music Song I made

[Henny Penny Benny 936]

Here's a song I made in Garage Band. Probably not all that great, and I'm sure it could use a lot of work, but considering it's the first song I've ever really made, I'm pretty proud of it.

 

 

 

(Sounds best with headphones, I think)

Edited May 21, 2014 by Henny Penny Benny

[Satsuki Kiryuin 1,155]

I think this could work well as soundtrack music, tbh. o3o I like the idea behind it, but I think the mixing could be cleaner. I love your instrument choice, it's very interesting. I'd give it a 7/10, for not being the norm of what you'd hear of an Electronic track (e.g, Big Room, Dubstep, etc.).

[Henny Penny Benny 936]

I think this could work well as soundtrack music, tbh. o3o I like the idea behind it, but I think the mixing could be cleaner. I love your instrument choice, it's very interesting. I'd give it a 7/10, for not being the norm of what you'd hear of an Electronic track (e.g, Big Room, Dubstep, etc.).

Thanks! And thanks for the tips! 

[Guest90210 3,568]

For a first attempt it definitely isn't bad. I've only made a couple attempts at music, but my first was extremely bad. Definitely a lot worse than this. So good job

[Colorful Respawn 399]

Cool first song bro! You can definitely hear the tune and feel the rhythm which is a good thing! Nice work!