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Draco smiled as he kissed her hoof gently. "I bid you adieu fair mare," Draco said gently into her ear. "May our parting be not so sour but of a gentle whisper into the night," Draco whispered into her ear gently. He flew into the sky after a jump. Because of his large wings he couldn't take off right from the ground. He had to jump to get air then he would have been able to hover. Then he fell onto the ground holding his wing. Good thing he was quick to change out of his expensive suit.

 

"Bloody shite. must have done more damage than I thought," he said with pain in his voice.

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Luna was processing his words in her head. Going over them again and again. She flew to her sister's room with breakneck speeds. She knocked on it with such force, guaranteed to wake somepony. Celestia opened the door.

"Luna? This is a surprise. What bri-"

"I need to talk to Aaron."
Celestia didn't get a chance to finish.

"Uh. Okay. Sweety. You have a visitor!"
Aaron got up and walked to the door. Who could want him at this hour. Tia was awake at this time, but it didn't mean he did. And on Saturday.

"Hey, Luna whats up."
"I need to learn how to court a stallion."
Aaron was stunned at this request.

"Tia, your sister's asking me weird questions."
"Just go with it."

"Fine. Luna, meet me in the hall and we'll talk there."

Luna's face lit up in excitement.

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Luna was processing his words in her head. Going over them again and again. She flew to her sister's room with breakneck speeds. She knocked on it with such force, guaranteed to wake somepony. Celestia opened the door.

"Luna? This is a surprise. What bri-"

"I need to talk to Aaron."

Celestia didn't get a chance to finish.

"Uh. Okay. Sweety. You have a visitor!"

Aaron got up and walked to the door. Who could want him at this hour. Tia was awake at this time, but it didn't mean he did. And on Saturday.

"Hey, Luna whats up."

"I need to learn how to court a stallion."

Aaron was stunned at this request.

"Tia, your sister's asking me weird questions."

"Just go with it."

"Fine. Luna, meet me in the hall and we'll talk there."

Luna's face lit up in excitement.

Draco on the other hoof was carted off to the doctors office. "Yeah doc I've been flying non stop. Honestly I've been so freaking stressed. work, work work, I swear sometimes. Then my mistakes are resurfacing. An old marefriend contacted me. That mare cheated on me with another," Draco said to the doctor. He smiled slightly as he got his wing bandaged then after he left the doctor sent a letter to princess Celestia.

 

The letter says as follows "Dear Princess Celestia,

 

This is Dr. Hoffington. I am writing to you concerning a courier by the name of Draco O'Malley. I want to have him move to Canterlot to a high class home. So that The courier can destress. I heard about his long flight from all the lands. I can't believe it but a mere pegasus did it. Anyhow, I believe he will have a mental break down any advice?

signed,

Dr. Hoffington"

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Celestia was sorting out her mane for the day so she would look presentable. A letter appeared before her. Reading it with a smile, she began to fill out one of her own letters.

 

Dear Dr. Hoffington,

I just so happen to know Mr. Craco as a good friend of my sisters. If it is possible, I would like him to be sent here under the care of my sister. The two are very close and I'm sure she will take care of him. When he is ready, send him to the castle and I will personally arrange the rest.

 

Sincerely, Princess Celestia.

 

Celestia was giggling like a school filly. She enjoyed playing pranks on her sister and other members of the castle. Helps lighten things up in this place a bit. Sending the letter out, She went to go and join her sister and lover.

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Celestia was sorting out her mane for the day so she would look presentable. A letter appeared before her. Reading it with a smile, she began to fill out one of her own letters.

 

Dear Dr. Hoffington,

I just so happen to know Mr. Craco as a good friend of my sisters. If it is possible, I would like him to be sent here under the care of my sister. The two are very close and I'm sure she will take care of him. When he is ready, send him to the castle and I will personally arrange the rest.

 

Sincerely, Princess Celestia.

 

Celestia was giggling like a school filly. She enjoyed playing pranks on her sister and other members of the castle. Helps lighten things up in this place a bit. Sending the letter out, She went to go and join her sister and lover.

The doctor nodded as he looked to Draco "Mr. Draco it seems that your going to live in the castle," The doctor said as Draco was about to leave. "Say what now?" Draco asked as he looked almost wide eyed. He could have sworn he heard he was going to live in the castle. As soon he reheard the same statement he had walked towards the castle almost in a daze.

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Luna was pacing in place with a sharp grin on her muzzle. She was excited. Within a few minutes, Aaron was in the dining hall with his clothes on and hair fixed. He walked up to Luna and he was apparently going to do this.

