ooc AES: The Lost City [OOC]

[Unicorncob 5,703]

Hope I didn't go overboard with that post XD

It's made better by how I picture her doing the whole drawn out "But grandmaaaaaaaaaa" thing

[Chaton 3,766]

It's made better by how I picture her doing the whole drawn out "But grandmaaaaaaaaaa" thing

XD

 

Technically Great Grandma but that would ruin the flow

 

It was short, but I still loved writing that post

[DeadAccount 4,604]

It's made better by how I picture her doing the whole drawn out "But grandmaaaaaaaaaa" thing

Indeed

[Chaton 3,766]

Indeed

 

Derp Derpy Derp Derp

[DeadAccount 4,604]

@@JonasDarkmane I have a quick question before I type, do Rave and Aqua already know each other?

[Child Of Darkness 285]

You do understand that when I use single quotation marks it's for thoughts right?

 

' ' for thinking.

 

" " for speaking.

 

I didn't say the first paragraph of the last post out loud.

[DeadAccount 4,604]

You do understand that when I use single quotation marks it's for thoughts right?

' ' for thinking.

" " for speaking.

I didn't say the first paragraph of the last post out loud.

Again, oops I really should've gotten more sleep >.<

[Child Of Darkness 285]

Again, oops I really should've gotten more sleep >.<

That wasn't really directed at you.

[Chaton 3,766]

Lol

 

Y'all just

[Unicorncob 5,703]

You do understand that when I use single quotation marks it's for thoughts right?

 

' ' for thinking.

 

" " for speaking.

 

I didn't say the first paragraph of the last post out loud.

 

Apologies, I saw them as proper quote marks

I'll read more carefully next time

[Lordav 3,427]

Holy mother of smokes... was gone for only 1.5hrs..... got catching up to do =p

[Pucksterv 4,508]

You do understand that when I use single quotation marks it's for thoughts right?

 

' ' for thinking.

 

" " for speaking.

 

I didn't say the first paragraph of the last post out loud.

 

Actually when a character is in thoughts the best way to write that is like this..in italic. Not that I'm saying your method isn't right but it's a bit more confusing...

The entire thing happened a biit way to fast for Lordy to have time to react. By the time he had managed to stand up, everyone was congratulating the newcommer which... mind you... had a fish tale... was she one of those creatures that lured ships and their crews to their doom. If she was... what was she doing so close to shore... and why save somebody. Nevertheless, he was a bit suspicious. 

 

"Ready to follow orders" Lordy stood up and saluted when the captain informed of the leaving.

 

I believe when Aqua is on land her tale is not visible, she has normal hoofs like everyone at this moment

[Lordav 3,427]

 

Actually when a character is in thoughts the best way to write that is like this..in italic. Not that I'm saying your method isn't right but it's a bit more confusing...

 

 

I believe when Aqua is on land her tale is not visible, she has normal hoofs like everyone at this moment

 

but when she got out of the water.... wouldnt u see it befor they turned to hooves?

[Pucksterv 4,508]

but when she got out of the water.... wouldnt u see it befor they turned to hooves?

She was surrounded by water, you have must have a good eye then. Still it's for Aqua to decide if anyone saw it or not

Edited July 30, 2015 by Pucksterv

[DeadAccount 4,604]

@@Pucksterv

 

Aqua's tail soon fades away when she is on land. It doesn't take long. Although I forgot to mention that her mane has some seashells and small starfish decorated into it

Edited July 30, 2015 by TwilightAqua

[Lordav 3,427]

She was surrounded by water after all, but it's for Aqua to decide if anyone saw it or not

@, 

 

shed the light =P

[Pucksterv 4,508]

shed the light =P

Aqua's tail soon fades away when she is on land. It doesn't take long. Although I forgot to mention that her hair has some seashells and small starfish decorated into it

Edited July 30, 2015 by Pucksterv

[Chaton 3,766]

Her tail fin waved a bit in an excited way.

I'm pretty sure it's visible.

[Lordav 3,427]

 

shed the light =P

Aqua's tail soon fades away when she is on land. It doesn't take long. Although I forgot to mention that her hair has some seashells and small starfish decorated into it

 

but it isnt instant... so cant u see the change

 

(Im just trying to defend my laziness of editing)

[DeadAccount 4,604]

Yes, her tail is visible at the moment is what I'm trying to say

[Lordav 3,427]

Yes, her tail is visible at the moment is what I'm trying to say

HUZZAH! I DONT HAVE TO EDIT! 

[Unicorncob 5,703]

 

 

"It is splashing to meet you Rave Darkmane."

 

 

That just made me think of this

 

[Chaton 3,766]

HAHA! Get it?! SPLASHING! Because we're at sea!! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!" laughed Ace.

We're not at sea :/

But before anyone could answer, Scarlett's eyes widened as she remembered something. She says quietly to herself "I knew I recognised that name, this needs to stop happening..."

 

She turns to Caramel and says quietly to her "I think we should have Aqua on our crew."

FORESHADOWING

Edited July 30, 2015 by Vinyl Scratchy DJ

[Littlecandylulu903 415]

We're not at see :/

Well we're near it which is what Ace meant

 

Does it really warrant an edit?

[Pucksterv 4,508]

We're not at sea :/

 

FORESHADOWING

We are at sea actually...