Help With OC (Fan-Character)? I Can't Decide.

[Chip Circuit 1,842]

don't worry I got this

 

I'll begin typing a longer more detailed explanation since you like the base premise

also as another suggestion feel free to shoot it down because I know changing an OC's name can be a no no lol

 

but being chaos is such an on nose term, what about medley Disarray? or Disarray Medley. 

Edited May 9, 2015 by Chip Circuit

[orphaned account 17]

don't worry I got this

 

I'll begin typing a longer more detailed explanation since you like the base premise

also as another suggestion feel free to shoot it down because I know changing an OC's name can be a no no lol

 

but being chaos is such an on nose term, what about medley Disarray? or Disarray Medley. 

 

While I agree that Chaos stands out and might alert somepony and Disarray is a little more.... how should say this? Hidden? Not very obvious? Doesn't stick out like a sore thumb? I like Chaos better and it might scare ponies away from her but she has this aura around her that draws them near her and leads them to their doom.

[Chip Circuit 1,842]

Medley was brought into the world of Equestria by an unplanned pregnancy between an unicorn couple. Fearful of their names being tarnished the two abandoned their child at a local orphanage.

 

Medley grew up making friends with every foal around her in the orphanage learning she had a way with words to draw every pony's attention to her. She loved being the center of attention and yet the spotlight she didn't enjoy is the one that was aimed at the series of accidents that seemed to follow her. Where Medley went an accident was bound to happen, some began to think she was cursed. 

 

After years Medley was taught magic by the matron and as her magic grew so did the frequency and seriousness of the accidents that followed her. Eventually the fear the foals had of Medley spread to the Matron. To protect the orphanage and the other foals she kicked Medley out of the orphanage. 

 

Sad and alone Medley wandered the city trying to find shelter, when she bumped into a tall unicorn who looked down at her. "What are you doing out here little one?" he asked. Medley looked up at him with tears pooling in her eyes. "I was kicked out of the orphanage because the others fear me." she answered.

 

The unicorn offered to take her in, little did she know he saw her as a test experiment. After a long journey the two were far outside the city outside a small home in the forest. Once they enter he led her down some stairs that opened up in a large structure where it appeared to be a testing facility. Medley realized she came to a terrible place and tried to flee but she was grabbed and brought into the facility. 

 

Once inside she was strapped down in a table and some peculiar helmet was placed upon her head. A switch was flipped and magic could be seen pulsing from a large machine to the helmet. The unicorn will stand beside the table "don't worry, you will be the first of many. We intend to open the pony mind up to a maximum potential. We will then fill your mind with knowledge, imagine it being able to know everything the world has to offer!" Medley felt a surge inside her head as if she were dreaming and that dream was being stretched outward to encompass an entire universe, her head feeling like it was going to explode. "first we will begin with the simple stuff, such as the arts and theater. Let your mind prepare for the more complex knowledge." The unicorn explained.

 

As the arts finished flowing into her head Medley begun seeing magical knowledge and spells flowing into her mind. As she attempted to resist the flow of information she felt something 'snap' in her head. As if she weren't herself, suddenly the machine pumping this information into her spontaneously exploded. Sending these "scientists" flying across the room. Magical energy begun radiating from Medley, arcs of magic striking everything around her. Everything hit with this magic begun to act strangely, devices would begin floating to the ceiling. Equipment would fail in the most unexpected ways, substances changed between materials. 

 

As Medley struggled to get control of herself one final surge of magic radiated from her encompassing the entire facility. As the magic permeated into the walls and ceiling of the area begun cracking with the cracks filled with a bright white light. Soon the entire ground above the facility and the walls begun floating into the sky. With one final flash on the table Medley disappeared and all the rubble that was in the sky now came crashing to the earth below.

 

 

Medley found herself in a place she did not recognize and realized her mind felt broken but at the same time she felt a need to preform with so much knowledge of the arts flowing through her head. She ventured Equestria in a single direction until she finally found another city she didn't recognize. She begun living on the streets eventually she responded to audition postings around the city. She entered the world of the preforming arts and she ended up allowing the character she portrayed to take over her mind (part of her insanity, identity crisis when other identities are introduced.) For a while Medley would forget who she truly is. On stage she finally discovered he Cutie mark only to discover chaos stood at the end of the verse.

