searching The ninja's past (Naruto RP, still searchin.)

[rolle 320]

Link to RP

 

 

(The backstory text below is optional as it will be said in the story.)

 

Once upon a time, in a far away land there was a princess who was the last remaining wall from the chaos of war. Although her army was great and she had most of the citizens at her side the wars broke out, one day the council and the princess decided to let her eat of the shinju tree's only fruit that is said to only bloom every thousand years and through eating it she got the shinju's chakra along with the ability to create chakra and manipulate it.She soon learned how to use it and even though her new appearance with the horns and the third eye gained from the immense chakra of the shinju.

Even though she demonstrated her powers to be supreme to everything the armies could spit out the wars continued, soon she found out that no matter what happend wars would happen so she slowly and regretfully activated the third eye's true purpose ''the eternal tsukuyomi'' and trapped everyone in the shinju's dream world. After a long time of this dream the people slowly turned into other beings known as ''zetzu'' which were like humans but seemingly harder, as if they were made of wood. After the eternal tsukuyomi the princess now known as the rabbit goddess or demon by others had two sons.

She raised the two to be wonderful kids realizing her own dream, but she soon understood that they could manipulate and even owned the chakra of the shinju. Her heart was broken and she started to cry as she finally understood why they looked so diffrent than the other humans she met, it was the chakra inside of them. Knowing this she still raised them up until a point where they found people that were not in the eternal tsukuyomi. While they were loved by the people their mother was not, they knew it was her doing and even though it broke her heart she handed these people her children and asked them to keep them safe. Later many years the two children had been raised and trained to fight something that broke out of hiding one year after they were put with the other humans ''the ten tails'' also known as the ''juubi'', he himself and his brother fought this monster when it attacked their home, they fought for a long time and even when it was near for them to lose, they won by using a sealing technique their mother taught them when they were small. They sealed the entire ten tails inside of the brother who possessed the greater amount of chakra and was able to supress the juubi that way, later the other brother dissapeared. The brother who now possessed the juubi made wonderous things and even created ninshuu to share chakra with others. Creating an even and balanced society where nobody worked for nothing. But this was all over when the next generation came along and used their chakra as their own in the way how the mother of the brothers did, even if the brother refered to the ''Sage of the Six Paths'' tried to teach them ninshuu nobody would listen, except his own two sons he made. The older brother was much more talented than the younger though and with this started the age of rivalty between two opposing forces. Even if the younger brother was inferior to the older he gathered friends and stood up to the older brother gaining an equal power, and even to this day this fight continues in the search for bijuus which the sage created before he died. And so begins our story where peace is but a temporary solution to wars. 

 

(The backstory text above is optional)

 

 

 

Did you even read that? If you did you really read something pointless, but congratz either way.

 

Rules.

No godmodding.

Please respect others and dont rage.

No mary sues

Don't control other peoples characters unless they are in genjutsu (partial control but not absolute!), shadow imitated (they will mimic you) or if you use a jutsu that lets you control them (ex: mind body switch.)

Use grammar, i wont be crazy about it but please dont sound like a 4 year old child as it prevents the RP sometimes.

If you think something is wrong its probly right but ask me or somebody in the ooc if you want to confirm something.

 

A quick mention about the sheet below: I will not accept you 100% if you go for jounin chunin or anbu rank straight away (No kage rank. Unless you were an ANBU or jounin that was reccomended to the kage tournament.)

 

Character Sheet (human btw)

 

Name:

Gender:
Clan:

Village:

Age:

Team (if genin):
Chakra Affinity:
Chakra Specialization:
Rank:
Kekkei Genkai (optional):
Special traits:

Personality:

Appearance:

Backstory:

Equipment:

 

 

Also you can create jutsus if you pm me and say which jutsu this is derived from if it has one. (limited pool of genjutsu and other styles makes people not very original aswell as making the combat really repetive)

 

Element (if its non-elemental leave this blank):
Parent jutsu:
Effect:
Chakra taxing (yes or no):
Time for it to activate after hand seals are used (if any):
Hand seals (if any):
Kekkei genaki requirements:

 

 

Accepted jutsus:

 

Name: Black Hole

Element (if its non-elemental leave this blank): Lighting
Parent jutsu: Chidori
Effect: Acts like Chidori but once it hits something it sucks in anyone nearby and then explodes (Can cause extra damage if shuriken are thrown into it)
Chakra taxing (yes or no): yes
Time for it to activate after hand seals are used (if any): 2 minutes
Hand seals (if any): Rat, Snake, Wolf, Boar,

Kekkei genaki requirements: Amaterasu-Okami must be activated

 

Name: Blood styles (becuz im too lazy to make seperate ones.)

