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Shade gave discord a confused look. "Um... Right... Well what ever... So what's the plan? Go to crystal empire and look for the crystal hart? Then take down sombra?" She asked. Chrysalis seemed unsure of villan, so he just decided to stay out of her way for now and just follow shade around.

Shade looked back at the other ponies, they seemed like they didn't want to go. She thought it would be best if she didn't eather. "Oh come on... He is a royal guard after all. I mean, he looks like one. But that's the problem about this battle, looks can be deseving." She looked at the guard eye to eye. "You are royal guard... Aren't you..." She said waiting for a response.

"So what's going on discord? Worked something out yet?" Shade asked walking up to discord. Villan followed close behind shade, he looked at chrysalis. He gave an evil smile and a wink. He thought that it would make chrysalis think that he's still in her side.

Shade was a bit unsure about telling anypony about her secret, but she felt like she had to before she could get close to anypony. "It's very important that you don't scream or anything." She took a deep breath and held out her hoof. Her hoof got surrounded by green fire. "I'm a changeling" she whispered. She would have said more but her hart was pounding already.

Shade turned to see a royal guard wanted her to come with him... She looked at him and scanned him. She saw that it was one of the generals. She walked beside him. "I don't know about you but I'm going." She said looking back at the other ponies. She then faced the guards ear and quickly whispered, "if you interfere with my plan, your going to be sorry."

Shade entered the room followed by villan. She didn't say anything, she just watched. Things seemed to be going well so she didn't want to interrupt. Villan stood beside shade and looked at her, he looked at her with a funny feeling, almost like he liked her. Then he looks at chrysalis and feels intimidated being in her presents.

Shade smiled as sunset got a small hover. "That wasn't bad, you just need to focus and get the timing right for each flap. But not bad for your first shot." She said. She held out her hoof to help her up. Shade had a lot on her mind, and it was almost driving her crazy, she needed to get some things off her mind. "Um... Can I tell you a secret?"

Shade patted midnight on the head. "Speaking of discord, we should go see how he's holding up, I don't want him to be drained." She said starting to make her way back to discord. Villan felt good to finally be in control of himself. He couldn't have done it without shades help. He followed her hoping to gain her trust soon.

"Thanks, thought I was done for." She said getting back onto her hooves. "Rainbow Dash? Who the hay is that?... What ever... Don't want to know, where's the rest of us?" She asked. Shade wanted to get as much info as she could before sweeping the resistance, so that ment she needed to make friends. That was stepping out of shades comfert zone.

Shade was still 'fighting' off the changeling army. But they aren't going easy on her. A big group of changeling swarmed her and pinned her to the ground. Since she was too tired to fight them off, she had another part of her plan she needed to take cair of... "HELP!!!! Somepony HELP ME!!!" She yelled hoping some pony would come.

Colors are not a problem with OCs... Especially when there dark colors... I do agree that I need to update my OC profile... But seriously... Isn't it obvious why she would be hiding her changeling side...

First... COLORS ARE NOT A PROBLEM WITH OCs... second: READ THE DAMN BACKSTORY... She dosnt live in the hive, she was kicked out because she was only part changeling and not full changeling... Furthermore: your review is week and plane... It seems to only focus on some and not all parts of the OC... grade: F Also... It's not like I made my OC page to be reviewed... I don't update it constantly, mainly because I'm lazy to keep it updated...

Shade scanned villan for a second. He wasn't lying, he felt the same way when shade first discovered. Then she remembered how she got through that phase. She casted a spell on villan making him see images of all the good times before he discovered he was a halfling. He also learned what he is capable of as a halfling. "Now you must choose, eather to follow your changeling side, or your poni... Griffon side." She said to villan. Villan paused to think. He knew which one to choose, but something felt like the other one was the right one... He struggled then he chose his griffon side over his changeling side. The same side shade chose when she had to choose. Shade smiled, she walked up to him and put her hoof out, "you ok?" She asked. Villan was a bit staggered. "I... I think so..." He replied as he took shades hoof. Shade pulled him up. "Ok then... Your still going to have to earn my trust you know..." She said. "Um... Yah... Right" he said feeling aquward. Shade turned to midnight, "ok... Now we need to think up a way to shoo chrysalis and the other changeling if discords plan fails..." She said.

