private A Magical Trip to Disneigh

[Professor Annabella 330]

(( OOC: http://mlpforums.com/topic/103828-a-magical-trip-to-disneigh-sol-rp-closed/ ))

 

It's a cool, quiet, and calm July night during your departure. You leave your house on you way to Canterlot station, to take the vacation of your dreams. You are meeting at this station to take a larger and much more luxurious train, and also, to meet with the group that is going with you. A few weeks earlier, you received a envelope all about where you are staying, what tickets you have to which parks, your meal plan, and how your arriving/departing from Disneigh World. The only thing it lacks is anything about these guests you are going with. They literally have everything the same as you, but through whatever miscommunication, you don't even know these guests exist until you arrive in Canterlot. When you arrive in Canterlot, it's near midnight, and the station is surprisingly empty other then the other's on the trip. You all stand at the same platform, you begin to wonder if they are going the same place you are.

 

(( Go ahead and post. I was going to post, until I lost everything to a random stupid Windows update ))

Edited July 10, 2014 by Delta

[CrimsonWeb 786]

Embers slowly folded up his book as he took a step out of the train. He smiled as he glance up at the sky, at all the twinkling stars that were over his head. He closed his eyes and breathed it all in. He was so lucky to be here, to be the only one to win a free trip to this amazing place.

He had seen all of this stuff as a kid, but now he was able to go and explore it as he was now, with all the freedom in the world. He grined as he looked out at the amazing park, even though it was late, there were still many ponys running around. He thought about how lucky he was, and how much fun this was going to be. He tilted his head back, just enuff to see another mane. He spun around "What...." His face twisted as he noticed he wasnt the only one there

[Professor Annabella 330]

Embers slowly folded up his book as he took a step out of the train. He smiled as he glance up at the sky, at all the twinkling stars that were over his head. He closed his eyes and breathed it all in. He was so lucky to be here, to be the only one to win a free trip to this amazing place.

He had seen all of this stuff as a kid, but now he was able to go and explore it as he was now, with all the freedom in the world. He grined as he looked out at the amazing park, even though it was late, there were still many ponys running around. He thought about how lucky he was, and how much fun this was going to be. He tilted his head back, just enuff to see another mane. He spun around "What...." His face twisted as he noticed he wasnt the only one there

(( They aren't at Disney yet, silly! They are meeting at Canterlot Station and taking the train from there.

 

I will post ASAP. Unfortunately I was about to post, and almost done, but my computer decided it was time for a random update without warning. I lost everything, unfortunately ))

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Standing on the platform, Mirror Image looks around at the others, "Hmmm i wonder who they are, eh they cant ruin my vacation" he saus looking at his ticket. Using his magic he hides it away in his old rucksack, along with anything he might want on the trip. "Hopefully the train arrives soon"

[Emerald Claus 24,848]

Emerald Sheen sat on a bench just a couple inches away from where the train was going to arrive. She lifted up her ticket, and sighed wondering if she was doing the right thing by going to Disneigh. Emerald lifted her head up, and saw a few other ponies waiting for the train. Emerald silently wondered to herself who they might be, but stayed where she was. 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Addie was sitting at the train station with the other ponies and waited for the train. Her heart was racing. She had always wanted to go to Disneigh but her parents could not afford it. Now, her wish had finally come true. She had a big smile on her face as she looked like the other ponies. 

[Snow Frostflame 3,568]

Snowflake waited for the train  he didn't know if this would be the greatest day of his life (besides getting his cutie mark) or if the others will question him about his unlucky past he also wondered if he should befriend the other ponies but then he remembered a tragic event in his past and thought to him self its better off if I don't make any new friends

[Professor Annabella 330]

(( Sorry guys, I am super-duper busy. I had a lifeguard shift, my sister's are having a birthday, and I have to take some of my driving test. I will post, but not until later tonight! I'll have Anna arrive late, don't hesitate to go on without me. Good luck, I'll be on eventually. I will probably not be as busy this weekend, but tomorrow I'm a bit tied up too (Dad's birthday. Lots of b-days ))

[Rainbow Eclipse 3,927]

@,

 

(OOC: Wow, you must have a huuuuuuuuuuuge schedule! Uh, I'm sorry for posting in here, but... can I join this RP? I know you said all the spots were taken, but I'd really like this... also, it would make things go faster, seeing as you have that stuff to tend to and all...)

