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adventure Rise of the plunder vines part 1 the breakout


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Its afternoon in ponyville and the sun is high . Discord was taking a nap on Fluutershy's couch . Things were starting to get better for him after the Tirek incident the townsfolk believed he had gone back to being evil . He reassured them he wasn't abs he made mistake he even helped repair the town . As of now Discor's only problems were a few skeptics . He heard Twilight recently had trouble with a mare named Starlight Glimmer but he wasn't concerned how much harm could ste do with a name like that ? He finally closed his eyes and dreamed a wonderful dream about city where everyone was crazy . But he stated hearing strange voices calling to him voices he could have sworn he'd heard before . That night he heard them again only this time they were louder , angrier and yelling out " you betrayed us !"

 

He woke up screaming . Fluttershy timidly gets up and flies into his room . " um Discord are ok ?" She asks .

Discord nods " I'm fine Fluttershy it nothing .. Listen do you mind if tomorrow I go and speak with Celestia ?"

She shakes her head understanding that he had something private to speak to her about . He smiled warmly she always understood . The next day he went to Celestia's palace . Normally he'd randomly appear in front of her in a attempt to scare her but this was a extremely sad and serious matter so he chose to knock the door . A guard answered the door . They were surprised to see him but they let him in . At first upon seeing him Celestia smiles and rolls her eyes expecting him to say something funny or stupid . She notices the sad , grim expression on his face ." Hello Discord what brings you hear today ?" She asks with a worried look .

He sighs ." I've got something to discuss you . I had a dream last night and a heread the voices of my old friends ."

She gasps and has a flashback . ( cue flashback ) Back when Discord was young and equestria's chaotic era was just beginning . Discord got bored for the first time . He loved his chaos but very few others did they thought it was weird . So he traveled to other worlds and brought back lonely children of other species who were about his age and brought them to eqeustria . They became his friends , partners and family he even gifted them with lesser modified versions of his chaotic powers . Then when Celestia and Luna defeated him for the first time they were put in stone too . However due to Celestia thinking the ponies would fear their carnivorous diets and strange looks they hadn't been given a chance to reform .? Celestia had to admit making such a shallow choice was horrible judgement they hadn't even been as bad as Discord . It brought shame upon her to think of it .( end flashback )

 

She sighs and simply tells him " it you'd like Discord you may visit them at the garden ."

He nods sadly and promises to visit his old friends later . Meanwhile the cmc had just failed to get garden work cutie marks . Sweetie belle had gotten the hedge trimmers stuck to her mane . They here's girlish giggling behind them . All 3 rolled their eyes . It was Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon . their realtions with their rivals had gotten better now that they were a bit older . The bullying was down to a friendly teasing . Still it could get annoying ." Still no cutie marks huh blank flanks ?" Diamond laughs using her old line . Scootaloo sighs ." No and we're not in the mood right now ok ?! We've all had bad days " she growls . Silver Sooon isn't laughing " maybe you guys shouldn't go searching for your marks you should just let it happen naturally ." She suggests seriously .

Diamond Tiara snorts ." Oh please Silver these 3 are so impatient they can't even wait on the school lunch line !"

Scootaloo and Applebkoom grin mischievously. " maybe you'd like to see how impatient we are DT !" Applebloom says with a smirk and knocks her to ground to begin wrestling . Eventually the entire group gets pulled into this semi resolved grudge match . Tumbling through the garden until they reach the back where a colum of about 12 statues . The fillies set the first one flying backward and it hit the one behind it sending off a domino effect .

When the group stopped play fighting . They looked up and saw that they had freed 12 strange creatures most of them looked like dogs exept they looked like had more emotion . 3 others looked similar but were uglier and had yellow eyes . One was a deer , another one a fox finally a chubby creature with no fur and strange cloths and a blue blob creature . The pack looked around shortly and then noticed the ponies that freed them ." Well hello there kids ." One of the dogs and female said smiling .

The fillies shook in fear ." Who - who the heck are you ?" Applebloom asks .

The dog smiles again " I'm Dixie and these are my friends ."

She explains that they were around when Discord was in power . Which amazed the fillies . According to her the other dogs were named Angel , Scamp and Dodger , the fix was Todd , the deer was Ronno , the uglier things were called hyenas and were named Shenzi Banzai and Ed , the chubby thug was a human named Eric and the blob creature was named Bloo . " so Celestia put you in stone ? But why you guys seem really nice !" Sweetie Belle exclaims . She couldn't believe their fair ruler had imprusoned seemingly innocent creatures . " because she a birch . That why !"

Eric and Bloo muttered . Todd , Scamp and Ronno grumbled in agreement . But Dixie and Shenzi gaged them looks that shut them up . " we were victims of bad press . But now we've come to get her back and we want you to help ." Angel says as she and Dixie offer them their paws .

" what's in it for us ?" Diamond tiara asks ." Yeah if we're gonna help you overthrow the princesses we need a reason !" Scootaloo adds .

Dixie smirks ." Not only will Apllebloom , Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo get their cutie marks but all five of you will get power get power . Power so great that you'll surpass even your sisters and make them proud of ya . None of you will ever be sad or misrabke as you've been your whole lives ever again . You'll be completey free ."

They looked at each other . That did sound really nice the cutie marks , the power plus they'd all had sucky lives in their own ways perhaps it was time for a change . All five of them shook Dixie's paw .

 

For safety reasons the pack relocated to the everfree forest . Which was ok because they had lived their during Discord's reign . Dixie , Angel and Shenzi who were the smartest began to plan and located Discord . They would speak with him later . Eric and later Bloo began to whine that they were bored they were both smacked by Dixie . Eric was especially grumpy he wanted to avenge his best friend's Kenny's death . Kenny usually returned to life after dying but for some reason when he was killed by Celestia that didn't happen maybe the pervert's time had finally run out . As a few days passed and the deeper parts of the everfree

forest were soon filled with plunder seeds and chaos . Not long after the entire forest was consumed not many ponies notice because the forest was generally avoided . However Zecota noticed sadly before she could say anything ste was eaten by the hyenas out of hunger . Who couldn't beehive they're was an actual Zebra here . Dixie watched this unfold with Todd . Soon enough Discord got wind of fillies freeing his old friends . At first he was worried but they lied and told him they were just having fun . He didn't see the harm in a small bit of fun especially in a already wild place like the forest . So he let them be .

The pack and the filles all smirked watching him go knowing he'd retern and join in the next day . Now the pack was free ,the fillies had chaos powers and " fun " would rise again . Of coarse this game would te sudden death .

To be continued .

I hope you all enjoyed the first part . Just a couple things

The city Discird was drawing of was New York

These characters were selected for two reasons 1 they're all awesome . 2 they're all very good at causing mayhem and chaos .

The fillies have put aside their differences for the most part because DT and SS were saved from starlight glimmer by the cmc in this story . We will see starlight here eventually by the way !

Yes I know the crossover choices are we're but what can you expect they were picked by Discord blame him !

Anyway I hope you all liked it .

  • Brohoof 1

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this power is mine! It is my light. In brightest day or blackest night! I lay claim to all that falls with my sight!! To take what I want that is my right!
Fear the power of avarice. It consumes all who dare touch it.

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