sad I Don't Wanna Die

[DemensMailz 0]

Hello, everypony!

 

Maybe you'll like this nonsense. 

 

Just want to apologize if I am breaking any rules. 

 

If possible, I want to request of criticize and point out errors. 

 

Thank you.

 

$story --link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FYB29svbhWdcfTIEbuw8IZZM-CLjsBVd2bYPRdP9POM/edit?usp=sharing

[toby rogers 258]

on the third last line you misspelled ponyville but other then that great story,it did something almost no other story can do, it brought a tear to my eye

[a Pegasus Pony 134]

That was pretty sad to read and it didn't bring a tear to my eye but more or less. Still I have never read something like that and it was... different.

[Lady Amber Sunset 1]

Oh god, just imagining Pinkie trapped, never seeing her friends again, surrounded by cries of "Fun! Fun, fun!" It was traumatizing.