slice of life Dreams

[StableStahl 12]

            Hello everypony, bathroomstahl here and I have rewritten the first chapter of Dreams and am here to repost it, but first here’s the summary I wrote for it:

            What is a dream?  Is it only an image of your imagination, or is it something more, something that’s real?  What will happen when three teenagers start to have dreams, dreams of them in Equestria, dreams of them being ponies?  What will happen when three ponies start having dreams, dreams of them being in a strange new world, a world where no one is accepted, a world where strange creatures live?  What will happen when these dreams switch the humans and ponies soul and mind?  What will happen when the three teenagers realize that they miss days in their dreams, when they realize that someone, or pony, else are inhabiting their bodies? 

            This is a story of how three teenagers and three ponies switch bodies, minds, and souls.  Where the teenagers are sent is to a world where everyone is accepted, where everyone is happy, where everyone is a pony.  While the ponies are sent to a world where only a few are accepted, where only a few people find true happiness, where everyone are humans.  Three humans will realize that their worlds are different than Equestria, that being accepted is something that is truly great, and what it is like to have true happiness.  While the three ponies will witness what the true nature of humans is, what it’s like to not be accepted, what we humans deal with daily, or, in simpler terms, something nobody, pony or human, should have to deal with. 

            Author’s note: I’m going to give you guys a link to it, because I don’t really think I can post mutable chapters on here without making mutable posts.  Link:  http://www.fimfiction.net/story/145773/dreams Please give me some reviews on this, I’ll take anypony’s opinion on it ^-^