"Okay Luna. I guess I'm going to teach you how to court a stallion. Why you're asking me and not Tia, I have no idea."
"Because, from the stories my sister has told me, it is the male who does the courting in your world, and you managed to have my sister fall for you. A no simple feet. So, why not learn courting techniques from you."

Aaron looked to Luna in surprise. But he was still confused.
"And you're a master of manipulation, ergo seduction."

There it is.

"Fine. I'll help you. First lesson, keep your cool. It is important to always remain calm and collective in any given situation. However, this does not mean you should appear emotionless. Show interest in what she, I mean he has to say."

Luna was eating up every word that exited his mouth. Paying the closest of attention.

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Luna was pacing in place with a sharp grin on her muzzle. She was excited. Within a few minutes, Aaron was in the dining hall with his clothes on and hair fixed. He walked up to Luna and he was apparently going to do this.

"Okay Luna. I guess I'm going to teach you how to court a stallion. Why you're asking me and not Tia, I have no idea."

"Because, from the stories my sister has told me, it is the male who does the courting in your world, and you managed to have my sister fall for you. A no simple feet. So, why not learn courting techniques from you."

Aaron looked to Luna in surprise. But he was still confused.

"And you're a master of manipulation, ergo seduction."

There it is.

"Fine. I'll help you. First lesson, keep your cool. It is important to always remain calm and collective in any given situation. However, this does not mean you should appear emotionless. Show interest in what she, I mean he has to say."

Luna was eating up every word that exited his mouth. Paying the closest of attention.

When Draco came walking through he heard the advice. "Or you can just be your self," Draco said aloud. He shrugged "If your interested in a stallion just be your self Luna," Draco said. "Now it seems I'm going to live here for awhile to sort through my problems," Draco said with a chuckle.

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Luna jumped at Draco's voice. She was quickly turning from dark blue to a bright red. How much did he hear.

"D-Draco! W-When did you get here?"

She walked up to him but realized something.

"Wait. Why are you here? Are you making another delivery?"

Luna was excited that her he has returned.

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Luna jumped at Draco's voice. She was quickly turning from dark blue to a bright red. How much did he hear.

"D-Draco! W-When did you get here?"

She walked up to him but realized something.

"Wait. Why are you here? Are you making another delivery?"

Luna was excited that her he has returned.

"No doctor said I need to live here for awhile. So That I can sort through my problems," Draco said as he looked at the excitable mare. "Is that a blush I see?" Draco asked teasingly as he saw the poor mare blush. "I think afew minutes about. And I hear you had an interest in a stallion. Just be yourself," Draco said.

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Live here? Luna had a feeling her sister had a hand in this. But her attention was brought to Draco's question.

"Well, y-you see... I-I-I... "

Luna gave a sigh in defeat.

"I do."

There was an awkward silence. Aaron looked to the two.

"Oh, I think Tia is calling me. Coming Tia!"

Aaron ran off leaving the two alone with each other.

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Live here? Luna had a feeling her sister had a hand in this. But her attention was brought to Draco's question.

"Well, y-you see... I-I-I... "

Luna gave a sigh in defeat.

"I do."

There was an awkward silence. Aaron looked to the two.

"Oh, I think Tia is calling me. Coming Tia!"

Aaron ran off leaving the two alone with each other.

Draco chuckled "He can't handle awkward situations," Draco said then thought. "I might as well pay rent if I'm going to be living here you know. It just won't feel right if I'm staying here for free," Draco said as he looked at Aaron retreating and let out a boisterous laugh. "He won't handle the demands of court,"

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"I will not have that. You are on medical retreat. I would not dare have you..."

Luna became drowsy. It was past her bed time. She was generally nocturnal.

"Look, I am happy to have you here. But I will not have a guest pay to stay under a doctors order. Please accept my offer. We may settle this at a later time. But for now, I must slumber. Good day fare courier."

Luna began to walk to her room, a bit tired. She was hoping he would enjoy his time here.

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"I will not have that. You are on medical retreat. I would not dare have you..."

Luna became drowsy. It was past her bed time. She was generally nocturnal.

"Look, I am happy to have you here. But I will not have a guest pay to stay under a doctors order. Please accept my offer. We may settle this at a later time. But for now, I must slumber. Good day fare courier."

Luna began to walk to her room, a bit tired. She was hoping he would enjoy his time here.

