The Most Messed Up Fanfics (not clopfics)

[Jamesblorg39welsh 125]

Hi guys I was wondering what the strangest most messed up fan fic you could find was mine was rainbow factory it was well written just kinda too dark

[Fire Bomb 121]

I think it is a tie between cupcakes and rainbow factory, both of them are well known for being messed up, one is mass homicide, the other is very detailed.

[Broseph 215]

Probably Cheerliee's Garden..
It's A LOT more graphic than Cupcakes or Rainbow Factory.. I was fine with those ones, but this one actually made me cringe.. It's just so damn detailed!

It's well written, don't get me wrong, but.. Jeez!

[Moonlight 7,286]

Not including a clopfic I know of (that's surprisingly written well), I would say the most messed up ones for me, personally, would be:

 

• Silent Ponyville (Possibly my favorite pony fan fiction of all time, it's pretty detailed and has some sad moments of misery and despair.)

[Shift 4,272]

The Chaotic Trilogy, by far. There are no heros. There are no villains. There is just a character that makes some grave mistakes. And ponykind hates her for what she is, not who she is. You just get pissed off at the world. After reading this, by brain got so messed up, far beyond what Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory did. The creator deleted he last story in he trology, but man...that story will forever have a place in my heart. It's the story that made me hate Twilight for weeks.

[FoxyCryptid 4,330]

I could name on, nut I'm a nice person so I won't for the sake of the sanity of everyone here in this thread. It's so bad I've seen it reduce even the the most well spoken people to angrish and ranting. Name any depraved thing you could do the pony body and it's probably in there. ANYTHING. Name something that offends you and it's probably in there. 

 

Keep in mind, I'm a person that actually enjoyed Cheerlee's Garden on a certain level for it's good writing and characterization of the villain, yet this fic broke me. Thinking about the things done in it makes me queasy to this day. Tvtropes removed it's page because it was to graphic, yet they kept the page for "A Serbian Film" let that sink it a minute.  

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Well, I could care less about Cupcakes; Rainbow Factory was pretty tame; Cheerilee's Garden was boring, but the one fanfiction that is very messed up is Sweet Apple Massacre. I'm not going into detail, but I'll say this; it is disgusting, and very messed up.

[DubWolf 17,264]

I wanted to say Sweet Apple Massacre for how intense the storyline can be at times, but alas it is a bit of a clopfic. Other than that I'd say Cupcakes is also a bit difficult to read considering Rainbow Dash is being mercilessly tortured and eventually killed by Pinkamena .

 

Cheerilee's Garden is also pretty gory, but I'll let you read it if you haven't. 

[Hyper Tumble 1,483]

Sweet Apple Massacre, Rainbow Factory, Cupcakes, or Bubbles.

The first three are self explanatory, but Bubbles was a hard pill to swallow.

Edited August 19, 2013 by Hyper Tumble

[Dsanders 5,747]

Probably Cheerliee's Garden..

It's A LOT more graphic than Cupcakes or Rainbow Factory.. I was fine with those ones, but this one actually made me cringe.. It's just so damn detailed!

It's well written, don't get me wrong, but.. Jeez!

^^THIS THIS THIS THIS!!!

 

Holy crap Cheerilee's Garden was dark! It was messed up beyond belief! What's the worst of all was how greatly well-written it was. It was really long for a fanfiction too. The length of the story along with all it's mind boggling details...my god...

 

But I don't give a crap how brilliantly it was written! A lot of fillies were murdered, abused, and just mutilated beyond comprehension. Cupcakes is utter s*** compared to this story.

 

Don't believe me. Read it, I dare ya.

 

And oh yeah...don't mind if I add...it's a two parter story!

 

The very least I can say is that the first part is all filly and colt murder and disgusting carnage...and the second part is...is, well let's just say it involves the mane 6.

 

It even made me freakin cry at some beyond heartbreaking points.

[DubWolf 17,264]

Sweet Apple Massacre, Rainbow Factory, Cupcakes, or Bubbles.

The first three are self explanatory, but Bubbles was a hard pill to swallow.

B..bbubbles? Does it have Ditzy Doo in it? I have some reading to do... *gulp

 

EDIT: I read it. So what if her mother left her? Anything good (and bad..) could've happened. But still....*sigh, for a fanfic w/o blood and gore, that was awful*

 

^^THIS THIS THIS THIS!!!

 

Holy crap Cheerilee's Garden was dark! It was messed up beyond belief! What's the worst of all was how greatly well-written it was. It was really long for a fanfiction too. The length of the story along with all it's mind boggling details...my god...

 

But I don't give a crap how brilliantly it was written! A lot of fillies were murdered, abused, and just mutilated beyond comprehension. Cupcakes is utter s*** compared to this story.

 

Don't believe me. Read it, I dare ya.

 

And oh yeah...don't mind if I add...it's a two parter story!

I felt sorry for all the poor fillies/colts that were brutally finished off by Cheerilee. What was she thinking? I almost feel like her personality in Equestria Girls is the same as that of Cheerilee's Garden; the Cheerilee in EG seemed a bit tense and low tempered when the CMCs were playing their music in the library (her actual reaction was fine, but I think she could have done worse to the cmcs), while the fanfic Cheerilee was tense and desperate to do something about her students from spreading their malevolence like the "weeds" they were.