Element (if its non-elemental leave this blank): Yin + Water (blood style)

Parent jutsu: None
Effect: diffrent effects depending on which one used. (kinda explanatory, no?)
Chakra taxing (yes or no): Yes
Time for it to activate after hand seals are used (if any): Depending on how much chakra is used.
Hand seals (if any): None

Kekkei genkai requirements: Being able to use blood style.

 

 

Aswell as jutsu you can create kekkei genkai the same EXCEPT a new sheet.

 

Name:
Form (if it has a form):
Location (if it has a location on the body):
Effect (if it has any power on or outside the users body):
Chakra Taxing (yes or no):
Special Jutsus (need to be accepted and linked sheet with this. P.S. use jutsu sheet):
Clan related kekkei genkai (yes or no):
Elements used (if any used):

 

 

Accepted Kekkei Genkai:

 

Name: Amaterasu-Okami

 

Form: Eyes change
Location: Eyes
Effect: Black lighting is able to be used
Chakra Taxing (yes or no): yes
Special Jutsus: Black Hole
Clan related: Yes

Elements used: Lighting

 

Name: Blood Style (refered as blood mist from its only user)

Form (if it has a form): None
Location (if it has a location on the body): None
Effect (if it has any power on or outside the users body): No effect except allowing the use of manipulating blood shed and use one selves blood for blood style jutsus
Chakra Taxing (yes or no): no (its a style)
Special Jutsus (need to be accepted): Blood armor, Blood drill, Blood weapon, Blood Gauntlets, Blood puppetry, Blood spikes and Blood Blade.
Clan related kekkei genkai (yes or no): No (unique)

Elements used (if any used):

 

 

Accepted ninjas:

 

Name: Mitsuki Heineko

Gender: Female
Clan: Hyuga (Outcast) and Uchiha
Village: Konohana
Age: 16
Team (if genin): 37
Chakra Affinity: lighting
Chakra Specialization: GenJutsu
Rank: Genin
Kekkei Genkai (optional): Sharingan
Special traits: When she uses Amaterasu she will be able to control black lighting but once it is done she will go blind for a few hours she only uses it in dire situations
Personality: nice, quiet, easy-going, will get serious when need be
Appearance: White hair, slim build, wears a tan jacket(Like Anko) shorts and usual shirt
Backstory: Her father left her in the uchiha clan when she was only a baby and was picked up by a women who took care for her and tought her everything she needed to know and taught her a jutsu that no one else knows of but when she tried to use it she almost passed out. He adoptive father also trained her into using Amaterasu

Equipment: Explosive Kunai (1x set of 23) Fuma Shuriken (1x sets of 3) (It's been a while since I saw Naruto and so I don't remember what Fuma Shurikens are)

 

Name: Kenji Miyafugi (Calls himself BloodEdge

Gender: Male
Clan: None
Village: Leaf (Formerly Kirigakure)
Age: 19
Team (if genin):
Chakra Affinity: Water
Chakra Specialization: Blood style (his kekkei)
Rank: jounin
Kekkei Genkai (optional): Blood style (blood mist)
Special traits: Above moderate amount of chakra, physically strong
Personality: kind and loyal, but a little cruel to his oppnents
Appearance: tall, with silver hair that looks as though it has blood streaks in it, the symbol of blood mist, a long red jacket
Backstory: smuggled from mist as a baby to leaf, struggle in the academy due to lack of ninjutsu besides blood mist, so he trained with puppets,lost his arm due to blood loss, replaced with puppet arm, trying to add a chakra cannon but trying to make it work without killing himself

Equipment: Odachi coated with blood

 

