fan fiction a never ending story

[princessluna411 1]

One day twilight,rainbow dash, and applejack was planning a surprise get together for fluttershy. They wanted to show her how much they appreciated her by throwing her this get together. " now your going to tell her that I need her in the library and spike what your going to do is have her run random arens around the town." twilight said. Later that day it was dark and smoggy. " why it looks like it is going to rain ,so scary." fluttershy said. The moon was rising way to soon something was happening.... Nightmare moon was back and wanted revenge on the 6 ponies...

" there can't be a get together now it getting to dark." applejack said. " I know we have to cancel it which sucks". Twilight answered. Walking torde them was a dark shadowy figure. It wad night mare....

yo be continued

Edited February 10, 2014 by princessluna411

[GoneForeverBye 184]

I can see someone put a lot of work into this post... .-.

 

So, er... I'm sorry. I truly am.

 

But this just flat-out suc needs lot's and lot's of work before it's good. Everything... from the grammar to story and characters.