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... And I forgot her wings. ...

 

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Click for better quality. Drawn in an hour on chibipaint.

 

Comments and critiques are welcome! :3

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@@Bronyette,

 

It looks great!

 

There is an unnecessary line above the right forehoof that you might want to take care of, and the ear seems odd- maybe darken the lines that distinct it from the head (rounding them out a bit).

 

Other than that, it's brilliant! I especially love the faint reflection in the water. :)

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@@Bronyette,

 

It looks great!

 

There is an unnecessary line above the right forehoof that you might want to take care of, and the ear seems odd- maybe darken the lines that distinct it from the head (rounding them out a bit).

 

Other than that, it's brilliant! I especially love the faint reflection in the water. :)

Thank you! And yeah I see what you mean! I'll fix it the next chance I get. :3


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Lol you forgot the wings just like I do.

(But added them back in so that's good...)

Very cute, fluttershy is very well drawn! ;) ;) ;)

Though my only problem with the drawing is the background is really flat looking.

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Lol you forgot the wings just like I do.

(But added them back in so that's good...)

Very cute, fluttershy is very well drawn! ;) ;) ;)

Though my only problem with the drawing is the background is really flat looking.

It's hard to make backgrounds. XD thanks for the input. I'll try to do something about it. Maybe I'll texture it. :3

 

  

oooo she looks so cute >3<

fascinating to see how she would have looked as an earth pony in the first image.lol x3

Hehe, thanks! I always draw my Earth Pony OC so now I accidentally forget to draw wings and horns. XD

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Just so adorable :wub: . Take a bow my good friend, job well done

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Soft colors and Fluttershy go together quite well, I must say.

 

Her tail is crazy long though. Not necessarily a bad thing.

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Lovely picture; especially love the sky/water.

As for critique:

-the part of the mane visible at the back of Fluttershy's head might look better as a single curve (at the moment t looks a bit braided)

-the lake might look better with an added strip of sand around the water's edge, could help with giving some depth to the thing too

-consider making the outline of the eye end into a point

 

Not a point of critique but a suggestion: Have you tried adding some feather outlines inside the wing?

 

That's really all I can make out.

Looking forward t your next piece :)

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Lovely picture; especially love the sky/water.

xcept that the As for critique:

-he part of the mane visible at the back of Fluttershy's head might look better as a single curve (at the moment t looks a bit braided

-the lake might look better with an added strip of sand around thewater's edge, could help with giving some depth to the thing too

-consider making the outline of the eye end in a point

 

Not a point of critique but a suggestion: Have you tried adding some feather outlines inside the wing?

 

That's really all I can make out.

Looking forward t your next piece :)

 

Aww thank you. These are all super helpful. ^^ I appreciate it.

 

 

Drawn in an hour? I'm jealous of your mad skillz.

Actually an hour and 29 minutes. XD after all of the edits I've made.
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