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Blizzard then followed through, "Nnng, ok, get ready. Release!" Blizzard then lets the next one go, "Concentrated Ice Blast! Hnnnng ok, whenever you're ready guys, take him down!" Blizzard kept up his blast as best as he could as he waited for his teammates to come in for the assist.


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Tyra nodded, smirking proudly at Radiant's praise, and giving herself a quick curious look over her body. Indeed, she had contracted more burns.

But she was still not fazed.

 

"Worry not about me," She called to her companion, then pointed a hoof to the enslaved ponies, "save our medical supplies for them, I fear they need it more than I!"

 

With Blizzard lowering his ice attack, she leapt into action, jumping toward the metal monster's chest plate and slamming her axe blade hard into it, creating a mighty gash in the core.

 

She yanked the blade back out and returned to Radiant's side.

"Attack!"


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Radiant sent his blades forward into the monstrosity's chest and moved his swords around in the chest plate finally hitting the core. The beast begun falling so Radiant removed his blades letting it fall to the ground. He turned back to Blizzard "ice dome!" 

 

As he turned forward again the final monstrosity smashed his way through the wall. With the noise of the wall smashing to the ground the attention of several groups of dogs was grabbed. They begun running across the room at the group.


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Blizzard heard Radiant's orders and carried out the same operation as before, "Gotch! Ice Dome!" The dome once again, protects Blizzard and his teammates from the blast. "All right, how many more are there before we can move to the next room? We need to get outta here soon."


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Radiant turned back toward Blizzard "Well we got that huge one right in front of us so we can use some ice, after that the rest of the dogs are charging us. So we still have some work ahead of us!" Radiant exclaimed as the monstrosity was getting close to them.

 

Radiant with his armor still up ran up to the monstrosity to distract it for a second while they waited for the ice. The monstrosity lifted its foot ready to stomp on Radiant. As it's foot came down Radiant jumped out of the way and continued distracting it before the dogs reach them.

 

Looking past the dogs for a second Radiant could see the last Prototype beginning to awaken, it appeared to be slightly bigger then the others.

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Blizzard was getting a little tired, but knew he couldn't give up, Ever, "Ok Radiant I'm on it! Super Concentrated Ice Blast! Cover me! Since this guy is bigger, it's gonna take a little more time to cool him off! Watch out guys, more dogs coming in from the left side! Keep 'em offa me until I cool down the big one!" Blizzard then continues to blast the big one.


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"on it." caliber said, as he sprung into action. slashing at any dogs that came near him, he was gonna make sure they succeed. really, he just wanted to get at that mare...she took his sword, blind-sided ice blizzard...and she made them spill there weaknesses! no, that wont do. she needs to die. maybe he'll lope off her front leg, first...he chuckled in mid-battle at the thought.


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Blizzard had a long time to think to himself while he was freezing the big guy. He thought about all the friendly faces he knew in Ponyville, he thought about whether he'd see the pegasi control the weather, or getting sweet treats at Sugarcube Corner, or whether he'd ever again see the face of the mare he admired most, his crush, Rarity"No, I made it this far, there's now way I'm losing out now! Ok guys, big one's weakened! Take him out!"


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Icarus watched again as they all went towards the large one. The thing was probably impenetrable to his arrows, so he decided it was not the best idea to fire one at it. Instead, he watched over the two wounded ponies, and made sure no one else got seriously hurt. Blizzard was mostly in good shape, though he was afraid the ice pony may strain himself if he kept the spell up too long. And if Caliber did overuse his dark magic again, he wasn't sure if  there would be a way to immediately fix him up.


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Tyra turned and noticed the dogs moving in, and moved in with Caliber to bring them down while Blizzard worked on the giant monstrosity.

 

"Tell us when you are ready," she called, between swings, "and we shall deliver the final blow!"

 

The duo, almost effortlessly, kept the invading force at bay, hacking and slashing at every one with Tyra awaiting the signal to attack.


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Radiant continued distracting the monstrosity since now it had Tyra and Caliber behind him along with Blizzard in front of it.

 

Radiant looked back at the other monstrosity slowing lumbering toward them. As he returned his gaze to the current monstrosity he saw it's foot above in. With not enough time to dodge he fully charged his armor becoming immobilized.

 

The monstrosity stomped on Radiant with its foot stopping on his head creating a small craters under Radiant's hooves. "Tyra it's time for you to make that strike on his chest plate." He said as he had this beast's foot still on his head with it pushing down on him.


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Tyra perked up at Radiant's command, and looked over to see he was in trouble.

 

"Aye!" She yelled, turning right around and sprinting for the behemoth, leaping toward its chest. She angled her head and delivered one more powerful strike onto the plate.

 

Chunks of metal flew and dropped off the core, with the beast knocked a bit off balance from the force of the attack, giving Radiant room to escape.

 

"Deliver the final blow!" She yelled to him.


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Radiant could feel the monstrosity's foot lift ever so slightly, he quickly dispelled his armor and jumped out from under the beast.

