Rainbow Factory remix

[thattom 38]

I know im kinda late but it would be awesome if you listen to it

 

https://soundcloud.com/powerboiii/rainbow-factory-remix

 

 

thanks : 3

[OrangeRiff 45]

Listened to it

 

It was bit raw for me, but still a good job /)

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

It was okay. 

 

The number one thing that prevented me from giving this song a better rating was that fact that the rhythm line was just very repetitive  It needed to have that variation, which I didn't hear. 

 

Plus, you put the bass line in double-time, which took that "feeling" away from what Rainbow Factory was supposed to be. You could've alternated between single AND double-time. 

 

But I could see you did put some effort into this track.

 

It just needed more variation and flavor, as @OrangeRiff stated. 

[thattom 38]

It was okay. 

 

The number one thing that prevented me from giving this song a better rating was that fact that the rhythm line was just very repetitive  It needed to have that variation, which I didn't hear. 

 

Plus, you put the bass line in double-time, which took that "feeling" away from what Rainbow Factory was supposed to be. You could've alternated between single AND double-time. 

 

But I could see you did put some effort into this track.

 

It just needed more variation and flavor, as @OrangeRiff stated. 

I understand what you mean, BUT this is made with the free version of a program there are loads of limitations and i really pushed this song to the limits so i couldn't have added anything more

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@thattom,

 

What program did you use? FL Studio? 

[thattom 38]

@@thattom,

 

What program did you use? FL Studio? 

pocketband XD its a app for android, its certainly not the best program in the world but is sounds decent

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@thattom,

 

Well, a lot of those apps tend to not have the best of sounds, and require you to buy the full thing.