Name: Ebisu Yamanaka

 

Gender: Male
Clan: Yamanaka

Village: Konohana
Age: 14
Team (if genin): 37
Chakra Affinity: Water
Chakra Specialization: Ninjutsu
Rank: Genin
Kekkei Genkai: Storm Release (Not yet realized)
Special traits: Large Chakra reserves, very intelligent.
Personality: Serious, cold to a point of near maliciousness, obsessed with Ninjutsu improvement
Appearance: Well-built, average proportions, fair skin, long blonde hair, light blue eyes
Backstory: Born with little talent for Genjutsu and an average affinity for Taijutsu, Ebisu was only able to get through the Academy as a higher tier student via showing his well above average ability for Ninjutsu. Although not untalented in the slightest he was driven by a desire for self improvement even as a young student in the Academy, forcing him to improve his Genjutsu to a still bellow average but acceptable point. It has been over a year since Ebisu was ranked to Genin, confident that he will be ready for his next promotion soon.

Equipment: Full Body Suit, 6 Shuriken, 6 Kunai

 

Name: Koneko Shinra

 

Gender: Female
Clan: None

Village: Leaf

Age: 16

Team (if genin): 39
Chakra Affinity: Wind
Chakra Specialization: Taijutsu (Can use gen and nin. She's not like Lee.)
Rank: Genin
Kekkei Genkai (optional): None
Special traits: Extremely fast, low pain/damage tolerance.

Personality: Very quiet and subtle, patient, and kind.

Appearance: Long, jet-black hair that normally covers the left eye, and left eye has small heart-shape tattoo under it. Naturally slender build. Lighter skin tone. Deep green eyes. Wears a black sleeveless hoodie and a pink skirt with short black leggings (Spandex). Main weapons are "sheathed" (Just attached, no actual sheath.) behind the hips.

Backstory: Orphan by birth, she was raised in an orphanage after her mother died giving birth to her. At the age of twelve, she ran away from the orphanage and lived out on the streets. To survive, she began stealing food and pick pocketing people. One year later, she saw a ANBU member and she got gutsy and tried to pickpocket him. He immediately saw what she was doing and Koneko immediately ran away with the Anbu member after her. It took the Anbu an entire hour before he cornered Koneko, where she apologized and gave him back his money pouch. Amazed by her speed and showing pity to her, she was taken out for food with him and then showed the academy where she enrolled. During school, she usually hid herself in the back and didn't strive to be the best. She held back and tried to "blend in" so she could stay out of the spotlight.

Equipment: Main weapons: 2x Chakram Daggers  (http://media-cache-a...d64f9cf0937.jpg), shurikins (3x set, 5 sets), kunai (1x set, 5 sets) Fuma shuriken (1x set, 1 set)

 

 

My character(s):

 

Name: Karuya

Gender: Male
Clan: Senju (outcast) and Uchiha (outcast)

Village: Leaf

Age: 14

Team: Team 37

Chakra Affinity: Doton (earth style)
Chakra Specialization: Genjutsu
Rank: Genin
Kekkei Genkai (optional): Weakend Senju cells, Weakend Senju body and Sharingan (unawakend)
Special traits: Enhanced genjutsu and moderate chakra pool.
Personality: Calm and focused on training (espacially with his father), but often forget other things not related to his training. When he gets very angry: He stops caring for other peoples safety and starts looking down on people.
Appearance: Usual build and nothing special except that his face looks more like an uchiha than a senju while his body is more fit for a senju, he usually wears a black cloak (think about akatsuki without the red clouds) that covers his body and his genin gear underneath along with several scrolls used for studying or blocking shurikens.

