed and cuddling, but not more!

[equerio 6,153]

18239

soft-core clop

[Deae Rising Shine~ 55,329]

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you little horny ponies

 

Well, that would be the prolog:

 

Prolog: About them:
Rising Shine, stallion, 20, pegasi, has a normal life ... as an cover. In reality, he working for an company. That company killing or ponynapping specific ponies. Rising is one of the best. He get found by them, when he was a filly and get trained since then. Now he getting a new mission: A mare, called Snapp, has some magic in her, magic, that is so strong, that even the Celestia could be easily defeated. Of course, Snapp don't know that, because she can't use magic usually. He has to earn her trust, so, in the right moment, he can attack her and bring her here ... alive! He is a cover, write a letter to her, that he know her from school and want to befriend with her. She accept it and they writing for weeks, until they decided to meet each other ...

Snapp, mare, 21, pegasi, lived in an well known family. However, she was not really good in having friends. She live in Fillydelphia, and she tried to help ponies, but it often ended in an disaster, so everypony, even her family, think, she is completly useless. That make her self concious and shy. Every pony, she meet, shunned her, and that goes for most of her life ... until she find her special somepony in school later. He helped her a lot. But after many years, a doctor diagnosed a unendurable disease by him and he died ... her mother, finally care about her, helped her, but get killed someday. Finally alone, she managed to get an own house in Fillydelphia and live there since then, alone. But one day, she get an letter, from somepony, who going to her school, his name is Rising Shine, and thanks to him, she start, feeling better. One day, they decided to meet each other ...

... and so, everything started ......