[Snow Frostflame 3,568]

(( Sorry guys, I am super-duper busy. I had a lifeguard shift, my sister's are having a birthday, and I have to take some of my driving test. I will post, but not until later tonight! I'll have Anna arrive late, don't hesitate to go on without me. Good luck, I'll be on eventually. I will probably not be as busy this weekend, but tomorrow I'm a bit tied up too (Dad's birthday. Lots of b-days ))

its not possible to do a RP with out the Host because you decide what happens we are only your puppets and you are the puppet master and i need to keep typing because of the min character limit so just Ignore everything beyond the place where I made my point alright I typed enough characters  

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Mirror Image looked at the others and decided to talk to them, but best done safely, he decides. Secretly makeing an illusion thats a copy of himself. He sends the copy over te them. "Hello there" he says, "The names Mirror Image, how anout you?" He askes shyly.(That guy above me is rigjt)

Edited July 10, 2014 by mirrorwing

[Snow Frostflame 3,568]

*Snowflake stairs at the Illusions (Snowflake is at a distance away from Mirrior's illusion) Snowflake looked back only giving a long sigh* maybe he is talking to another pony I should just stand here and watch *Snowflake stands idol but listens carefully to what Mirror is saying*                                                    

 

 

 

                            Ignore these words here the min character limit is making this very brutal for me

Edited July 11, 2014 by PonygamesFluttershy

[Professor Annabella 330]

its not possible to do a RP with out the Host because you decide what happens we are only your puppets and you are the puppet master and i need to keep typing because of the min character limit so just Ignore everything beyond the place where I made my point alright I typed enough characters

(( hmm, then when I come home it may be in the RP's best interest if I hire another GM/Host/Controller

 

Hmm, 200 word limit. I guess since I'm forced to say more stuff, I'll say that Anna is going to have her foal instead of be pregnant. So have a defibalator nearby in case you die of adorable posioning ))

[Snow Frostflame 3,568]

(( hmm, then when I come home it may be in the RP's best interest if I hire another GM/Host/Controller

 

Hmm, 200 word limit. I guess since I'm forced to say more stuff, I'll say that Anna is going to have her foal instead of be pregnant. So have a defibalator nearby in case you die of adorable posioning ))

I IS PREPARED

 

 

 

Ignore this here damn character limit is going to make me go insane words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words PLZ IS THIS NOT ENOUGH FOR YOU!!! AH IT ISNT words words words words

well somepony tell me when we are ready in the mean time I'm going to teleport more bread 

Edited July 10, 2014 by PonygamesFluttershy

[Professor Annabella 330]

Anna was not exactly comfortable with the idea of leaving the social shell she had put herself in, after so many months. She had hidden herself in Ponyville, avoiding her past in Canterlot. It was a very long story, one telling a tale about love, trust, and a good life, ended by betrayal and hate. Anna had a baby now, a scrawny, two month old colt named Zeus, who's father was a secret she kept deep in herself because if that experience in Canterlot. What mattered is that she loved for him, had a steady income from her rich heritage, and if things did get sour, she had a strong education, one of the best. The problem was breaking this trend of anti-social behavior, and this random trip was what was going to do it slowly.

 

Diamond, Anna's mother, begged her daughter to take advantage of the tickets she won for a trip to Disneigh. She argued it was good for the baby see ponies other then family and very close friends. Anna agreed, but only because it would only be her and Zeus on this trip. That was proved wrong though.

 

The mother was awake late at night, packing for her and the baby. Everything from diapers and bottles was put in a bag for him. He slept through the whole thing, being late at night, but Anna worked diligently. When the time came, she woke up her little tike, who whined and cried with how worn out and tired he was. She hopped on the train to Canterlot, and arrived quite late. However, when she did arrive, she noticed all the ponies waiting for the train. Holding her sleeping foal in one hoof, and her luggage in the other, she started to stare. Why were there so many ponies heading to Disneigh at the same time?