Backstory: When he was small both sides of his family except for his mom and dad denied his existence as he was ''the unwanted senju and uchiha hybrid'' he and his family lived in the poor region of the town and he didnt meet him father much but when they were together they would either train or chat about missions that his dad was on, and one day he joined the academy in the leaf. He was a prodigy in his class atleast in the physical exams as he had no hope in using jutsus beside genjutsu that his mom taught him even if he couldnt use the uchiha's sharingan to use more genjutsu he trained for several years with his mom and when the exam came he failed but got angry and cast a chuunin ranked genjutsu on the teacher and after that the teacher allowed him to become a genin even though he couldn't use the jutsu needed.
Equipment: Shurikens (3x set, 20 sets) Kunai (1x set, 5 sets) and fuma shuriken (1x set, 2 sets)

 

Name: Hiro

Gender: Male
Clan: Hyuga

Village: Leaf

Age: 21

Team (if genin):
Chakra Affinity: Wind
Chakra Specialization: Hyuga techniques/taijutsu
Rank: Jounin
Kekkei Genkai (optional): Byakugan
Special traits: Large chakra pool, very good chakra control and able to use fire natured jutsus.

Personality: Friendly, forgetful and mission focused along with training.

Appearance: A young looking male with black hair, wears a lighter version of the jounin gear along with a fuma shuriken on his back. He also made it so he looks more like one of the Senju or Uchiha.

Backstory: When he was a child he always dreamed about becoming the strongest head his clan ever had, being from the main branch he also got a ''guard'' from the branch clan who died while trying to attack Hiro due to his disrespect to the Branch clan. After this he made a promise to this man that he would start respecting others and to become strong enough to protect himself so no other from the branch clan needed to die for him or to him. Ofcourse even today he remembers this promise and seeks to finish it.

Equipment: Light weight jounin equipment, fuma shuriken x1.

 

Name: Yutaka Otake (大武 豊) 

 

Gender: Male

 

Clan: Otake Clan 

 

Village: Kirigakure (Mist Village)

 

Age: 16 

 

Chakra Affinity: Water/ Wind

 

Chakra Specialization: Ninjutsu

 

Rank: Chunin (promoted at age 13 – graduated to Genin at 11.)

 

Kekkei Genkai: N/A

 

Special traits: Yutaka is tactically proficient, capable of using basic jutsus to his advantage. 

 

Personality: Laid back and calm in most situations, Yutaka doesn't easily give way when the odds go against him. Carefree and only willing to do what he wants to do, Yutaka only cares about enjoying life as it is. On the other hand, Yutaka has a short temper behind his bright facade – once his buttons are pushed, he can go into an all out, explosive rage. This sometimes gets him into trouble, whether it's causing petty destruction or getting into fights. 

 

His combat attitude is completely different and far more serious, however. Yutaka is generally careful in combat, playing it safe for the most part, and despite his jutsus barely passing the B-rank, he makes do with what he has and uses it to his advantage; an amenity that allowed him to gain the rank of Chunin. 

 

Yutaka has recently decided to explore the world, leaving behind his old village, which had unfortunately been decimated in terms of politics and economy due to the effects of the Second Shinobi War. His hobbies include woodcarving and card-playing, but he occasionally plays the koto. 

 

Appearance: Moderately tall (in terms of the Naruto universe) at 5'9". With a light build, he has brown eyes and black hair with natural grey highlights. He wears the typical shinobi flak jacket and dark clothes, and a bandage covers his right ring finger for unknown reasons. 

 

Backstory: Born in a minor Kiriga clan called the Otake Clan, Yutaka learned the ways of the shinobi at a fairly young age, being expected to quickly learn jutsus and intensely training in multiple other arts. Despite this, the clan was known for it's simplicity – using their environment as their weapon rather than their jutsus alone. 

 

Yutaka has a long-lasting friendship with Teruyoshi Saiko (西湖 輝義); the two met in a multi-clan meeting. Teruyoshi, mostly called Teru for short. When they were young, Teru was often teased upon for his weakness in techniques; Yutaka was one of the few people who, despite his adept skill in ninjutsu, decided to ally with him. They saw each other less often as they graduated, however; Yutaka graduated a year earlier and began taking on missions with two other teammates: Taku Shirasu (白洲 卓, male) and Keiko Nakaura (中浦 慶子, female).

 

Yutaka and Keiko both passed the Chunin Exams – at first only exclusive to their own villages – at 13; Taku was promoted at 14. The square was known for their almost always successful missions and cooperative power; the team itself holds a record of 8 D-ranks, 7 C-ranks, and 5 B-ranks before Yutaka decided to explore the outside world, finding the "reformed" Kirigakure to be uninteresting.

