Spring Fanfic Proofreading/Dev

[North 288]

Hey, guys. North here.

I was wondering if any of you wanted to proofread, make suggestions, or help me develop the plot the "Spring has Sprung" fanfic contest. I'm not sure if I'm even supposed to ask for help  , but I'm doing it anyways. I am opening the proofreading/suggesting/development to everybody. It's based on Google Docs, and I believe that your identity is hidden when you read a public document, so there shouldn't be any worry there. 

 

Wish me luck, and feel free to drop by my Google Doc if you want to make some suggestions, or just simply want to watch me write my fanfic. 

 

By the way, this is FIRST EVER FANFIC. I've never done a fanfic. On any subject. So, I need all the help I can get.

 

Google Doc (it should be shared to everybody, so don't bother asking permission to view it.)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HZbZ4uGcw-W6kCRjhG4DeoZcgaJFXOHbZh9JV5Ftw1M/edit?usp=sharing

 

~North

 

UPDATE: I forgot to add the ability to comment on my fanfic. You can now comment (NOT EDIT!) on my fanfic to make suggestions. Please, NO SWEAR WORDS, and BE RESPECTFUL to me and the others viewing my W.I.P fanfic. Thank you!

Edited June 3, 2015 by norcalforneigh

[Chaton 3,765]

I'll take a look tomorrow.

[IceBeerG 55]

Can you tell at least rules of this contest?

[North 288]

Can you tell at least rules of this contest?

https://mlpforums.com/topic/128120-poniverse-spring-has-sprung-contest/

The rules are way too long. Here's a link.