Fluttershy fandub need feedback

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Hey everypony I'm trying to do a fandub/demo of Fluttershy and I just want some feedback! I'll attach the file to this thread and anypony interested can download it from here and leave a comment below!

 

 

Fluttershy demo fandub.wav

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There appears to be an error in the link... It could be just me, though.

[Padlock-Keys 57]

There appears to be an error in the link... It could be just me, though.

http://www.mediafire.com/listen/k2941d04be1i2t7/Fluttershy_demo_fandub.wav 

 

Here's a link I uploaded to MediaFire