 

Equipment: Set of 5 of kunai, set of 15 of shuriken, set of 8 of paper bombs, set of 3 flash bombs

 

 

Puppet sheet (if you really wanna be like kankuro):

 

Name:
Type (defensive, offensive or support):
Abilities (if any special abilities outside of poisons and hidden mechanics):
Hidden weapons:
Hidden Defenses:
Flaws:
Poison (the kind of poison):
Cure (the ingredients etc):
Material:
Appearance:
Jutsus (if its a human puppet):

 

 

Accepted Puppets

 

Name: quick razor

Type (defensive, offensive or support): offense
Abilities (if any special abilities outside of poisons and hidden mechanics): filght
Hidden weapons: four katanas, kunai launcher
Hidden Defenses: sheild and good parry capabilty
Flaws: not very strong or durable, very fast
Poison (the kind of poison): a quick poison to partially paralyze targets
Cure (the ingredients etc): anything that cures a partial paralysis 
Material: bamboo

Appearance: a four armed humanish puppet

Name: chakra reserve

Type (defensive, offensive or support): support
Abilities (if any special abilities outside of poisons and hidden mechanics): chakra reserves
Hidden weapons:none
Hidden Defenses: shield
Flaws: no offensive capability 
Poison (the kind of poison): sleeping poison
Cure (the ingredients etc): anything to wake up
Material: specially treated wood

Appearance: a fat ugly octupus 

 

Name blood knight

Type (defensive, offensive or support): defensie
Abilities (if any special abilities outside of poisons and hidden mechanics): has my blood on it
Hidden weapons: assain blades, three great swords, 
Hidden Defenses: a tower shield, collapsible shields
Flaws: slow but reasonably strong and tough 
Poison (the kind of poison): none
Cure (the ingredients etc):none
Material: corpse (Human puppet)

Appearance: looks like a midevil knight

Jutsu: none

 

blood queen. Type (defensive, offensive or support): offensie
Abilities (if any special abilities outside of poisons and hidden mechanics) covered in blood
Hidden weapons: a pair of kunai launchers, a pair of shruiken launchers, two launchable spears covered in blood
Hidden Defenses: chakra shields
Flaws: long distance fighting makes it weak to close combat
Poison (the kind of poison): none
Cure (the ingredients etc):
Material: wooden joints, metal limbs

Appearance: a cruel female

 

Name: blood king

Type (defensive, offensive or support): offense
Abilities (if any special abilities outside of poisons and hidden mechanics): covered in blood
Hidden weapons: a scepter shaped great hammer
Hidden Defenses: a sheild arm
Flaws: weak to long range but packs a big punch
Poison (the kind of poison): none
Cure (the ingredients etc):
Material: wood joints, metal limbs
Appearance: a king
 

Name: ragnarok
Type (defensive, offensive or support): all around
Abilities (if any special abilities outside of poisons and hidden mechanics): blood soaked heEad and claws, flight, 
Hidden weapons: chakra cannon, three pairs each of katana, kunai and shruiken launchers, huge claws, fire breath,poison darts, tail blade, 
Hidden Defenses: wings act as shields
Flaws: drains massive chakra
Poison (the kind of poison): slow painful lethal
Cure (the ingredients etc): cure for paralysis and all snake venoms
Material: metal

Appearance: a 40foot dragon

 

 

Teams:

 

Team 37:
Jounin: ???? (secret)
Genins: Karuya, Ebisu and Mitsuki

Team 39:

Jounin: Kenji miyafugi

Genins: Koneko, ?? and ??

 

 

 

Missing nins:

 

 

 

 

Teams are 1-36 for npc teams (if you want to be in one of those teams you can ask me and i can add a new npc team... That is if you get 3 (one female, 2 males) genins and 1 jounin) teams for characters will be 37+ (just choose! Also dont exceed insane numbers.)

 

 

Diffrences: This is before 4th hokage is chosen. 1st hokage is madara instead of hashirama. 2nd hokage is hashirama instead of tobirama. The laws of becoming Hokage or any other kage is diffrent. Orochimaru left during a mission instead of just leaving the village making Tsunade fall into a coma and Jiraiya joining the shinobi academy as a teacher. Nagato was assinated by hanzou due to a little change in the story and obito never got crushed by the rock because minato was with them on that mission. Uchiha are not extinct.

