KBz 499 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 (edited) Okay. So this is my first (drawn) comic. Don't take any of this seriously. Please don't hate me... Anything to improve on? I personally don't think that Cheerilee is.. y'know, but this recurring nightmare of mine won't LEAVE ME ALONE!!! If you don't get it then that is absolutely okay. Edited January 2, 2013 by Anisakis185 5 … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boofyhooves 78 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 This made me lulz! Message me anytime! Happy to make new Brony and Pegasister friends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mephala 2,635 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 :D 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadefire 2,798 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 ...I don't get it. Ponysona bio, here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KBz 499 March 4, 2012 Author Share March 4, 2012 ...I don't get it. Hint: 3rd & last picture (look carefully at the 3rd, then the obvious happens at the end). … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RomansIII 71 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 Hint: 3rd & last picture (look carefully at the 3rd, then the obvious happens at the end). I still don't get it. Deviant Art: http://romansiii.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THE WILD HUNT 213 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 Neither do I... What exactly are we supposed to be looking for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissDo 195 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 Were they about to do something? I am sort of lost. Anyway, great sketches, it greatly resembles Canon, which is a good thing! Poor Cheerilee... Great adventuring for great treasures!....Except when I'm hurt... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Ariona 402 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 I didn't understand the 6th one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KBz 499 March 4, 2012 Author Share March 4, 2012 I still don't get it. Neither do I... What exactly are we supposed to be looking for? The third picture, Cheerilee is looking at something, Try to guess what she is looking at based on her reaction. Were they about to do something? I am sort of lost. Anyway, great sketches, it greatly resembles Canon, which is a good thing! Poor Cheerilee... Thanks I didn't understand the 6th one 6th one resembles the 3rd one … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Ariona 402 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 Well the work is good anyways though I still dun get it XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninja Derpy 343 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 I don't get it.... "I am more silent than night itself..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THE WILD HUNT 213 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 His hooves? I've got no idea what the heck is going on xD... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KBz 499 March 4, 2012 Author Share March 4, 2012 (edited) Well the work is good anyways though I still dun get it XD I don't get it.... His hooves? I've got no idea what the heck is going on xD... Cheerilee is actually looking at his c-- She was thinking it was gross by saying "You gotta be bucking kidding me." Kreinbahthur's guess was extremely close though. Edited March 4, 2012 by kyrodreamland … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Ariona 402 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 I mainly can't understand what AB said XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jadefire 2,798 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 She's staring at his groin, that much I understand. But I don't know if she's disgusted that his penis is large, small, erect, actually a vagina, nonexistant, or what. And what Applebloom said didn't make any sense, and I'm not sure why Big Mac suddenly accused Cheerilee of implying that he's gay and/or disgusting. I'll just chalk it up to me being incredibly naive. The art is still fairly good, though. 1 Ponysona bio, here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KBz 499 March 4, 2012 Author Share March 4, 2012 She's staring at his groin, that much I understand. But I don't know if she's disgusted that his penis is large, small, erect, actually a vagina, nonexistant, or what. And what Applebloom said didn't make any sense, and I'm not sure why Big Mac suddenly accused Cheerilee of implying that he's gay and/or disgusting. I'll just chalk it up to me being incredibly naive. The art is still fairly good, though. The very first one that understands the situation. Thanks! … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RomansIII 71 March 4, 2012 Share March 4, 2012 She's staring at his groin, that much I understand. But I don't know if she's disgusted that his penis is large, small, erect, actually a vagina, nonexistant, or what. And what Applebloom said didn't make any sense, and I'm not sure why Big Mac suddenly accused Cheerilee of implying that he's gay and/or disgusting. I'll just chalk it up to me being incredibly naive. The art is still fairly good, though. That's what I thought, to. Deviant Art: http://romansiii.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KBz 499 March 5, 2012 Author Share March 5, 2012 That's what I thought, to. And I guess that makes two. … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tupin86 195 March 5, 2012 Share March 5, 2012 The art is very good, the only thing I would suggest is making the speech more clear of who is talking. Is Apple Bloom just off screen? I also had to read that panel a few times to get what she was saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nah 3,182 March 5, 2012 Share March 5, 2012 That is really funny and very well drawn! Good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KBz 499 March 11, 2012 Author Share March 11, 2012 That is really funny and very well drawn! Good work! Thank you! … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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