Is this Rarity up to standards?

[Silver Octave 35]

Here I am once again my fellow Bronies/ Pegasisters. I have yet ANOTHER drawing to show you all. It's a Rarity I drew in, hmm, about 30 minutes?

 

Well, I would appreciate tips on how to improve and what else I should draw. I appreciate all feedback, positive or negative, so feel free (Mostly because you are...) to post whatever you want!

Stay friendly my ponies

 

-SteelHooves

[Chigens and Kay 3,832]

Rarity.

[Dragonshy 2,305]

Aww that's really good!

[Akemi Homura 7,680]

Pretty good!

[Swordfishtrombone 384]

I dunno. What defines the standards of a Rarity? It is, however, a good piece. God I love this community.

 

Wait 30 minutes?! Thats amazing.

[DJ Cadence 58]

Really up to standards! Awwww I JUST WANNA HUG HER!!!!!!!!

[DrOphthalmos 497]

Beautiful Rarity. The only critique I would give is that her pupils look unequal. Her right eye looks more dilated than her left.

[Stretch 25]

I really like the picture you drew it very well. I thought you weren't allowed to post art in this thread that is what I was told at least...at any rate good drawing!

[Dj Manjaro 393]

You got her hair just right, kudos.

 

This is going to sound super nitpicky, but it's the little things that count the most so here it goes....

 

Her eyelashes seem to be a bit short, her pupils are very uneven, her right eye is too distorted, her horn feels like it's in the wrong place, and her ear seems a bit too close to her head.

 

Other than that, pretty good.

 

Remember, I nitpick because otherwise, how can you know what needs improvement?

[Silver Octave 35]

You got her hair just right, kudos.

 

This is going to sound super nitpicky, but it's the little things that count the most so here it goes....

 

Her eyelashes seem to be a bit short, her pupils are very uneven, her right eye is too distorted, her horn feels like it's in the wrong place, and her ear seems a bit too close to her head.

 

Other than that, pretty good.

 

Remember, I nitpick because otherwise, how can you know what needs improvement?

 

Thanks for the tips. I appreciate feedback, positive or negative

[ZomBrony 347]

her eyes seem kind of off, but I love the pose you have her in, and considering you only drew it in half an hour it's really good