NeedsMoreGoth 164 May 24, 2014 Share May 24, 2014 Here are some of my recent drawings. Now I know I'm not a great artist and the value might look smaller because I don't have a scanner and I took the pictures with a camera but I still think some of these look okay. What do you guys think of these? Also, should I join deviantART? 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star-Gazer 202 May 24, 2014 Share May 24, 2014 They're all good, but my favorite would have to be the first one, by a long shot. The others are kinda stiff-looking. No movement. The first one, though. I see movement, I see the action taking place in the drawing. Other than that, these are pretty damn good! 2 Signature made by Sparkle Speed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeedsMoreGoth 164 May 24, 2014 Author Share May 24, 2014 They're all good, but my favorite would have to be the first one, by a long shot. The others are kinda stiff-looking. No movement. The first one, though. I see movement, I see the action taking place in the drawing. Other than that, these are pretty damn good! Yeah. I gotta start coloring more >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Banul 3,831 May 24, 2014 Share May 24, 2014 I think they look great! If I were to make one suggestion though: I know you mentioned that the value is off because you don't have a scanner, but try to make those shadows d and dark areas darker. What happens is that you get into a situation where the picture looks like it has the same value all over. Making some of those areas darker will also make the lighter areas look light, and will really make the image pop. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sugar Pea 2,682 May 24, 2014 Share May 24, 2014 I think you did very well on these! If you need some constructive criticism, I think you should work on the details in the eyes...like, round them up a bit to give them more of a cartoony look. Like the guy above me said, add some darkness here and there to make it stand out as well. Hopefully this is helpful! >-< 1 ℓ٥ﻻ ﻉ√٥υ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeedsMoreGoth 164 May 24, 2014 Author Share May 24, 2014 Thanks for the suggestions. Before I started drawing ponies I drew anime so the eyes I draw are slightly influenced by anime. Also should point out that my anime drawings were straight TERRIBLE. Might just post some so you can see the comparison. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaburoDaimando 1,196 May 24, 2014 Share May 24, 2014 Get yourself a scanner so we can see these delicious drawings in a much higher definition. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lyra Heartstrings- 100 May 24, 2014 Share May 24, 2014 amazing! if i had to choose one thing thats a little off though, it would be the snouts. But still amazing! signature by Kyoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mlpfan185 1,763 May 24, 2014 Share May 24, 2014 (edited) Something was here. Something was here. Something was here. Edited October 10, 2018 by NONAME 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxx 258 May 25, 2014 Share May 25, 2014 Nothing can really be said that hasn't already be mentioned by the guys above me, but I'll give you my 2 cents anyways. -Don't forget to take your time with the intimate details. -Some more detailed shading will make your pictures pop! Although this is personal preference, the eyelashes of the pony on the right bother me. I really don't have much else to say. Happy arting! Aim high kid, but don't aim for the impossible - Rainbow Dash ^Amazing Signature by the great and powerful Lunia!^ >My Request Shop< MLP Forum's self-proclaimed evil enchantress. > My Deviantart< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lighting Star 93 May 25, 2014 Share May 25, 2014 I think if you either get yourself a proper scanner or a tablet and a drawing program you could be on your way to great things 1 On a one-stallion war against all trolls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeedsMoreGoth 164 May 25, 2014 Author Share May 25, 2014 And none of you answered 1 of my questions. XD But from the criticism and the lack of a scanner, I think I'll wait a while longer before I join deviantART. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yayayayayala 1,668 May 26, 2014 Share May 26, 2014 (edited) And none of you answered 1 of my questions. XD But from the criticism and the lack of a scanner, I think I'll wait a while longer before I join deviantART. When you join, be prepared for no one except PonyUniverse and a few others to even see your stuff XD! deviantART is way different from this site I agree with the others about working on your shading and the general stiffness. I love your style, and can't wait to see more! Edited May 26, 2014 by yayayayayala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke 328 May 27, 2014 Share May 27, 2014 I really like this drawing style. I like the eyes best! 燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶燕麦奶 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cosmic Nexus 21 August 29, 2014 Share August 29, 2014 Excellently drawn indeed, from portraits to action shots you defiantly captured them in a bottle. The anime eyes are a neat differential to the the standard pony eyes. If possible at all, drawing one colored would be amazing, but... these one's would look better black and white Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeedsMoreGoth 164 September 3, 2014 Author Share September 3, 2014 Okay, so here's the sexy one. Might be mildly suggestive but I double there'll be problems with me posting this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeedsMoreGoth 164 June 28, 2016 Author Share June 28, 2016 Improvement?http://pre13.deviantart.net/fe3c/th/pre/f/2016/003/3/1/holiday_rarity_by_dragonsnake40-d9mkp38.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeedsMoreGoth 164 September 9, 2023 Author Share September 9, 2023 Oh, these were so bad! I'm in pain! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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