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  1. Starlight: "We can do this time shenanigans literally forever."

    Twilight: "No, what part of immortal pony goddess you don't understand? I can do this thing forever, and you have at best 30-40 years."

    Starlight: "Well, um, I didn't think this thing through"

    Twilight: "No you didn't."

     

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    Rainbow Dash diary "It's been 100 days ever since everypony became walkers, I don't know how much longer I can take it. Ponyvile Canterlot and Cloudsdale are all gone. It's been lonely."

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  2. Twilight: "Dear princess Celestia, what the actual hay? I never wanted those stupid wings. You've forced me to do a stupid spell that made my friends lives miserable" 

    Celestia: "But that's exactly the point you passed the ultimate test in friendship and.."

    Twilight:  "No, you just don't get to do this to me or any creature else!"

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    Twilight "Hey, stay away from Fluttershy!"

    Sunset: "Or what?"

    Twilight "Or I'll shove you into the locker and leave your sorry ass in there."

    Sunset: "Are you out of your damned mind? You will get us both expelled."

    Twilight: "Well, good I am not planning to stay here for long"

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  3. Well let's see I felt that Ember confusion over who Fluttershy was felt really forced. She might forget her name but it's not really an excuse if she could remember her by some other characteristics Fluttershy should have replied "I am meek and yellow"

    Then there is Ember she is a dragon right? So why she doesn't know that dragon eggs need heat to hatch? Spike is the only one who points it out to her. So, like dragon mating is so rare Ember doesn't know how to take care of the eggs? 

    I don't see Garble pushing around Spike as bullying, it's like come on Spike you've spend your whole life with ponies that "babying" him that he doesn't know what's dragon's life is like. Grow a spine Spike.

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  4. Spike was such a beta dragon and I liked that. Fluttershy was so sweet today, it was really amazing. :kindness: She is no dragon expert that was unfortunate. 

    Of course  Garble would be Smolder brother, who else would that be? 

  5. Her name used to be Derpy and then Hasbro fixed her because apparently her design was a an animation mistake. However it's already to late and people raged "Save Derpy" compaign.

    Dr Whoves  is just "hey that pony is a Doctor. Doctor Who? Exactly" I swear he stashed TARDIS somewhere because otherwise this pony is the most boring background pony that ever was :yuck::-P

    Yeah I agree DJ is underutilized or something because she became dull and boring pony who just plays music in background, and that it. No backstory, no nothing, no lesbian love interests. And she had always been a mute. Sorry people who think she just never talks.

  6. They should bring back Coco and make her interact with Rarity. Babs Seed is pretty much gone, and the writers don't know what to do with the good Diamond Tiara after she stopped harassing CMC. CMC hardly exist anymore since Mane 6 and School 6 are stealing the show now with Starlight and Trixie doing their own thing in the background.

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  7. I don't want to say it but I honestly think his reaction to their "fake" failure was genuine.

    The way I see it he really did all three of them to pull it off. He needed Tirek to drain magic from Chryssalis to blast a hole in a magic shield for Cozy to get it through. He also didn't go himself because one he can't pull it off himself, two his existence supposed to be a legend, and three what stopping them to turn on him right then and there? :P

    He also doesn't really need Sombra because all he really cares to get that bell and he told them to stop bickering and work together because that what they need to do to get it.

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  8. On 2/9/2019 at 5:19 PM, Phasereale said:

    The reason why I asked this is because I just created account for FIMfiction and I tried to submit my fanfic work, but it got rejected do to some kind of "Script Format" in which I don't know what that is to be honest.

    I might suggest that you just ask the "approver" that had been approving your fanfic on the website what exactly that means.

     

    If I had to guess you wrote a story as an screenplay and that a big no no.

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    Spoiler

    Twilight: blah blah blah blah

    Applejack: apples, apples, apples

    Your stories had to take place in the Equestria or in Equestria Girls to be approved that unfortunately true, however once it's been approved its usually, and unfortunately I've seen it quite often, everything goes. 

    Just try to be professional about your stories on Fimficton 

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