request Anti-My Little Unicorn Fanfic Help!

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Anti My Little Unicorn Fanfic Help:

 

Maybe someone should make a fanfic portraying the Unicornicopians as the bad guys with an insane army taking over Equestria. The Grand Ruler Celesto is actually a tyrant dictator (meaningful name much), while the power of believing is actually their misguided faith in their ''motives'' as well as their faith in ''authority is always right.''

 

My suggestions are:

 

It should be a Deconstruction Fic (go to TV Tropes)

It should have depth, it is heartwarming and most importantly, it should make sense.

A sort of realism to the drama, characters are not flat.

 

And that's it

 

 

'''Here is my template:'''

 

 

Celesto was once defeated by Queen Solara and King (I forgot his fandom name), before the birth of Princess Celestia and Luna. Banished to the depths of his mind.

 

Prologue: Twilight reads their story in an old book, being glad its just a story.... Or is it?

 

Dark skies loom over the plains of Ponyville (You think of the rest)

 

Celestia will have a one on one battle with Celesto to spare her subjects in an all out war with Unicornicopia. Celestia will lose because of the solar eclipse, Celesto will then beat her up and slings verbal insults at her. Luna arrives and fights for her sister's behalf as she is in no condition to continue fighting. Luna loses because Celesto cheated, and attacked her from behind when she was showing mercy when she just finished and demanded him to leave and to never show his face in Equestria again.

 

All of Canterlot is in distraught, Celesto will keep the princesses prisoners in an anti-magic stasis bubble. Later he will force Celestia to marry him to strengthen the merge of Unicornicopia and Equestria. At first she thinks it's a political marriage but then it's revealed that he has the "hots" for her!!!! and would forcefully have her bear his children. Luna and Celestia are disgusted! They can only hope for the elements of harmony...

 

Meanwhile Queen Cadence is the last monarch, and takes control of everything, as Princess Twilight is still to young to govern. Her brother King Shinning Armor manages the army to prepare for war.

 

lightning dawn meets up with Twilight in an "attempt" to convince her to yield to the Great "autocratic empire" [of] Unicornicopia. Saying she belongs their. Twilight will have nothing for it, and deconstructs his belief and motives. lightning at first pities Twilight, truly believing she's insane (like Ace Ray) and belongs in an insane asylum. Twilight annoyed, and continues her rant. lightning becomes psychotic and threatens to kill her next time they meet while saying she doesn't belong to their "magnificent" empire anyway. To lightning's surprise, Twilight took it as a compliment. The two bitterly part ways.

 

Princess Twilight and her friends have an adventure to evacuate the neighboring kingdoms (the griffons, the changelings, the dragons) to Canterlot as the (Princess Cadence) shields are being raised as well as to convince them to join the army, and have a rousing speech about "think of your children if they win" type of speech.

 

Discord is the one to rescue the princesses as well as confess his love for Celestia.

 

The lightning dawn and his friends journey to end Twilight's "madness". As the adventure and the hardships continue the Mane Six realizes the true power of their virtue:

 

Honesty becomes Integrity

Loyalty becomes Devotion

Generosity becomes Charity

Kindness becomes Compassion

Laughter becomes Optimism

Magic becomes Friendship

 

Harmony at it's finest

 

As the Mane Six realizes this as they become true Alicorns and they are the ones to defeat their (supposedly more powerful magical alicorn counterparts.)

 

Twilight realizes the last virtue at the penultimate battle. The epic battle between the Equestrians and the Unicornicopians begin. Her friends sacrifice their power to give Twilight strength (becomes a Grand Alicorn like the other princesses) at the final battle with Celesto, as the beam of rainbow friendship forms, added with Love by Cadence and Shinning Armor with Celestia and Luna. The beam turns into a divine golden ray of... Wait for it... Belief and blasted Celesto, leaving a giant crater. Celesto fatally injured wonders why this did not kill him.

 

Twilight tells him the real virtue of belief (you think of something, I got nothing), Celesto cannot believe the irony and conjures up a beam to attack Twilight from behind. Twilight walking away did not bother to turn as she closes her eyes and redirects the attack back at him. After awhile she turns back to her alicorn state. Where Cadence and Shinning Armor sadly tell her the bad news... Her friends are all turned into crystal.

 

Twilight goes to them and cries, she then hears her friends (talking about friendship, love) and convincing her to never forget the magic of friendship and "believe" they are still with her. She then promises and bring their words to her heart. As Twilight is now ready to rule Equestria.

 

Her friends are placed in the Canterlot square with a placard each:

 

Rarity of Charity

Fluttershy of Compassion

Applejack of Integrity

Rainbow Dash of Devotion

Pinkie Pie of Optimism

 

For all ponies to look up to, and "believe" in the magic of friendship. The End

 

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It's just a template so don't mind my grammar mistakes

 

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Dear everybody,

 

I cannot write this fanfic, it's not that I did not try, but I'm having trouble with my English. I cannot seem to make it... presentable, to be able to do justice to MLP.

 

To be very honest, I was only able to read 3 pages of that awful anti-fanfic. I could not stomach it, for the people who had the courage to read through the whole thing, you guys don't deserve a clap. No! For you guys, I give my salute.

 

I was only able to grasp a bit of the story by MST's and forums, that's how I got to know Ace Ray. The only redeeming, if not, the only sane character there.

 

By just reading three pages. The real moral I was able to grasp is to blindly obey. The magic of believing is kind of lost to me, the author never expounded on it, or I just missed it. Oh and giving your character the title "Grand Ruler" and putting serial numbers on the ponies flanks made me correctly assume this is a dystopia of grand proportions. You're just seeing things from the perspective of the Unicornicopians, mostly lightning dawn, the rather useless student of the Grand Ruler. (pls. Kill him and end his, I mean... My misery.)

 

My head ached when I read it, to those who haven't read it and are curious... I suggest you don't! If you still want, prepare some bag of ice on your head.

 

Yes, it was that bad! I am not exaggerating!