Edited August 19, 2013 by Wingin'Wolf

[Dsanders 5,747]

B..bbubbles? Does it have Ditzy Doo in it? I have some reading to do... *gulp

 

 

I felt sorry for all the poor fillies/colts that were brutally finished off by Cheerilee. What was she thinking? I almost feel like her personality in Equestria Girls is the same as that of Cheerilee's Garden; the Cheerilee in EG seemed a bit tense and low tempered when the CMCs were playing their music in the library (her actual reaction was fine, but I think she could have done worse to the cmcs), while the fanfic Cheerilee was tense and desperate to do something about her students from spreading their malevolence like the "weeds" they were.

Yeah now that I think about it, the way Cheerilee seemed to behave in Equestria Girls didn't seem as...well cheery as her pony self! lol

 

The way she murdered all the little foals and colts was just really sickening. I really wanted to stop reading but the way it was written, my god it was great writing, I just couldn't stop reading it! Curse you talented author!

 

But have you read the second part of the story? Dear god I hope you haven't and if you indeed haven't...then just don't read it lol.

 

Once you start reading it, it get's really tough to stop. Plus...reading about what happened to each of the mane 6, was devastating for me.

 

But bravo to the author for having a sick and twisted way of expressing his beautiful talent!

Edited August 19, 2013 by Sanderspie

[DubWolf 17,264]

Yeah now that I think about it, the way Cheerilee seemed to behave in Equestria Girls didn't seem as...well cheery as her pony self! lol

 

The way she murdered all the little foals and colts was just really sickening. I really wanted to stop reading but the way it was written, my god it was great writing, I just couldn't stop reading it! Curse you talented author!

 

But have you read the second part of the story? Dear god I hope you haven't and if you indeed haven't...then just don't read it lol.

 

Once you start reading it, it get's really tough to stop. Plus...reading about what happened to each of the mane 6, was devastating for me.

 

But bravo to the author for having a sick and twisted way of expressing his beautiful talent!

I also read the second part (I usually look for a sequel of any story and hope it is not badly written). The ending was really unfair for poor Twilight, I hope the Equestrians (hey that's actually a word since it's not underlined in red!) get what they deserve from Celestia for rejoicing about her death!

[HOi i'm tEMMIE 178]

Cupcakes,Rainbow Factory,and Sweet Apple Massacre are very messed up.

 

But...I found them HILARIOUS.

 

When I read Sweet Apple Massacre,I never laughed so hard in my life,I love how over the top and just plain silly it got.

[GreyScholar 1,584]

Personally I feel the Lunaverse fanfiction is pretty messed up. Not only do we have Celestia the tyrant, as in a greedy power-hungry leader who wanted to push Luna out of the way so she could control everything, forcing the younger sister to banish Celestia.

 

Also I do not feel Equestria is a better place under the rule of Princess Luna, in this fanfiction anyway, nor do I like the fact the author has essentially made the main characters of the TV show a lot worse ponies in his effort to support his own choices for the Elements of Harmony... especially when it comes to Trixie and Twilight Sparkle.

 

The very premise leaves me with a bad taste in my mouth and reeks with Ron the Death Eater treatment to many of the characters.

Edited August 19, 2013 by EquestrianScholar

[Rainboom Dash 1,056]

I'll throw my hat in the ring to Cheerilee's Garden. All I can say is, I read it with a friend the other day and my friend remarked afterward:

 

"It makes Cupcakes look like a Shakespeare play."

 

I could not have put it better myself.

[Dsanders 5,747]

I also read the second part (I usually look for a sequel of any story and hope it is not badly written). The ending was really unfair for poor Twilight, I hope the Equestrians (hey that's actually a word since it's not underlined in red!) get what they deserve from Celestia for rejoicing about her death!

 

Warning: this may count as a spoiler...

 

 

Being a major Pinkie Pie fan and hardcore lover of everything that there is to love about her, seeing the part in the story where she was brutally tortured and killed just freaking tore my heart apart and ripped it to shreds. I was like in freakin tears. 

 

I swear anyone with a favorite pony of the mane 6 would just be crushed after reading that sequel of Cheerilee's garden. The way each one is tortured and killed is just heartbreaking and sick. 

 

This gif right here can sum up my feelings after my favorite pony got killed.

 

 

But yeah the way Twilight got killed off, that was the second most heartbreaking scene for me.

 

Edited August 19, 2013 by Sanderspie

[Kaska 30]

I stopped with gore fics. I try avoid something if it is rated dark. The sad ess os just too unbearable. After cupcakes (fic + animation) I stopped for good. For some reason I can't stand these fics.

[Paleopony 703]

Sweet Apple Massacre. That was one I actually regret reading. I didn't know it would be so awful!

[Twilight Luna 31,403]

I do not remember the name of this fanfic but it centralized on the idea that by the beginning on the series, Celestia was dying because she used all of the elements at the same time. She transfers her power to Twilight, making her an Alicorn. The story spans about 80 years in which Twilight has to adjust to her new role, deal with the grief and resentment of Celestia's death, and the death of her friends and family members over the years. By the end, she is a bitter tyrant who blamed her friends for leaving her and has pushed away everyone that cares about her.