 

^^These may or may not affect the story in one or several ways.

Edited September 5, 2014 by rolle

[Sanctified Absence 126]

So despite being an alternate universe I assume everything that took place before has already been set in motion? Such as: Major Naruto/Shippuden spoilers ahead.

Madara (although "dead," at this point) is still working towards the Infinite Tsukuyomi alongside Obito, Nagato has been implanted with the Rinnegan, Orochimaru has left the village etc.?

 

 

Also would it be acceptable to join as a Genin with amazing amounts of Chakra but not many other traits?

Edited June 28, 2014 by Blissful Chaos

[rolle 320]

@, 

 

Yes that would be acceptable.

 

And to answer your questions its before fourth so all before the nine tails attack have happend but everything after will end abit diffrent. (some of the characters from the series will be weaker.) for the char just make a short sheet for him/her (traits refer to chakra amounts or other special abilities outside of the clan abilities (or instead of clan abilities)

 

 

Orochimaru has left village, nagato was assinated by hanzou due to a little change in the story and obito never got crushed by the rock because minato was with them on that mission. (this is not gonna be explained in the story really so much... So i should just put it here.) so hes not working with Madara and tbh i should mention the 1st hokage was changed from hashi to madara and the uchiha are not as extinct (even if half were executed for treason, << yet again not talked much about.) So abit of a story change in the series plans.

 

Edited June 28, 2014 by rolle

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Hmmm sounds interesting i might use my blood mist oc if youll allow a combination of puppets and a fairly powerful kekki genkai?

[rolle 320]

Well... I dont mind if it was a jounin but a genin? I dont think it would fit one. But if it is a jounin... Then i guess if i can see all of em and stuff.

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Well my ranking isnt what matters to me as long as i can work up to it at least whatever rank you want just let me know

[rolle 320]

Well, depending on how many dolls you want to possess and the kekkei... Although im sure you could be a genin if the kekkei was gained by blood or given through experiments... But depending on age and stuff u know (could you please link to the oc do the sheet...You dont need to fill out the rank due to me choosing)

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Alot of info depends on rank but i could type a write up for both genin or jounin but first are we allowed to create kekki genkai?

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Character

Name: Mitsuki Heineko
Gender: Female
Clan: Hyuga (Outcast) and Uchiha
Village: Konohana
Age: 16
Team (if genin): 37
Chakra Affinity: lighting
Chakra Specialization: Ninjutsu
Rank: Genin
Kekkei Genkai (optional): Sharingan
Special traits: When she uses Amaterasu she will be able to control black lighting but once it is done she will go blind for a few hours she only uses it in dire situations
Personality: nice, quiet, easy-going, will get serious when need be
Appearance: White hair, slim build, wears a tan jacket(Like Anko) shorts and usual shirt
Backstory: Her father left her in the uchiha clan when she was only a baby and was picked up by a women who took care for her and tought her everything she needed to know and taught her a jutsu that no one else knows of but when she tried to use it she almost passed out. He adoptive father also trained her into using Amaterasu
Equipment: Explosive Kunai (1x set of 23) Fuma Shuriken (1x sets of 3) (It's been a while since I saw Naruto and so I don't remember what Fuma Shurikens are)

 

 

 

Name: Amaterasu-Okami
Form: Eys change
Location: Eyes
Effect: Black lighting is able to be used
Chakra Taxing (yes or no): yes
Special Jutsus: Black Hole
Clan related: Yes
Elements used: Lighting

 

 

 

 

 

Name: Black Hole
Element (if its non-elemental leave this blank): Lighting
Parent jutsu: Chidori
Effect: Act like Chidori but once it hits it sucks in anyone near by and the explodes (Can cause extra damage if shuriken and thrown into it)
Chakra taxing (yes or no): es
Time for it to activate after hand seals are used (if any): 2 minutes
Hand seals (if any): Rat, Snake, Wolf, Boar,
Kekkei genaki requirements: Amaterasu-Okami must be activated

 

Edited July 5, 2014 by Sakuya Izayoi

[rolle 320]

Alot of info depends on rank but i could type a write up for both genin or jounin but first are we allowed to create kekki genkai?

