writing Fair and Grace

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

Live not for such as I

Ne’er again be such as to sway this way

For I, as expected of, am forgotten

Left for hate to fester, in this heart of mine

With love to discard, strewn all about

My hands do tremble in memory

 

For as sweet as the air, on that day alone

When fair and grace became as one

Upon the creation, a tender touch

Upon my hands their it lay

In all deserving awes, I gaped

Untruthfully accepting the touch

Unbelievably living a dream

 

Time to pass when this being grew

In affection and magnificence

An attraction to my heart

Unfolding melancholy, from sweetest love

As all mistakes find consequence of pain

Such as a word or two to be told

 

Sweetest sour notes that do announce their coming, and leaving

Bravest cowardice that are my words, to say nothing as fair and grace make their way

 

-David Favret

[LanceTheTurtle 28]

Did you write this? 

Because this is beautiful. This is amazing! I'm definitely impressed. I especially like how each stanza has a specific cadence-- Hm, did you by chance use metre? (I'm still trying to grasp poetic metre. ;; )

Edited September 17, 2013 by LanceTheTurtle

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

Did you write this? 

Because this is beautiful. This is amazing! I'm definitely impressed. I especially like how each stanza has a specific cadence-- Hm, did you by chance use metre? (I'm still trying to grasp poetic metre. ;; )

Yes, I wrote the piece.

 

Metre? That all depends upon if you felt that there was. I leave it to the reader to decide if they felt a flow of metre from the piece or not.

[Dsanders 5,750]

Yet another magnificent poem by the great and poetically talented BronyHeart!

 

You did great mate! Loved how much rhythm and feeling you put into this.

 

I used to write a bunch of poems myself, but none even come close to being as good as your's.

 

Well done! 

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

 

 

but none even come close to being as good as your's.

 Poppycock! There is no such thing as "good" or "bad" when in terms of Poetry. It is an expression of emotions in words, and so long as they are truthful essences of emotion, they are indeed quality poems.