Thirty Moons Under Ares: MLP movie screenplay

[USMCav8r 105]

I just recently began watching MLP, and, while I am still very dubious about clippers, I have come to really enjoy the fandom. 

 

I have recently started writing a screenplay for a hypothetical MLP movie. Come and check it out at the following link:

 

https://docs.google....dit?usp=sharing

 

I am posting this via google drive because I am constantly making updates, and so that you can see my latest updates at your convenience.

 

Please keep any comments limited to constructive criticisms only. If you think I should make a change, post it in the comments. I hope you enjoy.

 

-2nd LT [uSMCav8r]