You can by sending the sheet in a pm to me (with the kekkei ofcourse). Everything is in my first post with this.

 

@,

 The character itself is fine (but she must have some secret time space jutsu to be able to carry that many fuma shurikens). Amaterasu-okami cant give a larger chakra pool because its impossible to increase a chakra pool without a passive clan trait (or personal trait. And this is proven by the fact that no one has an eye or anything they can activate that increases their chakra pool. Also it would be quite op since she could be nearly out of chakra activate it and suddenly have enough to escape.). So its fine if you take it away and the location would obviously be the eyes. And the jutsu seems fine but how strong is it?  

Edited July 5, 2014 by rolle

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Alright I'll just delete those and lower the fuma shuriken count a bit and then she will be okay right?

[rolle 320]

@, Well, yes techniqually that would be okay. So if you dont mind im gonna go edit.

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Okay I got rid of the Kekki and special jutsu and made it so she only has the sharingan

[rolle 320]

@, There wasnt much wrong with the jutsu and kekkei itself u know. The only problem was the chakra it gave to the user when activated. (so you didnt need to remove it) But if you feel like removing it then its fine.

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Oh I just need to change one this....DAMN IT I GOT RID OF IT TnT

Edit: Re added it and changed it a bit

[rolle 320]

Okay, then ill go on and edit again.

 

BTW, do you guys think Karuya (good name right?) is abit op? Just wondering since he seemed unbalanced when i made him.

[Demonic Soulz 483]

He doesn't seem OP

[rolle 320]

Well, anyways. If you guys want to (not forcing you to) or if you know any people who wanna RP a Naruto RP... Let em know about this RP, since i would want alot more people to join.

[Demonic Soulz 483]

I just want this to start soon and why have the other guys posted yet...I wonder if my sis would like to join

[Han'ei 15]

Ha! I was not expecting this.

[rolle 320]

@@Han'ei, Expecting what?

 

@, Mirrorwing fixed stuff in a pm so i have that, dont know if he will post here right now.

@, 

 

@@Sanctified Absence, So, are you going to reply? 

[Demonic Soulz 483]

I think he wasnt expecting a naruto rp and we should give Sanctified till tomorrow (when I wake up since it techincally already tomorrow but its 1:04)

[Sanctified Absence 126]

@@rolle

 

Oh whoops, sorry I'll have a character sheet up in a few minutes. 

 

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Here's the character sheet.

Name: Ebisu Yamanaka

Gender: Male
Clan: Yamanaka

Village: Konohana
Age: 14
Team (if genin): 37
Chakra Affinity: Water
Chakra Specialization: Ninjutsu
Rank: Genin
Kekkei Genkai: Storm Release (Not yet realized)
Special traits: Large Chakra reserves, very intelligent.
Personality: Serious, cold to a point of near maliciousness, obsessed with Ninjutsu improvement
Appearance: Well-built, average proportions, fair skin, long blonde hair, light blue eyes
Backstory: Born with little talent for Genjutsu and an average affinity for Taijutsu, Ebisu was only able to get through the Academy as a higher tier student via showing his well above average ability for Ninjutsu. Although not untalented in the slightest he was driven by a desire for self improvement even as a young student in the Academy, forcing him to improve his Genjutsu to a still bellow average but acceptable point. It has been over a year since Ebisu was ranked to Genin, confident that he will be ready for his next promotion soon.
Equipment: Full Body Suit, 6 Shuriken, 6 Kunai

 

I hope there's nothing wrong with it.

Edited July 6, 2014 by Sanctified Absence

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Ya my character is up, i belive i was put on team 39

[rolle 320]

@, Team 39 yes. Thats the team you will lead (or atleast train)

 

@@Sanctified Absence, Seems fine, but one question. Why is his kekkei genkai a suiton (water style) + raiton (lightning style) combination? Atleast when his chakra affinity is wind (seems rather inefficent if hes crazy about ninjutsu and learns two hes inefficent with.)

Edited July 6, 2014 by rolle