SweetLikeACupcake 8 November 12, 2013 Share November 12, 2013 well this might seem dumb but all you have to do is write a sentence or two to help make the story! do one can judge you about anything on here just be creative and be you! 1 Signature by Champion RD92 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demirari 454 November 12, 2013 Share November 12, 2013 The sound of hooves hitting cracked stone was heard as a group of approached a temple. A temple of ancients, the vines visible from most angles, the pillars as tall as six of Celestia's behind. Mysterious symbols masterfully crafted onto the now broken stone bricks. One may say that this is cliche as a Hollywood movie! How's that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
repsol rave 2,963 November 12, 2013 Share November 12, 2013 the group gallopped through the pilars into the empty void of the temple. the darkness inside was overwhelming at first, but one of the unicorns in the group activated a spell illuminating the intire temple in a soft purple aura. 1 My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smarts 1,622 November 12, 2013 Share November 12, 2013 The group continued through the ancient temple, being cautious of their surroundings. All of a sudden, a low growl is heard coming from deep within the temple. IF is best girl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aniki 386 November 12, 2013 Share November 12, 2013 Stopping dead in their tracks and taking a quick look around shown nothing out of the ordinary. They walked a bit more, and suddenly with a jerk of awareness, noticed dozens of gleaming eyes all around them in the darkness. ~Signature by my awesome sibling @Armchair Adventurer "Som"~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demirari 454 November 12, 2013 Share November 12, 2013 The group stopped suddenly in their tracks, they scanned the large room they are in. Some of the ponies moved into a protective formation as the group scanned the gleaming eyes. They whispered to one another, they need a decision, and fast. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
repsol rave 2,963 November 12, 2013 Share November 12, 2013 The unicorn who previously illuminated the temple now gathered some magical power as she bend through her knees. Her horn touched the ground and in a matter of milliseconds a purple orb was surrounding the group of equine creatures. It wasn't a very effective force field, but it should hold the creatures off for atleast some minutes. My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demirari 454 November 12, 2013 Share November 12, 2013 One of the ponies noticed a large door to their right side. It was hidden in the shadows where the light failed to reveal, it was sheer luck that one of the ponies noticed it. The leader of the group, a unicorn told the group to move toward the large door. They started to move, quickly though as the creatures slowly surrounded them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 November 17, 2013 Share November 17, 2013 (edited) The whole 'adventure' was a hallucination by a group of teenage ponies stoned off their rumps. Fluttershy, who had previously saw a guy standing around doing nothing, shook her head as she trotted past the teenagers. She went to the cottage and walked in, with some mysterious powers opening and closing the doors. Fluttershy grinned. She had a deep dark secret. She was the Fluttershy from the other side of the mirror portal. She was the Fluttershy from Canterlot High. After realizing there must a pony version of her from the pony world who must have lots and lots of animals, she had jumped into the portal which had opened after thirty moons. Then she tripped over and landed on her snout. She hadn't quite gotten accustomed to her new pony body yet. "Ow." Suddenly, her eyes widened in horror as she noticed the door handle was moving. Pony Fluttershy was back. Thinking on her feet, Human Fluttershy found a hiding spot. It was... Edited November 17, 2013 by Red Pegasus OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
repsol rave 2,963 November 17, 2013 Share November 17, 2013 whoa, dat plot twist! she quickly tried to hide in one of the many cages lining the walls of fluttershy's cottage. this prooved to be a rather worthless hiding spot as the bars surrounding her now didn't really block any sight. she slowly climbed back out of the cage and stood in front of the original fluttershy, only remaining silent. My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Frost 731 November 17, 2013 Share November 17, 2013 well this might seem dumb but all you have to do is write a sentence or two to help make the story! do one can judge you about anything on here just be creative and be you! what kind of story? Dark, gory, adventure? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
repsol rave 2,963 November 17, 2013 Share November 17, 2013 what kind of story? Dark, gory, adventure? doesn't really matter, as long as it fits the part posted above, so right now you have to continue the story where i left it off last time! My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 November 17, 2013 Share November 17, 2013 Anyway, continuing on from repsol rave's post... Suddenly, Pony Fluttershy revealed she was... a Changeling! It somehow picked up Human Fluttershy and took her to Queen Chrysalis. "Well, well, if it isn't Fluttershy..." mused Chrysalis, running her hoof through Human Fluttershy's mane. "Get off me, thing with holes in your legs!" snapped Human Fluttershy. "I'm not really a pony, I'm a human!" "What's a human?" asked some random filly who had appeared in the room for no reason. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demirari 454 November 17, 2013 Share November 17, 2013 (edited) The changelings gasped, a filly has broken through their secret base that was under Sugarcube Corner. The entrance to their hive was disguised with a sign that said, "Totally not a Changling Base, pls don't enter." It's impossible for a filly to break into their base with such camouflage and security. Edited November 17, 2013 by Demirari Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noodles 109 November 17, 2013 Share November 17, 2013 Crystalis glanced over to one of her changelings and ordered "get into the castle and find that mirror". the changeling replied yes my queen and quickly changed into a canterlot royal guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demirari 454 November 17, 2013 Share November 17, 2013 (edited) A changeling spoke up, "Isn't the mirror in the Crystal Empire?" Then another one spoke up, "I though the mirror was in Trottingham?" By now, the poor changeling was shapeshifting faster then the eye can see. Edited November 18, 2013 by Demirari Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 November 18, 2013 Share November 18, 2013 The Changeling exploded from the sheer amount of shapeshifting. "The mirror is in The Crystal Empire, dweebs!" taunted Human Fluttershy, galloping away. She never thought she would ever use that word, but the evil bug-pony thing had just kidnapped her! At last, she reached the mirror. She was about to step in, when she realized something. "If I go through, I'll turn back into a human." She had a major dilemma on her hooves. Go home where she belonged, or keep her new ponyhood? "THERE SHE IS!" Human Fluttershy turned round in horror. Chrysalis and the Changelings had caught up with her. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demirari 454 November 18, 2013 Share November 18, 2013 Suddenly a shield appeared around her, a purple magical shield. Suddenly a majestic purple alicorn called Twilight Sparkle appeared in front of Human Fluttershy. Twilight Sparkle bellows, "Stop right there changeling scum!" Chrysalis shouted back, "Never!" And so they jumped toward each other, priming a spell. Before they collided, Human Fluttershy yel--------- "What in Celestia's beard am I reading?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Volt 2,561 November 18, 2013 Share November 18, 2013 you can make something out from this song Red cross voluntier:""The first to arrive,The last to leave" Proud member of the Code3 Bronies! My OC page, click here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 November 18, 2013 Share November 18, 2013 (edited) The voice had come from the filly from earlier. She was reading a strange book. Ignoring her, the ponies continued their fight. Suddenly, Chrysalis remembered something. "It's free ice-cream day at the shop!" So she and the Changelings flew away. "Well, Fluttershy, are you coming home?" asked Twilight. "Wait a sec... are you the Twilight from this pony world or my world?" asked Human Fluttershy. "I'm the Twilight from your world. I was walking past that school called Canterlot High and loads of kids ran up to me saying 'Twilight! You're back!' Confusing, to say the least. There were four who seemed particularly pleased, and they said 'If only Fluttershy was here to see you!' They explained they had a friend called Fluttershy who jumped through a portal at the back of a statue that leads to a world full of ponies, so I decided to jump in too. Thanks to the four students' description of Fluttershy, I knew she was you," explained Human Twilight. "And now I'm a pony with wings AND a horn! Could this be any better?" she added excitedly. "I see... well, let's go home. Those bug things were scary!" said Human Fluttershy. So the two mares walked towards the mirror... but it was closed. "Well, now what are we going to do?" asked Human Twilight. Edited November 18, 2013 by Red Pegasus OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demirari 454 November 18, 2013 Share November 18, 2013 (edited) Voices started to appear behind the two. The fight had alarmed the guards of the castle. The ones that were leading the charge were Shining Armor, Cadence, and will be to the two's horror, Twilight Sparkle, the MLP one... Edited November 18, 2013 by Demirari Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 November 18, 2013 Share November 18, 2013 "Oh, noes! What will become of my wonderful pony form now?" said Human Twilight worriedly. Suddenly, Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, Pony Twilight, and the guards were kidnapped by a pineapple. "Thank you, turn of events that make no sense whatsoever!" said Human Fluttershy happily, Suddenly, the two girls-turned-ponies began heavily sweating because giant frying pan. The heat caused Human Twilight to release a magic beam from her new horn, which forced the portal open. "Did you know you could do that, Twilight?" asked Human Fluttershy. "Nope," replied Human Twilight. Suddenly, Human Pinkie Pie, Human Rainbow Dash, Human Rarity, and Human Applejack came through the portal. "Guys? Is that you?" asked Fluttershy. "Yep! I used my Pinkie Sense to predict that you and the Twilight back in our world had gone through the magic portal and turned into ponies and gone on freaky adventures!" replied Human Pinkie. "Oh heavens! The trip through the portal has ruined my wonderfully styled hair!" said Human Rarity, shocked. "Will yeh shuddup 'bout yeh hair fer a sec?" asked Human Applejack, clearly annoyed. Human Rarity was speechless. And the day was saved. "Why do I have a weird tattoo on my butt?" asked Human Rainbow, apparently not having noticed her new wings. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demirari 454 November 18, 2013 Share November 18, 2013 The fact that the pineapple busted through crystal walls seemly was ignored by everyone. And unfortunately for many of the characters, the writers are very, very sadistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noodles 109 November 18, 2013 Share November 18, 2013 well that went downhill quickly! one mistake could have been a golden opportunity for a good comic skit. sigh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Eclipse 3,927 November 19, 2013 Share November 19, 2013 Anyway... "Well, that's great, girls," said Human Twilight, "But if we don't get out of here, we'll be cooked by the giant frying pan!" So the six of them ran out of the castle. The six girls-turned-ponies were well away from the castle when it inexplicably exploded. "Going somewhere?" asked a sinister voice. It was the pineapple. It abducted the six mares and flew away. Inside the pineapple's airship, the six former humans noticed Pony Shining, Pony Cadence, Pony Twilight, and the guards. "MY OWN CLONE!" Human Twilight and Pony Twilight exclaimed in unison. Then they squealed like rabid teenage girls at a sleepover. "Why are there two of you, Twiley?" asked Pony Shining. "We'll explain later," replied Human Applejack. "Right now is the time for escapin'." Human Pinkie had an idea. She picked up a can of whipped cream that had seemingly appeared from nowhere, and sprayed it around her mouth. "RABIES!" she screamed. A mini-pineapple servant went to alert the leader. "Throw all of those ponies out at once!" commanded the leader pineapple. "Why all of them and not just the one with rabies?" asked the servant. "I don't know, just do it!" replied the leader. So the servant pushed all nine ponies (oh, and the guard ponies) out of the ship. When everypony was free, the mirror portal mysteriously fell from the sky. "I'm not going through! My hair will be ruined again!" snapped Human Rarity. Giggling, Human Rainbow pushed Human Rarity into the mirror... but the portal was closed. "OH NO!" cried the six girls-turned-ponies. "OH YEAH!" said the Kool-Aid guy. OCs: Riley • Anala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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