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Seeing another pony come up from an angle the both him and his illusion can be seen, Mirror Image jumps, causing the illusion to waver slightly, "Damn, i didnt want to get noticed yet" sighing he cancels the illusion but tries to stay hidden from view

[Snow Frostflame 3,568]

Canterlot why of all cities did it have to be Canterlot (Snowflake remembers something from his past) (Snowflake thinks outloud but only loud enough for somepony near by to hear him) Thunder I'm sorry we never should of went to Ponyville we could of been Royal Unicorn Guards but we passed it up and became Alchemists now I'm a Mercenary and your dead I should of done something quicker to save you and the others we never should of went to Ponyville all those years ago your family saved me life and I failed to save yours but what more do you want from me guys I avenged you and you all and you still haunt my mind and dreams please stop (Snowflake snaps out of it) *Sigh*

[Professor Annabella 330]

Canterlot why of all cities did it have to be Canterlot (Snowflake remembers something from his past) (Snowflake thinks outloud but only loud enough for somepony near by to hear him) Thunder I'm sorry we never should of went to Ponyville we could of been Royal Unicorn Guards but we passed it up and became Alchemists now I'm a Mercenary and your dead I should of done something quicker to save you and the others we never should of went to Ponyville all those years ago your family saved me life and I failed to save yours but what more do you want from me guys I avenged you and you all and you still haunt my mind and dreams please stop (Snowflake snaps out of it) *Sigh*

(( I want your posts to be in the third person. Your posting is disorganized, your nagging me just a little, and your OOC isn't exactly clear. I want order in this RP, please. Unfortunately I started this RP at a wrong time with how busy I was, but I should be good now

 

Flutter, this is a Slice of Life RP. NOTHING about killing or mercenaries. It's supposed to be a light hearted RP about ponies having to get along

 

Things are a bit out of hoof. When I get my hands on my computer I'll make some major adjustments. I'll make a list of characters, send PMs, and edit the story so people understand it more ))

 

Anna let out a deep sigh, standing at the platform as she gripped her sleeping foal, who laid his head peacefully on her shoulder. He sucked on a pacifier also, while resting himself on the soft coat of his mother, both soothing him from the loud trains and bright lights. Anna however was well awake, and used to being up this late. Her glance turned to a unicorn playing some tricks with petty clone and illusion spells, which she just raised we eyebrow at and moved on. She then noticed two other ponies, a heavyset mare and a red stallion, who both sat excitedly. She watched closely, observing as he read, then shut his book, and looking directly at her and the other ponies that had recently arrived, like he didn't know they existed. The young stallion, not much younger then her, suddenly frowned. He was connecting the dots, he knew something Anna didn't. These ponies were quite odd, and the only ones in the station. They all had something in common, Anna felt, but she couldn't put her hoof on it.

 

During this thought process, her attention fell of Zeus. In his sleep, he spread his small grey wings, loosening Anna's grip around him. He started to slip, his mother caught him quickly, but in a way that gave him a jolt and startled him. Zeus' pacifier fell out of his mouth, rolling on the platform towards the heavyset mare. In the meantime, Zeus lifted his head slowly off Anna, his ears lowering at the loud sounds, his eyes squinting at the bright lights, and his body starting to shiver. The baby started to wail, so much louder then he usually did. Zeus was a calm baby, but only when you let him sleep.

