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  On 2015-07-30 at 1:11 PM, Unicorncob said:

It's made better by how I picture her doing the whole drawn out "But grandmaaaaaaaaaa" thing :P

XD

 

Technically Great Grandma but that would ruin the flow

 

It was short, but I still loved writing that post :derp:


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  On 2015-07-30 at 1:31 PM, Child Of Darkness said:

You do understand that when I use single quotation marks it's for thoughts right?

' ' for thinking.

" " for speaking.

I didn't say the first paragraph of the last post out loud.

Again, oops :o I really should've gotten more sleep >.<

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  On 2015-07-30 at 1:31 PM, Child Of Darkness said:

You do understand that when I use single quotation marks it's for thoughts right?

 

' ' for thinking.

 

" " for speaking.

 

I didn't say the first paragraph of the last post out loud.

 

Apologies, I saw them as proper quote marks :adorkable:

I'll read more carefully next time


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  On 2015-07-30 at 1:31 PM, Child Of Darkness said:

You do understand that when I use single quotation marks it's for thoughts right?

 

' ' for thinking.

 

" " for speaking.

 

I didn't say the first paragraph of the last post out loud.

 

Actually when a character is in thoughts the best way to write that is like this..in italic. Not that I'm saying your method isn't right but it's a bit more confusing...

  On 2015-07-30 at 1:45 PM, Lordav said:

The entire thing happened a biit way to fast for Lordy to have time to react. By the time he had managed to stand up, everyone was congratulating the newcommer which... mind you... had a fish tale... was she one of those creatures that lured ships and their crews to their doom. If she was... what was she doing so close to shore... and why save somebody. Nevertheless, he was a bit suspicious. 
 
"Ready to follow orders" Lordy stood up and saluted when the captain informed of the leaving.
 
I believe when Aqua is on land her tale is not visible, she has normal hoofs like everyone at this moment
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  On 2015-07-30 at 1:57 PM, Pucksterv said:

 

Actually when a character is in thoughts the best way to write that is like this..in italic. Not that I'm saying your method isn't right but it's a bit more confusing...

 
 
I believe when Aqua is on land her tale is not visible, she has normal hoofs like everyone at this moment

 

but when she got out of the water.... wouldnt u see it befor they turned to hooves?


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  On 2015-07-30 at 1:58 PM, Lordav said:

but when she got out of the water.... wouldnt u see it befor they turned to hooves?

She was surrounded by water, you have must have a good eye then. Still it's for Aqua to decide if anyone saw it or not

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  On 2015-07-30 at 2:00 PM, Pucksterv said:

She was surrounded by water after all, but it's for Aqua to decide if anyone saw it or not

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shed the light =P


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  On 2015-07-30 at 2:00 PM, Lordav said:

shed the light =P

  On 2015-07-30 at 2:00 PM, TwilightAqua said:
Aqua's tail soon fades away when she is on land. It doesn't take long. Although I forgot to mention that her hair has some seashells and small starfish decorated into it :adorkable:
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  On 2015-07-30 at 2:01 PM, Pucksterv said:

 

  On 2015-07-30 at 2:00 PM, Lordav said:

shed the light =P

  On 2015-07-30 at 2:00 PM, TwilightAqua said:
Aqua's tail soon fades away when she is on land. It doesn't take long. Although I forgot to mention that her hair has some seashells and small starfish decorated into it :adorkable:

 

but it isnt instant... so cant u see the change

 

(Im just trying to defend my laziness of editing)


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  On 2015-07-30 at 2:04 PM, TwilightAqua said:

Yes, her tail is visible at the moment is what I'm trying to say ^_^

HUZZAH! I DONT HAVE TO EDIT!  B)


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  On 2015-07-30 at 2:10 PM, Littlecandylulu903 said:

HAHA! Get it?! SPLASHING! Because we're at sea!! AHAHAHAHAHAHA!" laughed Ace.

We're not at sea :/

  On 2015-07-30 at 2:08 PM, Vinyl Scratchy DJ said:

But before anyone could answer, Scarlett's eyes widened as she remembered something. She says quietly to herself "I knew I recognised that name, this needs to stop happening..."

 

She turns to Caramel and says quietly to her "I think we should have Aqua on our crew."

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