I am glad and relieved that you do approve of this thus far, as I feared this one would not be up to your liking. I went through several different variations and this one seemed the 'best' out of them. Expressions are hard...
As far as color is concerned...I will not lie, as my coloring skills are barely up to par by any standards. I will be more than happy to add color once I am done with the line work, but I just want to prepare you for the worst if/when it happens. Also, while we are on the subject of coloring, did you have any particular suggestions as to how you wished to have this colored, or even a background to compliment the picture? This is your idea, and I want to get it as close to the mark as possible.
And since I do not wish to double post, here is another small update to your request. I know, it does not seem as though I have done much, but I have added more detail to the wings and touched up some of the line work, though it needs a lot of clean up. Wings...I am so horrible at them. I was erasing so much that I was starting to peel away paper! Anyway,, let me know what you think, as I am just hoping I did not make it worse.