PonyFan101 30 January 2, 2015 Share January 2, 2015 (edited) Hey! I've seen everyone else's OC review posts and thought I'd join in. I'll be glad you give you honest reviews. Please know that i use a Mary Jane test to review your character. A mary jane is a character who is cliche and unrealistic i am a writing tudor, and will use the "grow and glow" system, where i will give something positive and negative for every character. Just leave the url to the page and a photo of your oc. Here is an example of an oc of mine, the photo is in my avatar. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brimstone-r6733 Edited January 2, 2015 by PonyFan101 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadOBabe 18,997 January 3, 2015 Share January 3, 2015 Please know that i use a Mary Jane test to review your character. Are you sure you don't mean "Mary Sue"? Check out my artwork any time: http://shadobabe.deviantart.com/ "OMG; You are such a troll. XD" - PathfinderCS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VulpineTaco 525 January 3, 2015 Share January 3, 2015 He's in my profile picture. He's literally me, as he is my ponysona, so if you were to take my traits and shove them into a pony, it would be him. "For every loud and idiotic kid in front of a computer, there's a quiet and passionate kid in front of a computer." --Einstein on Video Games,2014 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordSwinton 759 January 3, 2015 Share January 3, 2015 why not? here http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/starchase-r7595 (desperately crave other people's approval here ＝0＝) Click here to boop that snoot, or here to request boops from Felix! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krazy Stargazer 26 January 3, 2015 Share January 3, 2015 Your willing to review OC's! Can you review mine http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/krazy-stargazer-r7647 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DormantAccount 308 January 3, 2015 Share January 3, 2015 You're welcome to look at my OC. The link is in my signature. I don't think you can fault him on color scheme lol. I'm still fleshing out his personality a bit, but it's a decent start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PonyFan101 30 January 3, 2015 Author Share January 3, 2015 Whoops! Yes, mary sue. I'll get to work asap He's in my profile picture. He's literally me, as he is my ponysona, so if you were to take my traits and shove them into a pony, it would be him. Does he have a page or is he just an image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Moon 6,341 January 3, 2015 Share January 3, 2015 (edited) Could you review my OC, Blue Moon? His profile is in my signature, but I'll leave it below as well. Thanks! Here is his profile. Edited January 3, 2015 by Blue Moon Autumn Blue Moon Clear Skies Summer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PonyFan101 30 January 4, 2015 Author Share January 4, 2015 You're welcome to look at my OC. The link is in my signature. I don't think you can fault him on color scheme lol. I'm still fleshing out his personality a bit, but it's a decent start. Hehe. Yes, the colorscheme! You're the third pony I've seen with my Brim's color scheme! Mine started out pure white and red in her scheme, but by the time she was finished, her body had become ashy in relation to her connection to fire, and her mane changed to make it blend better. I think the scheme implies their personality and passions, the same for the shape of their manes. Pont reviews will be coming out later on today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tao 7,756 January 4, 2015 Share January 4, 2015 Ah why not, mind taking a look at my North: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/north-r7070 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PonyFan101 30 January 7, 2015 Author Share January 7, 2015 why not? here http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/starchase-r7595 (desperately crave other people's approval here ＝0＝) I really liked him, but find it strange that his name had little to do with his talent or personality. with the name starchase, i expected him to have something to do with astronomy. Also, the shy, intellectual pony is somewhat cliche, and add in mystery, it will make some groan. it is very nice that he isn't the best at everything he does, it adds uniqueness. It is very nice that he carries an object from his parents, and could very well be a good conversation starter in a rp. You're welcome to look at my OC. The link is in my signature. I don't think you can fault him on color scheme lol. I'm still fleshing out his personality a bit, but it's a decent start. very interesting backstory! i love the small details it had, like the whole thing with his name. It also had a very interesting cutie mark trigger story, and the cutie mark is very good. some of the biggest problems with cutie marks nowadays is complicated designs. You do need personality details, as you mentioned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snow Frostflame 3,568 January 7, 2015 Share January 7, 2015 sure why not.... feel free to criticize my OC.... any questions afterwards let me know.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibiscus Bloom 91 January 7, 2015 Share January 7, 2015 (edited) Go ahead and review my OC Elixir (Link in my signature) Sorry if his connection with Zecora is a bit Gary-Stu-ish. I try as much as possible to limit my OCs' links to well known characters from the show - but she fits in with his backstory well and I thought it would be mundane to make another, almost identical zebra :3 Edited January 7, 2015 by Hibiscus Bloom Meet Hibiscus Bloom! Other OCs: Dice Venom, Wildscar, Cocoa Pod, Elixir Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123 111 January 7, 2015 Share January 7, 2015 I finally gave my OC a cutie mark. (mark-less adults are becoming a cliche) Can you review my main OC? http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/lucid-dream-r4566 Deviantart: http://dreamer404.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowking58 1,137 January 7, 2015 Share January 7, 2015 Are you sure you don't mean "Mary Sue"? He probably just loves Spider Man. 1 All My OCS Quote “The only time a lawyer can cry is when it's all over." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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