"well... i guess its just because i havent really described how to fly before. all i know is that its easier than it looks... i guess" shade took a step back and took a deep breath. she started flapping her wings and she got a little hover as she did. "its simple really... just need to know how to flap your wings." shade stopped and came back to the ground. "why dont you try?" she suggested.

shade did not want discord to go through with this... but eather way, chrysalis was probably going to feed on him anyways. she turned away not wanting to see this. *" come midnight, i dont think we should be around to see this"* she said. as shade was walking away, she saw villan come through the window. she imidietly jumped and tackled him to the ground. "how could i have been so foolish to believe that you where on my side." she said. "i... no... shade... you dont understand." he replyed. "what dont i understand? you where with chrysalis all along... you where just spying on me." "no shade... you must listen to me... i dont know what it is but it feels like one moment i feel like a changeling, the next... i feel like im resisting them. please shade... believe me." shade backed off for a second to think... it was like he described how shade felt when she found out about being a changeling. but she forgot how she overcame that feeling.

Shade was doing her best to fight off the changelings... Or at least pretending to... She played by her own rules, her plan was to take out a huge group of the resistance when the time was right. But for now she just stuck to 'fighting off' the changeling army.

Rarity looked down at sweetiebelle who was wrapped around her hoof. she had the thought that her sister felt intimidated with all that was going on. She looked down at sweetiebelle and gave a small smile to keep her calm and comfortable. It's what a good sister dose. Manic peaked out from under his board to see sonic and Amy dashing off. He quickly tightened a bolt in the hover board's hovering mechanism and slammed the hood down. He then jumped on his board and dashed out of the boutique to catch up with Amy. He did want to find out what was going on with shadow and knuckles, but protecting Amy was his number one thing on his list of things to do. Sonia watched as sonic, Amy, and manic dash out of the boutique. She sighed and thought that they where just being her typical brothers. Sonic runs away, Amy chases sonic, and manic follows Amy. She listened to twilight saying that the little fillies might try to make a game in finding the chaos emeralds. "How are we going to find the chaos emeralds anyways?" She asked.

Shade jaw dropped... Then she smashed her hoof to her face. "*discord... That's a bad idea... That's a very bad idea..."* she said to him. _______ Villan flew towards canterlot, he looked through a window and saw shade smacking her face, and discord and chrysalis talking... Or something.

Shade shrugged. "I don't know... Your the one who wanted to come out here..." Shade thought for a moment. Sunset did want to learn how to fly... "How about I teach you the basics on flying?" She asked feeling doubtful. Shade hadent used her feathered wings to fly in a long time. The last time she used them was to fly out of the sewers. Then she only used her translucent wings. The flight patterns are very different with both types of wings... She wasn't sure she could remember how to fly with her feathered wings.

Shade was growling and glaring at chrysalis. She didn't like that she was here and didn't think discords idea was a good one. _____ Villan grinned, he was about to attack the two princesses when something clicked in his mind. All he did was node and flew away to canterlot castle.

I haven't gotten my OC rated by someone before... Whatever I might as well get mine rated... Link to OC is in my signature.

Shade smiled back at kit, "I would have done batter if you hadent gotten in my way all the time." She said punching him in the shoulder. "So what next? Up for another round of something or do you want to go mess with other ponies. I'm fine with whatever." She said flicking her mane.

Shade watched the events that where happening, studding the others is what shade learned to do as changeling. She was still eating the extra pieces of toast that she took. She still thought about her days in the guild, but wanted to forget about them, it might have been fun, but there where still thoes moments that she hated to remember... When sunset asked to go back to the lobby, she noded and followed her.

Shade was owning the game, it was fairly easy, even tho shes use to playing solo. it was a nice change for once. it wasnt untill lvl 12 when she started slipping, but it wasnt bad. Shade grinned, "this shouldn't take too long... And it's an easy one." She said with a smerk