preview of my comic about a psychotic pony(not final project)

[Scare Effect 312]

this is a comic about a 'pony' named scare effect on a mission to hunt down the evil sides of the mane 6.

this takes place in another world opposite to Equestria in every way.

 

i hope you enjoy.

fyi.Scare Effect is insane and psychotic 

[Your Nightly Spectre 1,061]

Well... uhh... Still a better love story than Twilight?  

Edited May 9, 2014 by TheDarkStar

[Scare Effect 312]

It is not a love story just so you know ok

Well... uhh... Still a better love story than Twilight?

 

[yayayayayala 1,669]

I can't read what Pinkamena's saying in that second panel thing...

[Scare Effect 312]

I can't read what Pinkamena's saying in that second panel thing...

Pinkamena said " I'm gonna kill you when I get free."-pinkemena

The final project is on the way soon OK.

[yayayayayala 1,669]

Pinkamena said " I'm gonna kill you when I get free."-pinkemena

The final project is on the way soon OK.

Thanks, and awesome! ^U^ I can't wait!

[Pinkamena Dianne Pie 465]

Scare will pay for this...

 

I like it. Looking at the two pictures, the left one seems incomplete when you compare it to the right one. The one on the right is excellent work. It's clean, all the body proportions are right, and the facial expressions are perfect.

[Scare Effect 312]

Scare will pay for this...

 

I like it. Looking at the two pictures, the left one seems incomplete when you compare it to the right one. The one on the right is excellent work. It's clean, all the body proportions are right, and the facial expressions are perfect.

Well thanks i think and don't worry pinkanena does get free but does she get her revenge

 

I have the last of this comic done but its not colored or detailedyet so I will ask those who read this if they want me to post these here just leave a comment below. Thank You.

[yayayayayala 1,669]

Yes! Definitely post it! And maybe put a helpful transcript beneath each panel 

[Scare Effect 312]

Yes! Definitely post it! And maybe put a helpful transcript beneath each panel

Okay I'll post it and I'll put what their saying below to help you out with what their saying.also keep in mind these are not the final drafts so here is the next 3 pages.

Pinkamena: payback time.

 

Hope you like them hopefully I will get them finalized soon Therese are still 4more pages left of the pinkamena chapter if you guys can choose who the next pony to get a visit from Scare Effect.here are the choices.

Fluttershout

Insane Twilight

Rainbow factory rainbow dash

Sunset Shimmer

Nightmare Rarity

Normal pinkie pie

The choice is yours.

Thank you for reading and your contributions the the story thank you.

Edited May 20, 2014 by Chaotic flier

[Scare Effect 312]

Okay I'll post it and I'll put what their saying below to help you out with what their saying.also keep in mind these are not the final drafts so here is the next 3 pages.

Pinkamena: payback time.

Hope you like them hopefully I will get them finalized soon Therese are still 4more pages left of the pinkamena chapter if you guys can choose who the next pony to get a visit from Scare Effect.here are the choices.

Fluttershout

Insane Twilight

Rainbow factory rainbow dash

Sunset Shimmer

Nightmare Rarity

Normal pinkie pie

The choice is yours.

Thank you for reading and your contributions the the story thank you.

Sorry everypony I completely forgot about this topic so to make it up to you I'll post the last bit of this comic.and disregard the previous post regarding the next ponies for the comic I decided to just stick with pinkamena.but I will add 2other crazy ponies into it okay.

Sorry if you cant under stand her.

I am currently working on the final draft of this comic so here is the last few pages.this ending will be changed Because I want to make more comics with these ponies

Sorry everypony I completely forgot about this topic so to make it up to you I'll post the last bit of this comic.and disregard the previous post regarding the next ponies for the comic I decided to just stick with pinkamena.but I will add 2other crazy ponies into it okay.Sorry if you cant under stand her. I am currently working on the final draft of this comic so here is the last few pages.IMG_20140508_115036.jpgIMG_20140508_115100.jpg IMG_20140508_115230.jpgIMG_20140508_115230.jpgthis ending will be changed Because I want to make more comics with these ponies

I am currently drawing most of these pictures so the final will be up by the end of next week

[yayayayayala 1,669]

Awesome!! I can't wait to see what it looks like in the end

[Scare Effect 312]

Okay here is the new first page.there are 2 of them one is the original the other is a digital version.the original

digital it may be side ways

 

Please tell me which one is better so I can make the others like it.

[yayayayayala 1,669]

 

 

NUMBER 666

 

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE

 

 

 

I like both, actually XD! But the digital one looks cleaner, and the "font" is more readable. Hope that helped XD!

[Scare Effect 312]

 

 

NUMBER 666

 

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE

 

 

 

I like both, actually XD! But the digital one looks cleaner, and the "font" is more readable. Hope that helped XD!

Thanks I'm also working on a title page so now I know to make it digitally. Also thanks for you opinion I'm sure it will help.

Here is the title page.hopefully it is okay.

[yayayayayala 1,669]

Haha, she seems a bit apprehensive at a pony who's grinning when their number comes up! That is quite awesome!

[Scare Effect 312]

Haha, she seems a bit apprehensive at a pony who's grinning when their number comes up! That is quite awesome!

That she is.

 

Okay I need some ideas on how scare captured pinkie. Or what happened before she was caught. I would be happy for your help thank you.

[yayayayayala 1,669]

That she is.

 

Okay I need some ideas on how scare captured pinkie. Or what happened before she was caught. I would be happy for your help thank you.

Perhaps Pinkie was going for a walk and Scare snuck up on her. [Elaborate depending on what your current plotline is. ]

[Scare Effect 312]

Perhaps Pinkie was going for a walk and Scare snuck up on her. [Elaborate depending on what your current plotline is. ]

Originally pinkie is the one who pulls Scare's number which can be seen in the title and first page. And pinkie is the one doing the sneaking.but I do like your idea maybe I'll use it in my next comic.

[Scare Effect 312]

Originally pinkie is the one who pulls Scare's number which can be seen in the title and first page. And pinkie is the one doing the sneaking.but I do like your idea maybe I'll use it in my next comic.

Here are the next 3 pages.these are rough drafts and I need your opinion on them also they don't have words yet.

[yayayayayala 1,669]

Nice! I love the expressions in the last preview.

"Your time has come, #666" is what she's saying in the second one, right?

[Scare Effect 312]

Nice! I love the expressions in the last preview.

"Your time has come, #666" is what she's saying in the second one, right?

yes she is. i just needed a second opinion on these pictures before i finish editing them.

[Pinkamena-Pills 6,840]

Personal opinion on the whole 'Pinkamena psycho killer' thing aside..Pretty decent,you've done fairly well.   

[Scare Effect 312]

Personal opinion on the whole 'Pinkamena psycho killer' thing aside..Pretty decent,you've done fairly well.   

thank you for the complement. if you have any ideas for this comic they will be very helpful in the completion of this comic. 

[Pinkamena-Pills 6,840]

@, Nothing really other than having Pinkamena kick the other pony's ass for hurting her.   

Edited June 27, 2014 by Pinkamena-Pills