 

He rose his sword thrusting his swords into the monstrosity's open chest plate cutting through the core. The monstrosity took one more step for Radiant before it fell over landing in front of his hooves.

 

Radiant stepped back awaiting Blizzard's ice dome. He had also begun breathing a bit more heavily after having to fully charge his armor.


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As the battle was rageing red light in corner of room started to flicker and one voice could be heard tru entire facility "Who have let this creatures out of their cage?! SOMEONE IS FIRED!!" than  voice comed down "Lower your weapons and get back to your cage peacefully.No one need to die."


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Blizzard had no choice he had to deploy the dome now or else he'd drop from exhaustion, "I *pant* got *pant* ya *pant*. Ice...hnnng Ice Dome...." Blizzard said with whatever strength he had left in him as he took a knee and said, "Guys...give....me a moment to regroup...ugh..." He then stays on a bended knee and puts his hoof to his head as if he had a headache.

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Radiant looked back at Blizzard for a split second and back at the dome.

 

The monstrosity inside detonated and the dome shattered, sending pieces of ice flying everywhere. Radiant cut a piece of ice away from him with one of his swords another piece was right behind it catching Radiant's leg causing him to crash into the ground.

 

He stood up ignoring the pain "Blizzard is too tired to help with the next monstrosity, it's up to us. We will lure it into the tunnel where we have room to retreat back in here!" He commanded looking at everyone.


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Blizzard wasn't hurt by his own ice shards, but was still too tired to use his powers, but he could stand up and walk, "I'll get outta the way first, I'm a sitting duck right here out in the open." Blizzard then slowly trots back to the hallway that led to their starting room, "ugh, what can we do Raid? We're pretty much screwed right about now, until Icarus can heal you and my stamina returns."


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Tyra snarled at the voice of the mare, and got next to Radiant as the ice dome shattered. Shards of sharp ice were shot toward the group, giving Tyra a few minor scratches.

 

"I am fine," she announced, and glanced over to Radiant as he announced their next plan, "Very well, we shall make it vulnerable and finish it off!"

 

She glared at the monstrosity, and awaited Radiant's signal.


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Voice started to yell "SO YOU DONT WHANT TO GET BACK PEACEFULLY?O IM GOING TO SHOW YOU NOW!!" the loud pushing and hitting could be heard thru the speakers on edge of the room "Do you smell that huh?I do i smell five burning ponies!" the pushing of a button could be heard tru speakers "Do you fell temperature rising huh?I know i do?" the voice got quaiter "Wait whay do I fell temperature rising?O F@*K wrong button!Give my a second to fix it but when i come back I WHANT TO SEE YOU BACK IN YOUR CAGE DO YOU HEAR MY?!" loud microphonics could be heard from speakers as the voice ended his sentence.


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Icarus heard the voice and couldn't help but snicker at his seeming inability to control what he considered " Pests" Then, out of the corner of his eye, he spotted an enemy attempting to get around to the side of the group. It looked like one of the dogs. Quickly, he fired a bolt from his weapon, nailing it's leg, causing it to fall over and yelp on the ground

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Blizzard was feeling sluggish as he needed more time, "Guys I'm almost ready to help you out again, just gimme like a couple minutes and I'll be right there!" truthfully Blizzard was still pretty tired, but he wanted to gather himself as quickly as possible so he could once again help out his teammates.


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Radiant yelled back toward Blizzard "keep your strength, we'll take care of the big guy! You focus on recovering!" He commanded as he ran forward toward their final enemy. "Everyone move to the sides of the tunnel! I'm going to draw it in there and Tyra I'll need you to help me when he's in the Tunnel!"

 

Radiant cast his armor and begun swinging his swords at the monstrosity to keep it.focused on him as he begun walking it back toward the tunnel.


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"Aye!" Tyra yelled, nodding as she took her place next to Radiant.

 

He began swinging his swords at the beast, drawing it toward the tunnel. She backed up with him, and decided to try and help herself.

 

"Come forth, metal demon!" She yelled at it, shaking a hoof toward it, "Your friends could not best us, what chance do you have?!"


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 Loud microphonics could be heard from speakers "Dont think i cant kill you right now.....I just don't want to.....There is a huge corridor and than the wall.Hehe.Too bad i cant come there i would kick your a@#." steam from pipe could be heard tru  speakers "AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!" voice screamed like a female "I mean Ahhhh" with strong male voice he scream again."You think this batle is litle fair.Just look at this molten idiots.Good think big guys can explode.Hehe.P3 rush in!" loud microphonics could be heard from speakers as the voice ended his sentence.Prototype from end of room start charging on our hero position "Yes master!" he screamed as he runned


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Blizzard started to get a lot worried, "Oh sh-- uh, Radiant! Radiant! That thing's charging right at us!!! What are we gonna do?! What's the plan?! Trust me, I'm fully recovered! Just tell us what to do to stop that thing! We can't afford to go down now!" Blizzard was just about ready to fight again, and he waited for Radiant's orders as to what to do. 

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