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I started up poetry again recently and have this... I guess you could call it a beta test poem? It's split poetry or free verse, not fully rhyming and not fully with rhythm but I think it works... Wondering what others thought of it? It's kinda bad buuuuut... I can work on it! ^^
A painful sap
Sticks and burns
Eats and traps.
A beast of no form
A creature of no flesh
A monster of no return
A demon of no rest.
A thing that is nothing
A wicked wisp of a nothing.
For this one nothing beast
The innocent shall kneel
The weak shall keel
The skin that binds two shall peel.
It rots within the essence of life and saps away the loving
Leaving nothing but unrest and stout devotion to scarring the kind of notion
This one nothing
This one nothing
This one nothing.
An emotion.