"Of course need an escort o your room?" Draco asked slightly as he was being a gentle stallion. "Alright alright. I understand no paying for room and board," Draco said jokingly. "You sure drive a hard bargain Luna," Draco said teasingly as he noticed her swaying. He smiled as he got up under her and proceeded to carry her" Allow me," Draco said.

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Luna felt her body leave the ground, yet she was not flying. She looked down to the stallion carrying her. Apparently she collapsed on those stairs, because this couldn't be real. She wouldn't really care either way. Draco carried the sleepy princess to her room, and Luna was enjoying every minute of it. They were at the foot of her room and Luna's face portrayed disappointment. She got to her hooves and opened her door.

"T-Thank you Courier."

Luna was about to go inside but she made a snap decision. She turned around and gave him a kiss on his cheek for his noble deed and quickly closed the door and locked it behind her. She was breathing heavily at her actions. She went to her bed and fell asleep, her pillow held close to her.

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Luna felt her body leave the ground, yet she was not flying. She looked down to the stallion carrying her. Apparently she collapsed on those stairs, because this couldn't be real. She wouldn't really care either way. Draco carried the sleepy princess to her room, and Luna was enjoying every minute of it. They were at the foot of her room and Luna's face portrayed disappointment. She got to her hooves and opened her door.

"T-Thank you Courier."

Luna was about to go inside but she made a snap decision. She turned around and gave him a kiss on his cheek for his noble deed and quickly closed the door and locked it behind her. She was breathing heavily at her actions. She went to her bed and fell asleep, her pillow held close to her.

"It's Draco dear Luna it's Draco," Draco said as he walked towards his room. Which seemed conveniently next to Luna's room. He sighed as he entered his room. He laid onto the very comfy bed as he started to sing one more song, this time though it was a friend of his song.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QPoTGyWT0Cg&hd=1

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The hours went on as Luna slept. She awoke to the familiar grogginess that's always accompanied by the setting of the sun. She got out of her bed and Got ready for dinner. But then she remembered. The kind courier sleeping in the same castle as she was. She couldn't wait to see him again. After a few minutes, Luna joined the royal banquet hall. There she found Aaron and Celestia. Aaaron gave her a kiss and they both sat down next to each other. Then came... Blue Blood. He strolled in, head held high as if he was princess of existence itself.

"Hello auntie. Ape."

"Starre zito tuo facia, Blue Blood."

Luna gave a giggle. Aaron taught her a few insults in his earth languages. She believed that that insult translated into "Shut up your face". He didn't know what it meant but he knew it was an insult. Blue blood sat down with a humph and our food was brought to us. For Celestia and Blue Blood was a divine salad. And for Luna and Aaron, Eggs and hash browns. celestia hated it when he ate meat in front of her, so he took it upon himself to not to.

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The hours went on as Luna slept. She awoke to the familiar grogginess that's always accompanied by the setting of the sun. She got out of her bed and Got ready for dinner. But then she remembered. The kind courier sleeping in the same castle as she was. She couldn't wait to see him again. After a few minutes, Luna joined the royal banquet hall. There she found Aaron and Celestia. Aaaron gave her a kiss and they both sat down next to each other. Then came... Blue Blood. He strolled in, head held high as if he was princess of existence itself.

"Hello auntie. Ape."

"Starre zito tuo facia, Blue Blood."

Luna gave a giggle. Aaron taught her a few insults in his earth languages. She believed that that insult translated into "Shut up your face". He didn't know what it meant but he knew it was an insult. Blue blood sat down with a humph and our food was brought to us. For Celestia and Blue Blood was a divine salad. And for Luna and Aaron, Eggs and hash browns. celestia hated it when he ate meat in front of her, so he took it upon himself to not to.

Draco walked in slowly. "Evening every pony and human," Draco said simply as he sat down and had some Hay steak (Kinda like steak except with hay heh.). "Mmm nice," Draco said as he ae slowly. "So Luna what are your stars going to be like for tonight?" Draco asked Luna between bites. "Plus I've been thinking about your past. You have said no pony apreciates yours nights. Well alot of ponies do," Draco said simply.

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Luna looked a bit surprised. Where was this coming from.

"I admit that I do have some feelings of neglect from the other ponies when concerning my night sky. But in this new time I find that a night life exists. Though developing connections has been difficult do to the... incident."

"You mean your temper tantrum."

Aaron threw a roll at Blue Blood skewering it on his horn. He let out a yelp as if somepony cut it off.

"But, to be honest Draco, I don't hold a grudge. We all paid for that day, and though we may not be as close, we do have something."

Luna gave a blush at the couriers concern for her. Making her like him more and more.

