writing Don't you cry...

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

What are you crying for?

Sweetest, and most beloved love of mine

Tell me of your heart’s pleas

Enlighten me as to where your woe lies

Never again shall such a thing befall you

 

Know that I will guard you

Help you when you fail

Forgive you when you forget

Hold you when you fall

And love you when you cannot love yourself

 

At all costs to myself, into your heart I will dive

Never again shall such a thing befall you

 

-David Favret

[a Pegasus Pony 139]

This piece was a little different but I couldn't get that feel you know... It is good but just not enough to make me think.