fan fiction Raptor's Art n' Writing

[Raptor_a22 83]

Might as well keep everything in one nice easy to find thread... thing

 

I have a FIMFiction account, where I write fiction.

And I also sometimes draw lineart with a pencil.

 

Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.

 

Raptors guide on constructive criticism:

 

Unhelpful: "It's bad."

Helpful: "It's bad, here's why (etc etc)"

 

 

Art:

 

Lance is bay with black hair and Hotshot is chestnut with fiery orange hair.

 

Lance and Hotshot. I'm not happy about how Hotshot's leather armour turned out. Was going for a leafy kind of design but it just looks like scribble. Also her crossbow is terrible.

Lance's armour was the hardest part of this, took me ages before I was satisfied with it.

 

Edited March 9, 2012 by Raptor_a22

[ProjectRKA 2,840]

Not bad, Raptor. But Hotshots legs look a bit awkward to me :/

 

I'm not happy about how Hotshot's leather armour turned out.

 

Honestly, I love how the armor turned out x)

[ShadowBean 318]

Not bad, Raptor. But Hotshots legs look a bit awkward to me :/

 

I agree with RKA, But Lance looks really cool