adventure The Ballad Of The Ice Princess Part 7

[Commander Frost 731]

The silence that filled the air around them made everypony glum. Without Pinkie Pie, There was nothing to keep their heads up high. Twilight looked over at Pinkie Pie on Rainbow Dash's back. She looked so sad and unmoving. It worried Them all. They just walked along the road searching for signs of civilization.

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                 

 

Pinkie opened her eyes to pitch blackness, all she could see is her mirrored image on the floor.

"Hello? Is anypony there?" She shouted.

Suddenly The entire wall next to Pinkie Lit up with all of her memories. She decided to sit and watch them.

 

 

 

"You think Pinkie will wake up soon?" Applejack said.

"I don't know Applejack, but I hope so. It hurts me to see her like this." Twilight said.

"Even though I knew her for a short period of time, She had made me smile, and she was kind hearted." Crystal said.

"Well Whatever happens, I hope she'll be ok." Fluttershy responded.

Rainbow Dash didn't say anything for if she did she would start crying. She couldn't even look at Pinkie without tears drawing to the surface. luckily, nopony else noticed. She really didn't want anypony to see her cry. It was bad enough Twilight did.

As they kept traveling along, the sun was going down. They decided to stop and make camp for the night.

"Pinkie Pie can sleep in my tent for tonight." Applejack offered.

Rainbow Dash almost rejected, but realized it might look weird. While the others were looking for firewood, Crystal and Rainbow stayed behind to watch Pinkie Pie.

"You seem very attached to Pinkie, Rainbow." Crystal said.

"What makes you think that?"

"Well first of all I saw you crying over her earlier, and second, and second, you kind of carried her the entire way here, without help at all."

Rainbow Dash blushed embarrassedly.

"Ummm..."

"It's alright, I know that you care deeply for all of your friends."
"Pinkie Pie was my first friend, and i was right next to her on the train. I could have stopped her from getting hurt, but i didn't. It's all my fault." She said.
Crystal looked over to Rainbow to see her crying. She walked  over and placed her hoof on rainbow's back and patted it gently.
"It's alright, It wasn't your fault." Crystal said.
"But, But..I-" 
Rainbow Looked up at Crystal and saw the care in her eyes. This made Rainbow Dash feel better.
"Thank you." 
Crystal's eyes lit white as she remembered another memory.



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Pinkie Dream

 

 

"I loved all of those times." Pinkie said.
"Ah yes, They were lovely times wern't They?" A misterious voice said.
"Wait....I know you.....Your....."
 

 

 

Part 8 Coming soon

Edited December 13, 2013 by Dashie Is Mine

[Solar Shadow 13]

I love the story  but im sad about Pinkie Pie   i hope she gets better soon!!

[Commander Frost 731]

I love the story  but im sad about Pinkie Pie   i hope she gets better soon!!

oh the story takes a huge twist with pinkie pie later

[Solar Shadow 13]

oh the story takes a huge twist with pinkie pie later

AH! dont say that you know i like this story now you're just making the wait even more painful!

[Commander Frost 731]

AH! dont say that you know i like this story now you're just making the wait even more painful!

 oops to late  don't worry part 7 will be finished tonight in about 20 minutes

[Dr Pink Whooves 12]

WOW this is going to be great (im helping the story)

[Commander Frost 731]

yeah its not done yet though I passed out last night. I was just to tired

 

WOW this is going to be great (im helping the story)

[Dr Pink Whooves 12]

 

 

yeah its not done yet though I passed out last night. I was just to tired

 

U PASSED OUT! u sure u didnt just fall asleep on the job? R U OK!?!?!? 

[Commander Frost 731]

U PASSED OUT! u sure u didnt just fall asleep on the job? R U OK!?!?!? 

that's wat I meant by passed out

[Dr Pink Whooves 12]

that's wat I meant by passed out

oh. ok! (spoilers when will jason flame come in?)

[Commander Frost 731]

oh. ok! (spoilers when will jason flame come in?)

in this part im just ot done putting it up yet derp

[OG Blaze 269]

Hey this looks really good, I've written a story of my own, The Blaze That Started The Flame, You've significantly increased the use of vocabulary and synonyms for the word say, that's good. Your developing this story alot and it's coming together quite nicely keep up the good work!