Forgive me for not being more clear. I was saying that it would be a good idea to experiment with other forms of poems in future works, not this specific poem. This one is very good the way it is.
Very well done. The format is quite common, with the four-sentence paragraph, with one line rhyming with another one. If I must suggest, try a few different formats and you'll get much better.
You stupid people with your stupid art talents, making me feel bad about myself.
Very well done, especially for a first attempt. Have a cookie. *Hands cookie*
This is a movie, not a spin-off TV show like 'Torchwood' to 'Doctor Who'. I think that is has very full potential, and think that if the same team is on it, it will be amazing.
I've encountered Rule 63 before, and, as you stated, it generally did not go down very well with me. However, I have read the fanfiction in question and was very impressed by it. This fandom is one of the few that actually did this right.