Proof/Pre-reader for my Conversion Bureau fic

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Hello everypony.

 

So . . . . I've been working on this one for awhile. A loooooooooooooooooooooooong while. 3 years last time I checked. Writing, re-writing, brainstorming, forgetting about it while it annoyingly hangs in the back of my head banging against the wall like a persistently suspicious Pinkie Pie! :okiedokielokie:

 

And not necessarily in that order.

 

Truth be told, this is what set me on the path of my career in writing. It awoke within me a passion for the art I never realized I had, and it only deepened my burgeoning love and appreciation for this show and fandom. So I want to see it completed to it's fruition, and I want people to enjoy it, if only a few.

 

As a synopsis so those interested will at least like what they are being asked to proof/pre-read:

 

It's a self-insert story about my ponification and subsequent adventures across Equestria and Earth. I tried to keep the usual cliches and problems about the Conversion Bureau to a minimum. Humans don't eat bowls of kittens for breakfast, ponies don't preach about how much it hurts to tell lies, and the Mane Six don't show up to hail me as the Chosen One.

 

Your job would be pre-reader first and proofreader second. I want the story to be good before it's legible.  As for style of criticism, I'd prefer the Fluttershy version of gentle nudges and corrections if that's all right.

 

If you are interested, here is a link:

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/74842/the-conversion-bureau-ascension

 

the code key is "brotherhood"