 

Anna attempted to calm him down, forgetting about the pacifier

[Snow Frostflame 3,568]

(( I want your posts to be in the third person. Your posting is disorganized, your nagging me just a little, and your OOC isn't exactly clear. I want order in this RP, please. Unfortunately I started this RP at a wrong time with how busy I was, but I should be good now

 

Flutter, this is a Slice of Life RP. NOTHING about killing or mercenaries. It's supposed to be a light hearted RP about ponies having to get along

 

Things are a bit out of hoof. When I get my hands on my computer I'll make some major adjustments. I'll make a list of characters, send PMs, and edit the story so people understand it more ))

 

Anna let out a deep sigh, standing at the platform as she gripped her sleeping foal, who laid his head peacefully on her shoulder. He sucked on a pacifier also, while resting himself on the soft coat of his mother, both soothing him from the loud trains and bright lights. Anna however was well awake, and used to being up this late. Her glance turned to a unicorn playing some tricks with petty clone and illusion spells, which she just raised we eyebrow at and moved on. She then noticed two other ponies, a heavyset mare and a red stallion, who both sat excitedly. She watched closely, observing as he read, then shut his book, and looking directly at her and the other ponies that had recently arrived, like he didn't know they existed. The young stallion, not much younger then her, suddenly frowned. He was connecting the dots, he knew something Anna didn't. These ponies were quite odd, and the only ones in the station. They all had something in common, Anna felt, but she couldn't put her hoof on it.

 

During this thought process, her attention fell of Zeus. In his sleep, he spread his small grey wings, loosening Anna's grip around him. He started to slip, his mother caught him quickly, but in a way that gave him a jolt and startled him. Zeus' pacifier fell out of his mouth, rolling on the platform towards the heavyset mare. In the meantime, Zeus lifted his head slowly off Anna, his ears lowering at the loud sounds, his eyes squinting at the bright lights, and his body starting to shiver. The baby started to wail, so much louder then he usually did. Zeus was a calm baby, but only when you let him sleep.

 

Anna attempted to calm him down, forgetting about the pacifier

I know it has nothing to do with bloody mercs and killing I only put that because its my OC backstory he is A Mercenary but he doesnt kill ponies he is more of the guy you hire to protect you or to other things like spying and stuff I wasnt going to have him kill anypony just thought it would be necessary to mention his backstory

 

also what do you mean unclear it seemed pretty clear to me just tell me how you want me to post and I will try my best 

Edited July 12, 2014 by PonygamesFluttershy

[Concerto Dusk 240]

Hearing the young foal crying, Mirror Image ran over to see what the problem was, completely forgetting that he was trying to stay hidden. "Ma'am? Is he alright?" Indicating the young foal which anna held, a look of concern on his face. (And Fluttershy, your ooc on th rp page should be in parenthesis, like mine is here)

[Snow Frostflame 3,568]

Snowflake see's Mirror Image talking to Anna he then wonders if he should see what was wrong he then decides to mind his own business and get's lost in his memories again

 

(OH thanks mate that makes a lot of sense sorry guys I haven't roleplayed since I was 13 I dont know of what the symbols mean so I just used it the same way I wrote my Fan Fic's there should be no problems from hear on out)  

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Addie continued to listen to the ponies chatter on the train. Inside of her, thoughts roamed about what disneigh would be like. She heard it to be a place of laughter and joy, where the friendship and love never end. She also heard that dreams come true there as well. 

[Emerald Claus 24,848]

@,@@C. Thunder Dash,  

Emerald looked about her surroundings, she noticed two ponies. A Mare and A Stallion standing by themselves. She wondered if they were going to Disneigh as well. Might as well ask, while we're all waiting. So Emerald walked up to Addie and Snowflake. Emerald was a very shy pony, so this was not something she would do everyday. So of course she felt nervous and shy. 

"H-hi, um I'm E-Emerald Sheen. Nice to meet y-you...''

Edited July 13, 2014 by Emerald <3

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@,

 

Addie turned and saw the mare. "Oh! I'm Addabelle, but you can call me Addie. Nice to meet you Emerald!" Addie said with a giggle, sticking out her hoof for a hoof shake. Addie noticed that the mare was a little shy. She was surprised however that the mare got up and went to talk to her.  

[Emerald Claus 24,848]

@@C. Thunder Dash, 

Emerald smiled, and a wave of relief washed over her. She stuck out her own hoof and shook Addie's hoof. "Nice to meet you, Addie. Are you going to Disneigh to?" Emerald hoped she was. It would be nice to know somepony on my visit to Disneigh. Emerald has been alone all her life, but look she's actually getting a chance!