My oc drawed - Cloudy Rain

[Valynne 2,739]

i just want to show you guys a drawing i make based on the model of Pony Creator, with a few changes on the original, i change her eyes and added some shadding effect.

 

Please i want to hear your opinión! Good or Bad it will help me a lot in the future!

 

 

[repsol rave 2,963]

wow, this looks awesome! love the shading.

the only thing i could find is that her right leg looks a bit awkward, but that's all i got.

very good drawing!

[Valynne 2,739]

wow, this looks awesome! love the shading.

the only thing i could find is that her right leg looks a bit awkward, but that's all i got.

very good drawing!

 

Yeah, personally i have some issues drawing the right leg i need to improve myself i think that i shouldn't move all the bones 

 

Thank you so much for your opinión!

[Casy 238]

Only wrong thing here is that her wing is too low. Thats why the back leg look little strange too. Wings are supposed to be attached to shoulder blades aand the body should be little longer

But good job! than it would be perfect

Edited September 21, 2013 by Casy

[Vinyl Scratch (Filly)™ 936]

i just want to show you guys a drawing i make based on the model of Pony Creator, with a few changes on the original, i change her eyes and added some shadding effect.

 

Please i want to hear your opinión! Good or Bad it will help me a lot in the future!

 

 

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Looks kinda pony generator-ish with a bit of shading done, not overly bad, good practice for future improvements though! hehe :3 Also 'drawed' I kinda had a d'aww moment there!

[NocturnalRainbow 248]

I like the shading! The wing might be a biiiiit low but it still looks good. The head looks good, I LOVE that facial expression. Awesome Job

 

In the future try not to base it off pony creator, it would look better if the ponies head was facing towards the reference point (I don't know what to call it, towards the person looking at it )

Edited September 21, 2013 by NocturnalRainbow

[Valynne 2,739]

Looks kinda pony generator-ish with a bit of shading done, not overly bad, good practice for future improvements though! hehe :3 Also 'drawed' I kinda had a d'aww moment there!

 

well i made my OC in pony maker on deviantart and i draw it on my notebook just for trying the shading effects, i still im learning to draw Ponies without base,

 

And forgive my curiosity but, Why the d'aww moment?

[Vinyl Scratch (Filly)™ 936]

well i made my OC in pony maker on deviantart and i draw it on my notebook just for trying the shading effects, i still im learning to draw Ponies without base,

 

And forgive my curiosity but, Why the d'aww moment?

Because you wrote drawed x3 I just thought it was really cute sowwie D: xD anyways, yeah keep up the pony art practice you'll be great in no time!

[Valynne 2,739]

Because you wrote drawed x3 I just thought it was really cute sowwie D: xD anyways, yeah keep up the pony art practice you'll be great in no time!

 

Ahh... i see, well, my english is not so good and if the word "drawed" is wrong, please forgive my bad english ,

Thank you for your wishes!