I need an editor and/or proofreader

[Book Horse 12]

I recently created the prologue of a story about mlp.  I need an editor and a proofreader to check it out and see if it's a good idea and well written and fix mistakes.  As many as I can get.  I would like as many peoples opinions as I can get.  Tell me and I'll PM you the prologue.  I have not written any farther than the prologue.  I need to make sure it gets good reviews before I publish it to fim fiction.

 

The basic idea is a villain (you can tell who in the prologue) coming and sending some ponies to several different worlds, in a way to get rid of them without killing them.  The villain wants to inherit the title of Supreme Ruler of Equestria by getting rid of rule and order, princesses and the royal guard, and regular innocent ponies. 

 

I don't want to get into it.  If you are an experienced editor or know what makes a good story please post and I'll PM you the prologue of the story as soon as I can!

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I would love to... however, I'm personally extremely honest, harsh, overly critical, and nit-picky when it comes to editing people's work; so much so that I tend to make people angry because of it. I might even come off as pretentious/holier-than-thou.

 

Therefore, I will simply support this and signal boost with a post!

 

If/when you ever get around to making the story public, I would be happy to read it.