Design Reviews & OC Help!

[Aurelion Star 434]

this is my Oc what do you think?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[AmberDust 1,118]

Thank you. Your work is appreciated!

I'm glad you like her cutie mark. It was a bit of a struggle for me, but I guess it turned out alright.

[Fia94 374]

Hi, I'd be grateful if you'd give me your opinion on my OC/Ponysona, Arctic Sunbeam Here's a picture of her, and her cutie mark is a snowflake with a pawprint in the middle Thanks!

 

[Plume 922]

@@dusk.night, 

 

 

 

Colour scheme: Ah! How cute! I really love the colour scheme you went with! It's simple with just a couple of shades of brown and it's beautiful! I love those striking green eyes. Overall, he's absolutely stunning. There are two things I'm slightly unsure about though: 1. he's an alicorn, which I have trouble accepting considering the fact that canon states that, as of now, there are only four alicorns (one of them being in your picture ^^) and 2. those wings though! They're beautiful, but the two-colour wings are things we haven't seen before so I'd hesitate to put them on your OC. 

Cutie mark: Pretty! I feel like it means something related to the night or the stars? Which is cute cause Twilight Sparkle but anyway it's adorable and I like it. If I had to actually change anything, I'd maybe try making the star or moon the colour of the eyes or something? It's cute as heck as is though. XD

Mane and tail: It's beautiful. Like actually, the mane and tail are so nice. It's strange, because normally the tails of stallions are short to match their manes, but having a long one suits your OC. Also, the style runs well between the two even though you have a longer tail ^^ Good job!

Overall: A+ for awesome! What a cute. Cute. Also I ship it

[Aurelion Star 434]

@@dusk.night, 

 

 

 

Colour scheme: Ah! How cute! I really love the colour scheme you went with! It's simple with just a couple of shades of brown and it's beautiful! I love those striking green eyes. Overall, he's absolutely stunning. There are two things I'm slightly unsure about though: 1. he's an alicorn, which I have trouble accepting considering the fact that canon states that, as of now, there are only four alicorns (one of them being in your picture ^^) and 2. those wings though! They're beautiful, but the two-colour wings are things we haven't seen before so I'd hesitate to put them on your OC. 

Cutie mark: Pretty! I feel like it means something related to the night or the stars? Which is cute cause Twilight Sparkle but anyway it's adorable and I like it. If I had to actually change anything, I'd maybe try making the star or moon the colour of the eyes or something? It's cute as heck as is though. XD

Mane and tail: It's beautiful. Like actually, the mane and tail are so nice. It's strange, because normally the tails of stallions are short to match their manes, but having a long one suits your OC. Also, the style runs well between the two even though you have a longer tail ^^ Good job!

Overall: A+ for awesome! What a cute. Cute. Also I ship it

 

 

 

 

 

Well first of all, your a very awesome no beyond that, anyways lets just say, I'm fired up, yosh, I shall improve my OC and post it here again, your awesome at , eto , I can't express my gratitude clearly. Thank you is not enough, well ill just make an art for you , as a sign of gratitude, so??

 

What art do you want me to do?

 

Anime or your Oc?

Pick one?

[Plume 922]

@@dusk.night, 

 

Oh! Wow! Heehee, no need to go to that trouble, I'm just happy I was of help ^^

[Aurelion Star 434]

Well If you say so, then again , thank you for your compliment. your awesome

But what's the meaning of the last lined or marked sentence there?

What do you mean you shipped it?

[Plume 922]

@@dusk.night,

 

I totally ship Twilight and Dusk just saying

 

 

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Colour scheme: Those pastels though. She's so adorable! I love her colours, they work great together. It's like the perfect shades of pastels to blend nicely, and none of the colours are too bright or jarring against the others. The only thing I would change would be to maybe get rid of the horn stripes? I mean, they're cute, but it's not a thing we've ever seen in canon so I'd maybe reconsider having them on your OC if you want it to fit in the canon realm. The eyes are also a bit off putting, since they're very dark for the rest of her body. I'm not sure what colour I'd suggest - maybe the pink from her mane to replace that? Then the cutie mark would also be able to use that adorable pink!

Cutie mark: N/A

Mane and tail: Curly and cute! The styles match nicely between the two shape wise, and I love the sort of Fluttershy vibe you’ve got going. If there was anything to change, I'd make the colouring of the mane and tail match, with the colour swirling  down the tail like you do in the mane sections.

Overall: A! She's adorable and sweet, and I can already somewhat poke a stick and what I'd expect her personality to be. Whether that's right or not can only wait to be seen! 

Edited May 1, 2015 by MiniKirby123

[Aurelion Star 434]

Well ughmmmmmmmm ,

Yup still don't get it -__-