Immersed ~Critique Wanted~

[Foxx 258]

Hey guys!

 

So, I whipped this up in a few hours and I wanted to get some critique on it. I am trying a new wing style and playing around with that so please tell me what you think of the wings. I'd like some real critique please, not candy-coated marshmallows. Needless to say you do not have to be a professional reviewer, just someone with an opinion! I would like to know what I should keep doing and what I should improve upon.

 

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Please excuse the terrible grammar, I am on my phone. Please comment! Even if you do not have a critique, I want to hear what you have to say!!!

 

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Stay Foxxy!

Edited April 14, 2014 by Foxx

[Casy 238]

Hello Foxx! Nice to see that you keep asking for critique and i have to say you improved very much! Congratz! Also..shading... and composition.. MUCH BETTER than last time. Awesome! keep up good work.

To the wings.. It just takes practice.

Those wings looks like cotton on the stick. Try to look at wings of birds and take inspiration from them, or just type to google "wings tutorial"

If you don't mind (not best, it took me 3 minutes, but as example it will be ok)

 

Some good tutorials: 

 

 

 

Also some of my artworks with wings might help you:

 

 

 

 

 

Edited April 14, 2014 by Casy