It's long I know, i'm sorry lol... hope you like it

Edited May 9, 2015 by Chip Circuit

[orphaned account 17]

Medley was brought into the world of Equestria by an unplanned pregnancy between an unicorn couple. Fearful of their names being tarnished the two abandoned their child at a local orphanage.

 

Medley grew up making friends with every foal around her in the orphanage learning she had a way with words to draw every pony's attention to her. She loved being the center of attention and yet the spotlight she didn't enjoy is the one that was aimed at the series of accidents that seemed to follow her. Where Medley went an accident was bound to happen, some began to think she was cursed. 

 

After years Medley was taught magic by the matron and as her magic grew so did the frequency and seriousness of the accidents that followed her. Eventually the fear the foals had of Medley spread to the Matron. To protect the orphanage and the other foals she kicked Medley out of the orphanage. 

 

Sad and alone Medley wandered the city trying to find shelter, when she bumped into a tall unicorn who looked down at her. "What are you doing out here little one?" he asked. Medley looked up at him with tears pooling in her eyes. "I was kicked out of the orphanage because the others fear me." she answered.

 

The unicorn offered to take her in, little did she know he saw her as a test experiment. After a long journey the two were far outside the city outside a small home in the forest. Once they enter he led her down some stairs that opened up in a large structure where it appeared to be a testing facility. Medley realized she came to a terrible place and tried to flee but she was grabbed and brought into the facility. 

 

Once inside she was strapped down in a table and some peculiar helmet was placed upon her head. A switch was flipped and magic could be seen pulsing from a large machine to the helmet. The unicorn will stand beside the table "don't worry, you will be the first of many. We intend to open the pony mind up to a maximum potential. We will then fill your mind with knowledge, imagine it being able to know everything the world has to offer!" Medley felt a surge inside her head as if she were dreaming and that dream was being stretched outward to encompass an entire universe, her head feeling like it was going to explode. "first we will begin with the simple stuff, such as the arts and theater. Let your mind prepare for the more complex knowledge." The unicorn explained.

 

As the arts finished flowing into her head Medley begun seeing magical knowledge and spells flowing into her mind. As she attempted to resist the flow of information she felt something 'snap' in her head. As if she weren't herself, suddenly the machine pumping this information into her spontaneously exploded. Sending these "scientists" flying across the room. Magical energy begun radiating from Medley, arcs of magic striking everything around her. Everything hit with this magic begun to act strangely, devices would begin floating to the ceiling. Equipment would fail in the most unexpected ways, substances changed between materials. 

 

As Medley struggled to get control of herself one final surge of magic radiated from her encompassing the entire facility. As the magic permeated into the walls and ceiling of the area begun cracking with the cracks filled with a bright white light. Soon the entire ground above the facility and the walls begun floating into the sky. With one final flash on the table Medley disappeared and all the rubble that was in the sky now came crashing to the earth below.

 

 

Medley found herself in a place she did not recognize and realized her mind felt broken but at the same time she felt a need to preform with so much knowledge of the arts flowing through her head. She ventured Equestria in a single direction until she finally found another city she didn't recognize. She begun living on the streets eventually she responded to audition postings around the city. She entered the world of the preforming arts and she ended up allowing the character she portrayed to take over her mind (part of her insanity, identity crisis when other identities are introduced.) For a while Medley would forget who she truly is. On stage she finally discovered he Cutie mark only to discover chaos stood at the end of the verse.

It's long I know, i'm sorry lol... hope you like it

Oh my god! I love it! I love it! Yes,my goodness, I love it, I'm gonna try to develop it a bit more, and such, I think I might make it a story! Oh my god, thank you! I probably wouldn't have been able to come up with this on my own, thank you for your ideas and feedback!

[Chip Circuit 1,842]

Oh my god! I love it! I love it! Yes,my goodness, I love it, I'm gonna try to develop it a bit more, and such, I think I might make it a story! Oh my god, thank you! I probably wouldn't have been able to come up with this on my own, thank you for your ideas and feedback!

 

Anytime happy to help, I kind of got caught up in writing it out lol

 

Glad you love it though

Edited May 9, 2015 by Chip Circuit