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Luna looked a bit surprised. Where was this coming from.

"I admit that I do have some feelings of neglect from the other ponies when concerning my night sky. But in this new time I find that a night life exists. Though developing connections has been difficult do to the... incident."

"You mean your temper tantrum."

Aaron threw a roll at Blue Blood skewering it on his horn. He let out a yelp as if somepony cut it off.

"But, to be honest Draco, I don't hold a grudge. We all paid for that day, and though we may not be as close, we do have something."

Luna gave a blush at the couriers concern for her. Making her like him more and more.

"In the olden days the stars are what pulled the sailors home from their long voyages," Draco said as he glared at Blueblood his silver eyes were absolutely terrifying. "Blueblood shut it," Draco said simply and had a very cold tone to it. "Go on and whine about your horn. Some of us actually have real problems to deal with than our appearances," Draco said simply.

 

"Now where was I. Oh yes the stars. The stars were and still are used by sailors and astronomers," Draco said his piece simply. "But don't mind me saying this Celestia it is partly your own fault for your sister's how shall I say 'Fall from grace," Draco said. "If I remember correctly from my families tomes. They were knights in Luna's service long ago. All she asked was for maybe an hour longer," he said simply. "That tore her sunder. Then came that darkness. That's what my ancestors called it,"

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Aaron and Celestia looked to the courier. Luna also looked to Draco with a dropped jaw.

"Draco! That is not true. I was at fault. I was jealous of my sister and her daylight. I gave in to my own selfishness. And yes I did ask for a little more time, but Celestia is not at fault."

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Aaron and Celestia looked to the courier. Luna also looked to Draco with a dropped jaw.

"Draco! That is not true. I was at fault. I was jealous of my sister and her daylight. I gave in to my own selfishness. And yes I did ask for a little more time, but Celestia is not at fault."

Draco chuckled simply and said "And yet tell me did she notice your pain?" Draco asked simply. "Hmm well I maybe harsh but I am telling the truth. It's equally your faults but as I said part of the blame lays with your sister Luna," Draco said simply. "She was o ruler just as you are. But she is also your sister. A sister who was in the spotlight. You see I used to have a younger sister too," Draco said simply as he took a tip of his wine . "Hmm good wine. Anyhow a sister who isn't around anymore," Draco said simply.

"Gone as in dead. Fire over took my parent's home. Funny now that I look bac on it now she wasn't old enough for a cutie mark," Draco looked sad but hid it quite well underneath a mask of a humble courier.

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"While I am sorry for your loss, that is no reason to say such things to my sister."

Aaron was getting frustrated. This stallion was insulting his lover and he would not stand for this.

"You know Draco. I have heard the story of Nightmare Moon and what events lead up to it."

Luna was worried now 'Aaron please no.' She thought to herself.

"Aaron. That's enough, Sweety."

Luna was relieved. Now Celestia began to speak.

"I am sorry for your loss, Draco. And I admit I let my pride take hold of me. And after I had to banish my sister, it tore me apart. ANd it only got worse as time went on. A thousand years of my regret festering in my being of my own folly. Luna I am truly sorry for what happened all those years ago. But it was the easiest option. I could not change you back, so I had to banish you for the good of fellow ponies. What I did, Draco, was my best. I was the ruler of Eauestria on a day that was impossible to get it right. And we have paid the price of it."

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Draco chuckled and said "Don't think of it as me as insulting you Celestia. I feel that there is still some tension between you and Luna," Draco said simply. He looked towards Aaron. "Oh yes but so do I from my family's tomes. Long ago my family served as Luna's protectors. Under the name the Red death. How we got the name I do not know. But the O'Malley's were and always will be knights," Draco said simply "anyhow I may sund like I'm insulting you I'm not. As I am saying part of the blame lays with Celestia. And also human a word to the wise: Don't mess with me," Draco said simply.

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Aaron gave a low chuckle. His views were the same as his.

"Agreed. Magic is merely a tool. It depends on how it is used. That I agree with."

Luna watched as the two made their philosophical comparisons. Luna was tired of this and interviened.

"Look, Draco. I don't blame my sister for what happened all those years ago. And she and I are reforming our kin-ship. I assure you, I have no tension with her. I love my sister, and I'm sure she loves me. Along with my subjects."

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Draco chuckled. "Oh human how would you like to be a prince for the night?" Draco asked as he had a mischievous glint to his eyes. "I mean surely you can tell the two sisters are tired of dealing with the same petty grievances. So I was thinking you can take over for them for the night,"

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