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Can you help me with criticism?


Darkhinata15

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Hello there friends!!

 

I opened a really tiny shop on Etsy and I know that getting known takes time, but can you guys look it over and tell me whats wrong with my items?? 

I really want to know if the description is bad, or even if the pictures are truly that terrible. I would like constructive criticism and some opinions on where I can advertise my shop. May you please help me??

 

The link shall be right here; please tell me what can be improved!!

 

https://www.etsy.com/shop/NightTimeCreator?ref=hdr_shop_menu 

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Well, because you asked...

 

Your shop honestly looks unfinished.

 

The Cons/Mistakes:

 

No shop banner/matching icon.

No shop policies, info on returns, payments, shipping, refunds, etc.

Items have little information; what will your customer be buying, exactly? How are they made?

What type of candle wax? Soy? No palm oil? Toxic or non toxic? Candle wax, beeswax, oridinary craft wax (big no)?

What type of wick? Toxic or not? Clean burning, cotton, or...? How many hours?

The photos + location/background need a lot of work. Bad lighting & shadows, distracting/off-topic stuff in the background, etc.

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