writing Blooming.

[Inkfeather 597]

I'm trying out something new, please leave a comment with your opinion.

 

Blooming

 

 

One falls, to make way for the next.

One rises, from the ashes of the dead.

One lives, nibbling on the joy of life.

One sleeps, waiting for another piece.

One dreams, creating hopes and wishes.

 

Only to fall as the previous one.

Only to create the ashes for the next.

Only to fade into nothingness again.

Only to watch and hope for the happy.

Only to cry when the new one falls.

 

A spirit of loneliness, seeking.

A spirit of yesterday, waiting.

A spirit of wonderland, dreaming.

A spirit of imagination, creating.

A spirit of mortality, suffering.

 

The mind is only a victim of pain.

The mind is a gateway to the past.

The mind is the tool of creation.

The mind is corrupted by fake hopes.

The mind is forever blooming sadness.

 

One mind, the spirit of everything.

Only to fall into darkness of despair.

[Vicke 3,189]

God, im jelly.

Your so incredibly good at this.

[ShadowBean 318]

That is a incredable good poem I don't often read poems but of all of the poems I read this is one of the best

[Fluttershy >.< 1]

this is amazing!!!!

[Inkfeather 597]

That is a incredable good poem I don't often read poems but of all of the poems I read this is one of the best

 

Is it really that good? I thought it might have been way to repetitive. I'm really glad you like it.

 

 

this is amazing!!!!

 

So.. Many.. Exclamation marks...

 

God, im jelly.

Your so incredibly good at this.

 

Thanks, it means alot to me that you like it.